Trolling for thoughts

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Yeah I know, trolls are bad.

Anyway I am working on a story about sex starved zombies, I have that part down so no thoughts on those. What I am having a problem with is the story itself. Well to be a little clearer, I am having a problem with the sex scenes.

No not in how to describe it, more in what happens that there is a sex scene. So right now I have it starting out with a girl and her boyfriend going to have sex for the first time, get interupted by a female zombie, who gets the boyfriend. The girl drives away in his car to her house, where she finds her parents having sex in the kitchen, her father is already a zombie. She watches for a minute then drives away again, in the town she see's many people having sex, half of the participants are zombies of course.

She crashes the car avoiding some people and gets attacked by three zombies, right before one enters her the cavalry arrives. No not that cavalry, a special forces team of zombie killers, I swear some people.

Anyway after that is where I have the problem. I'm not exactly sure what to include besides the ending, no not spoiling it so don't ask.

Anyway, I have a couple vague notions. Namely there is one female in the squad, she goes zombie when her father shows up as a zombie of course. I am so going to have a gay zombie who gets one of the guys in the squad, but after that I'm not sure.

About only thought I have is 7 person squad, need to take out more than two, and a zombie rush is overdone, happens in all of them anyway.

So come on people I need thoughts, idea's and for the love of me not pointing a finger at you and spouting nonsensical nonsense good ones.

 

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So is zombie-ism a sexual transmitted disease? Do they have some sort of aphrodisiac qualities, or do they just rape the victim?

I think you should have some real human on human sex, just to throw the reader a curve ball. Just like in zombie movies there always seems to be some person who either kills another person, or gives them to the zombies.

There should also be abig zombie orgy in some sort of pit. The sort of place that a person would be able to figure out how to get out of, but a zombie would be stuck in. Could also be like a horse corral. Then a bunch of rednecks (or maybe teenagers) sit around watching them.

Yes I have seen too many zombie movies

 

[Texguy84]

I'm with the club thinking the zombie-ness should be an STD, along with some strong aphrodesiac-ness to them, like maybe they just pump out pheremones like mad. Some folks are relatively resistant to them, and others (such as the special forces guys) would wear protective facemasks to keep the smell from getting to them. They might lose the masks or be otherwise exposed (torn clothing from a zombie swipe or something) and thus drawn to the zombies if their buddies can't keep them away.

You mention the female team member being turned after a run-in with "her" father, is that the main character's father, or the female team member's father?

And how zombie is zombie here? Do they look mostly normal, just wandering around thoughtlessly in search of sex? Do they look like the guys from Thriller, with skin rotting and limbs falling off?

 

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Oh good greif, I said I had the zombie part covered.

Anyway, they look normal besides blank faces, the men have giant cocks and the women have huge breasts.

Yes it's a STD, otherwise why would they be sex starved zombies? I mean seriously, you two really gotta actually think about things and not be sex starved zombies.

Anyway, a zombie orgy sounds interesting, but not exactly what I was thinking of. I mean we are talking about zombies, they want to get normal people not each other, I mean otherwise how do you get more zombies?

Oh yeah, the female special forces member runs into her father. May as well toss in a little incest, you know since this is one of those why not find how many categories to fit into stories.

 

[Texguy84]

Anyway, a zombie orgy sounds interesting, but not exactly what I was thinking of. I mean we are talking about zombies, they want to get normal people not each other, I mean otherwise how do you get more zombies?

Well, since the zombies in question are trapped in the pit, and since they ARE sex-starved, I'd dare say it's a case of "Any Port In A Storm"

Oh yeah, the female special forces member runs into her father. May as well toss in a little incest, you know since this is one of those why not find how many categories to fit into stories.

Well, find a way to work in some funny scenes for a bit of humor/satire, eh?

 

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Well of course silly, kinda hard to not have funny parts in a zombie movie, I mean brainless people wandering about yelling cock and pussy just leaves it wide open for humor.

 

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Oh good greif, I said I had the zombie part covered.

Anyway, they look normal besides blank faces, the men have giant cocks and the women have huge breasts.

Yes it's a STD, otherwise why would they be sex starved zombies? I mean seriously, you two really gotta actually think about things and not be sex starved zombies.

Anyway, a zombie orgy sounds interesting, but not exactly what I was thinking of. I mean we are talking about zombies, they want to get normal people not each other, I mean otherwise how do you get more zombies?

Oh yeah, the female special forces member runs into her father. May as well toss in a little incest, you know since this is one of those why not find how many categories to fit into stories.

Well, knowing how you have the zombies covered makes a difference in how the sex happens. Same thing with how quickly someone gets changed into a zombie. Because if it happens quickly then where is the zombie incentive to climax.

Oh, and if the zombies do exude aphrodisiacs, you have to have some sicko who traps them and then invites girls to his house, knowing the pheromones will make the girl hot and bothered for him.

If you aren't crazy about the orgy idea, what about a couple of different zombies are trying to get it on with one human. One male zombie mounts her, the other tries to mount her also, but ends up mounting the first zombie.

Oh, and BTW, I am not a sex starved zombie. I'm on a sex diet, and I haven't been sleeping well.

 

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Oh you poor dear, you really must be nicer to the miss your seeing, or not seeing I suppose.

Though I am ashamed for you two, not helping too much, though the two or more zombies on one gal would work well as to why she crashes.

I am needing help with the special forces zombifying though, can't just lose two of them, well suppose three, can have two gay members and lose the second gay to the first one after he gets zombified.

Oh yeah the zombie changing happens when the guy involved has an orgasm, you know the whole transferring of fluids thing.

 

[Texguy84]

Oh you poor dear, you really must be nicer to the miss your seeing, or not seeing I suppose.

Though I am ashamed for you two, not helping too much, though the two or more zombies on one gal would work well as to why she crashes.

I am needing help with the special forces zombifying though, can't just lose two of them, well suppose three, can have two gay members and lose the second gay to the first one after he gets zombified.

Oh yeah the zombie changing happens when the guy involved has an orgasm, you know the whole transferring of fluids thing.

You could have the female member end up changing two or three of the guys. Maybe the change takes a short period of time, and for whatever reason, after it happened to her, she didn't mention it until it was too late? So her and the two or three other guys take shelter inside somewhere and take off their masks to catch their breath or whatever, and in the enclosed space, they don't know what hit's em?

Then you can have a zombification gangbang as the girl turns her three comrades at once.

 

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Oh you poor dear, you really must be nicer to the miss your seeing, or not seeing I suppose.

Though I am ashamed for you two, not helping too much, though the two or more zombies on one gal would work well as to why she crashes.

I am needing help with the special forces zombifying though, can't just lose two of them, well suppose three, can have two gay members and lose the second gay to the first one after he gets zombified.

Oh yeah the zombie changing happens when the guy involved has an orgasm, you know the whole transferring of fluids thing.

So how does a female zombie turn a man? How about lesbian zombies?

You could have a couple of the special forces people getting it on, when a zombie busts in and then a case of coitus interrupus zombius.

 

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Well not going to burst your bubble but staying away from lesbian. Anyway a female zombifies a guy same way, she takes his cock and he changes when he cums. Well starts when he starts leaking pre cum but you get the idea.

Not really wanting to get all medical or anything, but I guess the best way to think of it is as a virus, just really fast acting. So like the boyfriend, he gets jumped on, goes in her and he starts changing during sex, when he cums he goes full zombie and gets a horse cock before the female zombie gets off him.

Hmmm, interupting people having sex to zombify them, you know that would work.

 

[Athena_e19]

Here's a neato and kind of funny idea-

Howsa' bout the main female character, right before the calvary arrival, is about to get her bones jumped by these two zombies. Perhaps they've got insertion already and as the zombie killers arrive the tip of one of the sex-starved STD transmitting zombies breaks off inside of her (obviously not a big piece, we'd notice). She is too panicked and embarrassed and quickly covers up. They don't realize till too late that she has been infected. Perhaps the lack of direct fluid transmission slows the transformation. In the meantime she and one of the team members get it on. They get infected and help spread the disease. Perhaps the team member she has sex with is the object of affection for the gay team member and he is in the closet. Part of his reason for having sex with her is the an attempt to prove his straightness from some misguided guilt of social norms. Then when he goes zombie the other gay member is willing to sacrifice their humanity for a chance to be with their gay zombie ideal.

Wow, the twists keep on coming.

 

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Mmmmm, that would be fun, but nah, I got a different idea for how it ends. I'll have to remember that in case I do a second zombie story.

 

[Athena_e19]

I guess I forgot about what we were trying to cover in this thread. What is it you were asking of us?

 

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I'm needing idea's on getting rid of more members of the special forces team.

So far I have the lone female member being turned by her father appearing as a zombie, can't say no to daddy type thing, a male member being turned by a zombie while having sex with a girl from the town, and a gay male member being turned by a male zombie, likely the special forces male that was turned already.

I want to get rid of more than three.

 

[Athena_e19]

Suicide could be a neato way to build character development. One of them may have been turned- decides to kill themself to keep from being a threat. But, turns out once you get infected it don't matter much. Then they join the zombie crew.

What is the source of the zombie infestation? Magic, disease, aliens, etc? What caused the initial outbreak. Maybe they finally reach the end and lose someone there. What about a non-human zombie. Elephant from the zoo or something.... That would kill somebody....

 

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I'm not going into where they come from to much, just appeared is how I'll describe it. Saves on sentences and let's me go into the details of what happens a little easier.

No animals either, it's a small town so a zoo would be pretty beyond belief.

 

[Texguy84]

I still maintain that you could easily dispatch three guys at once by having the girl not tell them she had been infected (perhaps out of shame from fucking her father?) and then she ends up turning them all at once.

EDIT: Oh, and a random thought: Since there are a lot of crazy people out there, maybe a cult of sorts rises up where they believe the zombies will spare them if they provide suitable sacrifices? Someone could be tied up and put in the path of the zombies and turned that way.

 

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I had another thought, again coming right out of zombie movies. There is always the person who sees a friend/relative and just knows that person won't hurt them. Kind of covered with the father thing, but...

One of the special forces guys spots a girl he went to high school with. She was stacked and drop dead gorgeous before she turned, and is now all the hotter. The guy had a major crush on her for years, but she wouldn't give him the time of day. Now she is there calling out to him. He just can't see her as a zombie. etc.

And then there is the obvious. One member gets separated from the others and overwhelmed. Maybe a swarm of 10 zombies gets him. Oooh,... How about a whole cheerleading squad. He is in a sniper position and they form a human pyramid to sneak in through the window.

 

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Oh poo on the cult thing. I know there are people at least stupid enough to think such things, but I prefer thinking there aren't.

Now the sniper, actually that gives me a rather good thought. Nope not sharing it, you'll just have to read the story to find out.