Trying to write a story for my wife

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[Norajane]

Hi Scaly! Can you tell a little more about what you had in mind?

Are you looking for examples of stories where the characters aren't named? Do you have a specific type of scene in mind?

More important, does this involve slippery sex?

 

[Boxlicker101]

that will be about her and I. I don't want to use our names; i'm thinking I would like to use he and she instead to add a bit of mystery. it will basicly be about actions and feelings from my perspective, with a sexual nature to it.

I was wondering if anyone has written or seen a similar story, or can offer any suggestions. I'm not sure to what extent there will be dialogue.

Any ideas would be appreciated.

Thanks.
Scalywag

Hi, Scalywag.
I have written a lot of my first person stories for individual female readers. I use their descriptions and names and sometimes I include distinctive features such as tattoos. Before I do that, though, I make sure it's OK with them.

Sometimes I write a story using names and descriptions etc., then write a different version and post that in Lit. The one I post uses different names and other facts so nobody could recognize her and I send her the story with the correct names. Some people like to read about themselves, and it's fun to do.

If you wanted to, you could do that, write a story about you and your wife, using names, etc. and share it, and post one here using ficticious names.

 

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[Stella_Omega]

It took me a little while to find it, but here's one I read recently
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=236803

 

[LadyJeanne]

I'm sure Mrs. Scalywag will love whatever you write for her. Just the fact that you wrote a sexy story starring the two of you will be a turn on.

I've written some nameless stories. These are from a woman's perspective, so probably not totally on the mark with what you're looking for, but they're heavy on perspective and the thoughts leading up to and during the event.

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Morning Glory

Good luck with the writing, and have fun! If you run into snags or needs some writing advice, let us know. The AHers are full of it...advice, that is.

 

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[Stella_Omega]

Thanks everyone for the advice and the links, I'll be sure to check them out. And Boxlicker, you sure have a selection from which to choose!

I was thinking last night about writing it from the fisrt person perspective as Boxlicker suggested, something that I didn't think of before. Using I and you instead of he and she. But I'll check out the links before I start.

Thanks again,
Scalywag

Scaly, I suggest to you that you wrte it in any way that you can- without worrying yet what voice you give it- that's what "Search and Replace" function is for!
And you can always ask for an editor- her, on the author's hangout- to help you get all the tenses, points of view etc. in order.

 

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