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AuroraDreams

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If I post a little something that I'm working on could I get some input?
Right now its very very rough.
But it's a gift to my husbnad, and I just had the idea today to do this, I want to give it to him tomorrow.

I've been writing it in my journal when I had a quiet moment today. Right now its mostly me trying to remember the details as they come to me. Its not even finished. But I'm at the point where some valued input would be of use.
 
it will take me a while to type out from my journal, so please bare with me.

I think what I'm really wanting is maybe some good questions to ask myself while working on this. Do you know what I mean?
 
Hi Aurora. A better place to post it would be in the SDC. You will get more guided critique and advice there.

-Colly
 
Colleen Thomas said:
... A better place to post it would be in the SDC. You will get more guided critique and advice there.
Or you could use one or more Volunteer Editors. Click here and pick the one, or ones, which best suit your needs. They are supposed to reply in 72 hours.

Please don't pick me unless you have already mastered the use of a spell checker.
 
I've dcided to work on it more before I post it. That's how rough it is.
I just have problems developing my stories, and that's why I was wanting some help/advice.
As far as actual editors, its not really ready for an editor to look at much.
It was last night, mostly in jot note form.
I had some friends take a look at it, and got some advice.

Its the story of the night I lost my virginity (8 years ago tonight) to my then boyfriend, now husband.

I want to give it to him either tonight or tomorrow. Tomorrow still counts as this anniversary cause really it was after midnight. LOL

Anyways, I had better get some coffee in me.
 
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