lovecraft68
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I want to see you write noir. Well, not SEE you write it, but see the noir you'd write.I want to see what happens when thriller/horror gets hard-boiled. I want to see psychopaths in Chandleresque curtains of rain, stubbing out their cigarettes and making nihilistic remarks.
If it sounds like it couldn't work, consider these Raymond Chandler quotes:
“I was as hollow and empty as the spaces between stars.” – The Long Goodbye
“The plants filled the place, a forest of them, with nasty meaty leaves and stalks like the newly washed fingers of dead men.” – The Big Sleep
“A few locks of dry, white hair clung to his scalp, like wild flowers fighting for life on a bare rock.” – The Big Sleep
“He looked about as inconspicuous as a tarantula on a slice of angel food.” – Farewell, My Lovely
See? It could work. Plunk down one of your psychologically fractured characters in the midst of that and what would you get? A story I'd like to read.
Lit needs a mystery category.
I've thought about it, I flirted with Noir a bit in one of my novels, but it didn't quite have the true grit and awesome euphemisms, I lean towards snarky one liners. Its on my list, right after a bodice ripper romance....okay, that's a joke...seriously.
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