Twisted Sister ? Mother/Son both like Heavy Metal ....

NASCARaddicted

Girls-with-Glasses Lover
Joined
Jul 9, 2002
Posts
2,130
Maybe I will write this on my own, if I can find the time, but if anyone will be inspired, feel free to write it, too.

so what about this:

in 1985, there is this young girl Beth (I guess somewhere between 18 and 21). She loves to listen to Heavy Metal (bands like Twisted Sister, Judas Priest and Slayer). And she loves to go out to party, drink some booze, date boys and stuff like that ....

She get's pregnant by her boyfriend. She really loves him and wants to marry him, but then, he dies in a car accident.

So now, Beth is on her own now, with her newborn son. She loves her son, but she never gets over the fact, that he has no father, and the fact that she lost her big love.
Many times, she sits at home and listens to the old records from the 80s (but of course, she also likes some new stuff). When she listens to this old records, she thinks back about the fun that she had with her boyfriend in the mid 80s. Sometimes, she even starts to cry, because she lost her big love ....

In the past, her son Mike (18) never noticed that, since he was in school, when Beth was in a mood like that. But today, he came home early ....

"Hey Mom, what's up, you look so sad ?"

"Well, I have been thinking about your father .... but then, I guess I should get over it. But everytime when I hear this record, I become really sad, because it was the favorite record of your father ...."

"It sounds really good. What's the name of that song ?"

"The name is S.M.F. from the band Twisted Sister"

"So what does S.M.F. stand for ?"

"It's "Sick Motherfucker. But I guess, none of the guys really would fuck their own mother ...."

"Well, if they are sick enough ... but I guess it also depends on their mothers. Probably, their mothers aren't as young and cool as my mom is ...."

Beth grins at him "So that would mean, you wouldn't mind fucking your own mother ?"

They talk for some more about "motherfucking". Finally, the mother says: "I know another song. Maybe you will like that, too." So now, she either plays "Breaking the Law" from Judas Priest or "Let's break the Law" from the Anti Nowhere League

And so, they both decide to to it ... breaking the law ....

Does that sound interesting ?
 
Sure....she gets immediately impregnated, bloated with breastmilk but gives it up to her son or other guys and curious / aroused girls that fit the Mom's sexual 'type' - wherever, whenever. Mom & Young Son / Baby-Father travel around to more concerts, getting stoned a bit. They end up in foursomes, swaps. "Buddy-fucking" each other & others whenever the mood occurs.
 
can't you make it a good band like the rolling stones? i know it's more hardrock then metal, but i for one wouldn't want to read a story about twisted sister fans. no offense, i'm just music nazi. listen to what i say, or it's off to the hair metal camps with you.



otherwise, i guess it could work it just needs some more tweaking.
 
I love hair metal...but unfortunately the idea for this story struck me in such a foul way that it made my kidneys hurt.

No offense but it just seems entirely unrealistic. I can't help but think the idea would give Dee Snyder himself the creeps.
 
Back
Top