Traveling Nurse

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Normally when I come on here with an idea, its pretty well laid out as far as plot goes, but this time I have a seed of an idea that is in the very early stages. In fact its hardly an idea at all, just a story I heard told by a co-worker.

Years ago, in the 1930's her Great Aunt worked as a traveling nurse in the Great North Woods. For those of you that do not know, the Great North Woods is the vast tract of land 10 million acres in size in Northern Maine. It is owned by the paper companies and obviously was logged quite heavily during the depression.

Well this woman was based out of Pittston farm, a farm in the middle of nowhere that served as a base of operations for the logging companies. As a nurse she would be sent out to tend to axe cuts, injuries and even regular illnesses suffered by the loggers. Well on one of these trips, a blizzard blew in and she lost her way with her horse. After almost freezing to death she found a lone logging camp way out in the middle of nowhere. She opened the door hoping to spend the night and found a logger inside. The probalem was he was not alive. he had decided life was not worth living and hung himself.

Now you just have to imagine how hard that was to deal with. Young, lost and alone in the middle of a raging snowstorm only to find a logging camp with a dead logger strung up in it inside.

Now I know that is not much to go on, but I was hoping some people on here might have some ideas on how to flesh this out into a good literotica story. Its just too good of a true story not to turn into a story.
 
compelling story.. I'm just thinking of where it could go from there. I'd like to give it a shot, but I need some time to determine where to go with it. I have some ideas for it. Let me know if anyone has already PM'd you with the intention of writing the story.
 
It was all good, up until the dead logger. Maybe she could "convince" him that life is actually worth living. Let us know when the story's done. It should be quite a read.
 
Alright, convincing him life is worth living for is too after school special and just sounds all cheap.

"Don't kill yourself. Look what life has to offer."

*Que 70's porn music.*


I'd say instead, you could turn this into a thinker, thriller. Finds this logger alone but alive. You could play up the tension between the two as they try and survive the night, week whatever. It could turn into a story of temptation. Perhaps after a night of love making, he still hangs himself. An ending not really expected, as someone would expect someone to be saved in a sex story.

Just an idea.
 
I see him as dead. He hung himself days ago, and rigor mortise has set in. However, he happened to have his dick out when it set, so he's now got a permanent stiffy. Our young, lonely, needy, horny traveling nurse sees this permanent hard-on jutting out from the body of the swinging corpse, and..... Well, you can take it from there.
 
Oh ICK Carny, that is beyond perverse even for you.

There is one way to add a little eroticism to the story in a believable way that sticks to what actually happened. She finds the dead logger, cuts him down and puts him under a rug or sheet against the wall because she can't put him outside the wolves would eat him, can't bury him the ground is frozen. So instead, she puts him in a spot that is cold inside the cabin. Now if you have never stopped in a log cabin with no form of heat besides a fireplace in a raging storm, a cold place is anywhere not next to the fire, well or next to the wood stove.

So anyway she is stuck in this cabin with a major snow storm, a dead guy stuck in the corner and nothing to do. So what does she do? She goes through his pockets, goes through the house and then thinks. If she is lucky she found some reading materials, if she is not, she has nothing to do but watch the fire, sleep, make food, and get more firewood. So of course, her mind wanders to sex, always does when you got nothing to do, ever notice that? ;)

So now there are no men around besides the one dead guy, she spent most of her waking time thinking about him, why he hung himself and sex. He of course makes it into those thoughts so she finds herself having fantasies of her and him having sex, in various forms. This of course is something you would never admit to, I mean can you imagine the faces you would get if you told people I was stuck in a cabin with a dead guy and I spent my time fingering myself and picturing him on top of me. ;)
 
Ravin the Poet said:
Alright, convincing him life is worth living for is too after school special and just sounds all cheap.

"Don't kill yourself. Look what life has to offer."

*Que 70's porn music.*


I'd say instead, you could turn this into a thinker, thriller. Finds this logger alone but alive. You could play up the tension between the two as they try and survive the night, week whatever. It could turn into a story of temptation. Perhaps after a night of love making, he still hangs himself. An ending not really expected, as someone would expect someone to be saved in a sex story.

Just an idea.


Wow chicka wow chicka wow chicka - Yep. I hear it!

Actually, I really love your suggestions here. This is a very interesting story premise that has the makings of a much longer work. I'm not sure the guy should hang himself at the end, though, but it depends on how the story plays.
 
It would seem that a living logger would be better than a dead logger. Maybe she even stumbles accross a group of loggers in a cabin. HHmmmmmm. That sounds good. They would have to try to keep warm somehow.
 
I just finished the story. It turned out to be a nice romance. (No, she does not become romantically involved with the corpse! LOL)
I'll be submitting it shortly.
 
subwannabe said:
It would seem that a living logger would be better than a dead logger. Maybe she even stumbles accross a group of loggers in a cabin. HHmmmmmm. That sounds good. They would have to try to keep warm somehow.

Wasn't Tera Patrick studying to be a nurse at one point . . . :D
 
LadynStFreknBed said:
I just finished the story. It turned out to be a nice romance. (No, she does not become romantically involved with the corpse! LOL)
I'll be submitting it shortly.

Can't wait to read it.
 
Mona said:
Can't wait to read it.

:) I'll post the link here as soon as it is available. (The time frame for submission to publication on Lit has been running about 7 days.)
 
Wow, I was not sure this had any potential. In fact, the last I checked I had no responses. I am blown away that someone has already written a story on it. I can't wait to read it.
 
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