I wrote these when I stayed (for free!) at the Ritz Carlton and enjoyed the steam room there. Feedback (including constructive criticism) is welcome. I use the "break the machine, clean the machine" mantra when I shower every day, it is a way to pray to my Master.
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5:30 AM at the Ritz
Billowing steam, ice
melting from the inside out,
pooling on marble.
Breaking the machine:
agony of ecstasy,
alone at the Ritz.
Cleaning the machine:
tender care of burning flesh,
in the name of God.
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5:30 AM at the Ritz
Billowing steam, ice
melting from the inside out,
pooling on marble.
Breaking the machine:
agony of ecstasy,
alone at the Ritz.
Cleaning the machine:
tender care of burning flesh,
in the name of God.
