Unholy war (Open, Vampire/Lycan)

Bardiche

Really Really Experienced
Joined
Feb 5, 2007
Posts
485
(Looking for fellow writers for my Vampire/Lycan thread that take place in Los Angeles. Need one female to take part of the woman and then either vampires or lycans. Make your first post as an introduction. Don't need to give away to much of your character right away if you don't want to. PM me with questions.)

He had followed the small group for twenty minutes now. Now he had lost the trail of the three men. He cursed softly as he entered the back alley of a night club called Hot Vixen. Suddenly the scent of blood reached his nostrils. He could almost taste the metallic on his tongue. He cursed, loud this time as he started to move fast in the direction of the smell. He could only hope that whoever was bleeding wasn't gonna be the second victim of the night. He had been to late to save the first woman. He had found her abused and broken body in a back alley just like this one.

He walked around a corner and there they were. One of them held the woman still as the other two was feasting. He could see her mouth move but there came no sound from her as one of her attackers shredded her blouse with his hands. His mouth was on her neck and he violently drew her blood into his mouth. The third was sucking from her inner thigh as his hand was far up under her skirt. It didn't take much imagination to realise what his hand was doing. His steel grey eyes took in the scene as his hand brushed back his black hair. His hyperactive senses told him that there was no more vampires close by.

The hunter had a thin smile on his lips as he knew the three outcasts was to busy abusing the woman to realise they had a spectator. He could see that the woman still had life in her as she twitched around in the grip of her captors. He felt the surge of power as he slowly stepped out from the shadows. He had never liked hunting down his own kindred but these three could not be allowed to live.
 
Destiny tried to fight the grips of her captors but it was no use, they proved to strong the reason soon showing its self as they started to feast on her blood. 'Vamires?!?' she started to panic and tried to thrash even harder but the only thing that it accomplished was to make her blood run faster and for them to feed harder.

Destiny was a petite woman skilled in the arts of kempo and and aikido and yet she found that nothing she had learned in any of those classes had helped when she really needed it. Tears started to stream down her face as one of the vampires head went between her legs and he started to touch her. She felt shamed at being used like this and felt utterly useless, a feeling that Destiny hated. The vampire at her head had his hand entwined in her raven black hair was was pulling her hair, exposing her neck farther for the other vampire. The one who fed from her neck roughly pulled and twisted her breast, mauling them to his own pleasure.

Destiny tried to call out but nothing came out of her mouth, she was going to die like this, fed on by these disgusting creatures, her lifeless body left in the alley with the rats. This was not how she wanted to die, her resolve to live filled her body as she got her mouth to form one weak and trembling word. "Help." Her body started to feel very heavy and there was black dots that started to dance in her vision yet Destiny wasn't going to give up. "Help!" this time it was louder giving her hope that maybe she wasn't as bad as she thought she was.

"Shut up bitch." the vampire that held her by the hair back handed her across the mouth and Destiny could taste blood. The hit hadn't made the spots in her visions any better either, they now danced and multiplied feeding on what little conscious she had in her.
 
The vampire holding her in the hair was the first seeing him. The grin faded as he dropped her so she fell on the ground, much to the irritation of the other vampires. "What the fuck?" The one that had his mouth and teeth's on her thigh exclaimed.

"Shut the hell up. It is Lorenzo" The name got the other vampires to pay less attention to the woman. They stared at the lone man who stood in front of them dressed in jeans and black leather jacket.

Lorenzo smiled thinly as he met their stare with one of his own. He narrowed his eyes as he looked down at the woman at their feet.

"You know the penalty for breaking the laws." He said matter of factly. "Especially you Andrew." He nodded to the vampire that had been the first to see him. "Being a hunter and all and now being stupid to boot." He took one step closer and smiled as they moved away from the woman.

Lorenzo sat down on one knee beside her and lay one hand on her shoulder. His eyes didn't waver from the three vampires. He was a little concerned with how much blood they had stolen from her.

"You will be fine." He said softly as he stood up again. Just then one man and one woman came out from hiding. Lorenzo smiled and nodded to the three outcasts who were backing away with fear on their faces. Without a word the two newcomers ran at them and a short but brutal fight started. A fight that the outcasts had no way of winning.

Lorenzo turned to the woman again. "Sorry about this miss. But you are safe now." He gently touched the marks on her neck.
 
A young woman stepped out of the shadows, calmly. Yet, in the way she moved, there was a restrained power. The air around her seemed to be still, almost solid and heavy as she moved. Her, and the other man that came out opposite her, blocked the alleyway.

The woman moved towards the three leeches. She was tall, with a short mane of blonde hair that brushed the collar of her thick, white sweater. Her purple skirt swished gently over her stockings and her black shoes as she walked, as if she was oblivious to the danger in front of her. Her gaze was centered on Lorenzo and the young woman, the three vampires' murderous and desperate expressions not fazing her at all. Her red eyes shined with an almost metallic glint in the darkness, her visage offering a gentle smile to the night.

The first to attack went right after her, perhaps judging her a lesser opponent. He was proven terribly wrong when a red flash exploded in the young woman's eyes, and the leech's arm, out-stretched in an attack stance as he reached for her neck, broke instantly in three places. As he fell, the woman leaned over him with a delicate gesture, like a lover about to embrace her beloved. An anti-natural sense of slowness surrounding the two as she covered his mouth with her left hand and slashed his throat open with her right, destroying his trachea even before his body touched the ground. He couldn't even scream when the monster, with methodical efficiency, started breaking his limbs with simple gestures of her hands. Blood seeped out from the numerous wounds where the bones popped out of the skin, but the woman was already aware of that inconvenience and stepped over him to face the two remaining opponents.

"Really, Lorenzo... you should be more of a gentleman, and eliminate one of these pests at least before attending to your lady in distress..."

Adianne's voice, fragile like crystal, echoed almost imperceptibly in the air as she resumed her advance. Her smile remained the same even as she left a bloody, trembling mess behind her.
 
Last edited:
OOC: Velisa is a female vampire, as well as a moderately powerful sorceress. She is well over 500 years old, and lost count long ago. She is curvaceous and has a siren like nature that can captivate any unaware creature, and even a few who are aware. She is rather short at 4'11" and has very little regard for humans, as they have been "food" for centuries. Ironically, she fell in love with a human, long ago. She had a rank of second in command for several decades, before her "sin." Her magic is powerful enough that most people wont notice her unless they are either looking directly at her, or looking for her specifically. As such, she has been a powerful spy for her group, and knows many of their foes and friends quite well.

Velisa watched from the shadows, unfazed by what was happening. She had lured the poor girl here, as well as the other, she had been charged to test if these were worthy of joining her group. There had been 5 originally, but she had "punished" the two who had shown such distasteful lack of restraint, burning them from the inside out. It appeared as if the remaining three hadn't learned their lesson.

When the hunter had appeared, she had sighed heavily, these were likely lost.

She was ancient, and had learned much in her nearly 500 years as a vampire, and had risen quite high in the ranks. Sadly, she had committed the cardinal sin of falling in love with a human, and was being punished herself, being forced to do recruit training.

She had smiled at the sight of Lorenzo, he had quite a price on his head, and if she could kill him, it might almost be enough to redeem her of her sin. Then the others appeared "Damn!" She might have managed against one, or even two of those, but three to one, she would very likely loose that battle.

She quickly snapped the life from the remaining two vampires with a burst of flame, they were useless, and were a danger to her now. If they had thought to capture one of them, they would likely see her in their minds, as well as the man who had turned them.

She sent two quick bolts of fire, one at Lorenzo and one at Adianne, then disappeared with a *POP*.
 
Destiny

Destiny would have flinched at the touch if her had the energy to, tho she was sure that she did but her body made no movements. As the vampires had broken from her, Destiny started to feel her body. She was in pain and every part of her hurt, tho she couldn't understand why. The vampires only had her at her thigh, her neck and by her hair. Pain throbbed between her legs where the vampire had bitten her and her neck was on fire. She went to touch her head and found that when she moved it made her whole body twitch. She was sure that it was bleeding from the violent grip the vampire had on her hair and from the fall, landing on her head.

"Saved me?" her voice was once again weak and barely a whisper as she tried feebly to looked up into her savior's face. Hard to do when your visions is obstructed with blackness and what little you can see waved in and out of focus. She tried to sit up and the movement had her nauseated with a strong need to throw up.

She could hear voices, some be knew belonged to the vampires the other belonged to the man that had saved her. That's right she was saved, Destiny smiled, she was saved. She wouldn't die here in the alley to be left for the rats. She closed her eyes and was glad for the pain, it meant she was alive, something she hadn't expected in this turn of events.
 
Back
Top