True Stories

[bradley5620]

Just wanted to start this thread becuase I think these true stories are sometimes the best stories to read. We have all fantasized about certain sexxy scenarios but we have not always experienced them. Just wanted to see who else had some other similar scenarios with strangers who have just had pure, no strings attached, hot, passionate, sex!

Here is one of my true stories, hope you enjoy, I did!

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=420464

 

[bradley5620]

This story has been reviewed 109 times but no one has commented on it. Why?

 

[Lionheart72]

Put up my first two storys yesterday and today. I've had almost 10,000 views on the first one and gotten 1 comment. Give it time.

 

[ericahope]

Here is one of my true stories, hope you enjoy, I did!

You didn't want to look like a perv so you picked up a Playboy? haha...

I like the idea of people posting true life stories, and they definitely arouse me. In one of my stories I wrote it's all real life people, although some of the sex is fantasy.

I read yours. It's definitely pretty wild, although it was almost too short to be arousing. It was like the sex was over before it started, and there wasn't much build up. At least from my perspective, for me to get aroused it's nice to know what people are thinking or feeling, not just the size of their cock or breasts. There were a couple typos and I don't think you should use Arabic numerals in place of spelling out numbers (i.e. use four instead of 4).

Again, though, I like the idea...

Erica

 

[Maeten]

I liked it, I just felt that the story was a bit... lopsided.

It can be very difficult to pin emotions on memories, especially pinning emotions on the other person. It's one of the reasons I think that a lot of people don't write stories about what has actually happened: it's hard. The end came very quickly where the beginning really built the story up. It almost feels like if you just left the story off at an ellipsis as the couple entered the room it would make for a more fulfilling tale.

Overall it looks like a great start.

 

[sr71plt]

This story has been reviewed 109 times but no one has commented on it. Why?

Because they didn't want to. It's not a requirement for reading the stories.

 

[bradley5620]

Finally!

Thanks for the feedback, I think it is helpful. I know most of the comments have some truth to them. The pilot sr7 needs to lighten up.