Two sexy girls and a momma's boy

TexMan324

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I was thinking a variation of Two Girls and a Gentleman by seductivequill, but instead of a wealthy independent man in a suit, it's a man in shirt and shorts who lives with his mom.

The 30yo man goes walking one afternoon and spots two sexy girls in their early 20s chatting on the park bench. He goes up to compliment on their hair and ask if he can sit with them. The girls accept and he manages to strikes a convo with them. He asks if they can come over to his house. The girls initially decline his invite, but ultimately reverse their decision after he says 'please' and go over to his house after feeling pity for him, assuming he hasn't had much luck with women.

At home, the guy freshens up with body spray before rejoining the two girls in the living room. He attempts to put on some music, but unfortunately grabs the wrong remote to turn on TV which was still playing a threesome porno from the porn app he forgot to exit from before leaving the house. The guy admits to his flaws and feels ashamed of being a creepy pervert. He even tells them that he hasn't had much luck with women in a long time and is still a virgin, and adds that his house is actually his mom's house and that he still lives with his mom.

The guy begins to cry in front of the girls, already knowning he blew it with them and all women, but something unexpected happens. The two girls hug him and kiss his cheeks, thanking him for being honest and apologetic with him. The girls tell the guy he's the sweetest guy they ever met and that they also like to watch porn, even admitting they have experimented having lesbian sex with each other recently while watching a lesbian porno. The girls them strip him and each other naked before moving back to the sofa where they have a threesome together.

After having orgasmed, the three take a nap together on the sofabed, the girls snuggling their nude bodies against his, his arms around the two girls. Later that day, they continued watching porn while cuddling with each other when his mom comes home from work. She sees his son and the two girls naked together and couldn't help but strip nude herself. The mother asks the girls if they would like to stay for dinner, to which they replied, "We'd more than love to!"

Now the guy can either have a job but lives with his mom to cut living costs, or be mentally challenged and looking for some compassion from someone other than his mother, or a little bit of both.
 
I get that in erotica there is a suspension of disbelief, but this idea is pushing that too far. The MC comes off as a complete loser. A woman might pity fuck a close friend down on his luck, but never a stranger who approached them on the street, much less two women. I'm not normally critical by nature, but this is a big "nope" for me.
 
I get that in erotica there is a suspension of disbelief...

Yes, it's unapologetical wishfulfilment porn. The hookup is the hard part. However, it only lost me when... well, mom stripping would need some work on motivations. But maybe she's (secretly?) a nudist, or the son try to claim his new friends are, trying to (naively and unsuccessfully) conceal what happened, but mom buys into the gaslighting and kinda sorta things she would make the guests more comfortable by stripping along.

As it is, it's one of the most realistic pitches this poster had dropped here, I think.
 
Now the guy can either have a job but lives with his mom to cut living costs, or be mentally challenged and looking for some compassion from someone other than his mother, or a little bit of both.

Or, he's from a culture where the son (usually the oldest) is expected to live with parents forever to care for them and inherit the generational property giving the family the name, and bring the bride home. It's the cultural norm in large parts of the world. The US semi-nomadic lifestyle is rather an outlier.

It doesn't mean he's rich or anything. However, the girls could as well appraise the property as something worth to compete for.
 
I get that in erotica there is a suspension of disbelief, but this idea is pushing that too far. The MC comes off as a complete loser. A woman might pity fuck a close friend down on his luck, but never a stranger who approached them on the street, much less two women. I'm not normally critical by nature, but this is a big "nope" for me.
I agree. So maybe some changes to make it more belivable.

Two girls are in relationship. They also like cocks, but for some reason they want to hide it. So they seek out momma boys because they're so happy the can fuck someone that they won't spil the beans, unlike successful men who aren't so easy to control.
 
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