ColetteJulie
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- Dec 17, 2015
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Jeremy was introduced to Jenny by her sister's boyfriend Keith. Janine told her that he was nobody she should get involved with. He was trouble and he 'used' crack.
Jeremy immediately began flirting with Jenny, who wasn't interested at all. She didn't even think he'd make a good slave. Jeremy persisted, the more she ignored him the more he wanted her.
This went on for several weeks until one night, a high and drunk Jeremy decided that he was going to teach the object of his affections - a lesson.
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I stopped because it sounded like the background plot of 50 shades to me. Jenny is a domme/mistress/mommy. But there is no significant age difference between her and Jeremy. Her attitude and reasoning is that of a Domme.
Jeremy's plan obviously blows up in his face and he realises that he's no match for Jenny when it comes to sex. Jeremy is troubled and comes from a troubled childhood with an abusive father. He thinks everything can be solved with violence initially.
He is intrigued by Jenny who seems to have it together. The next part of the plot is gone, but they enter a relationship first as equals and friends. As the trust builds Jeremy becomes more submissive and eventually tells Jenny "if you order me not to do it, I won't" speaking about his need for drugs.
So Jenny becomes his mistress. She teaches him that he already has a reaction to pain and pleasure and sadism and masochism but these need not be dangerous reactions. (That's where it goes 50 shades for me.)
Please feel free to take it and run with it.
Jeremy immediately began flirting with Jenny, who wasn't interested at all. She didn't even think he'd make a good slave. Jeremy persisted, the more she ignored him the more he wanted her.
This went on for several weeks until one night, a high and drunk Jeremy decided that he was going to teach the object of his affections - a lesson.
-------------------------------------------------------
I stopped because it sounded like the background plot of 50 shades to me. Jenny is a domme/mistress/mommy. But there is no significant age difference between her and Jeremy. Her attitude and reasoning is that of a Domme.
Jeremy's plan obviously blows up in his face and he realises that he's no match for Jenny when it comes to sex. Jeremy is troubled and comes from a troubled childhood with an abusive father. He thinks everything can be solved with violence initially.
He is intrigued by Jenny who seems to have it together. The next part of the plot is gone, but they enter a relationship first as equals and friends. As the trust builds Jeremy becomes more submissive and eventually tells Jenny "if you order me not to do it, I won't" speaking about his need for drugs.
So Jenny becomes his mistress. She teaches him that he already has a reaction to pain and pleasure and sadism and masochism but these need not be dangerous reactions. (That's where it goes 50 shades for me.)
Please feel free to take it and run with it.
