Toyland

[Monazwx]

Hey guys, haven't been here in a while, I have a story in mind but not sure where to take this one.

A student looking to make some extra money goes to assist with Inventory procedures for a few days at a store that she thinks caters to children, but when she arrives, she realizes that there is a back room . . .

(Yes, the store sells "naughty" items as well)

Any thoughts? Anyone want to take this and run with it?

 

[HeyAll]

Sounds fun.

Perhaps the college girl is bored by the job. She has tons of free time, and her homework is already finished. She can't stop thinking about the toys in back, so she looks again.

Weeks go by, she's horny because she recently broke up with her boyfriend. She struggles, but decides to give one of them a try.

Over the next several nights, she masturbates in the backroom with the various devices. She's a good girl and washes them clean afterwards.

One day, the boss of the store chats with her, and gives subtle hints that he knows what she's been doing by watching the security cameras...

 

[Monazwx]

That's a great angle too. The original premise was that do perform inventory stock taking, which only takes a few days, companies generally hire college students to work at minimum wage, but having her there full-time could also be a possibility.

 

[lovecraft68]

My first thought is that the girl is young and naive, but the toys have her curious.

I say her boss is an older woman and picks up on how inexperienced she is.

My scenario involves the two of them working all night on Friday to finish inventory and the boss "accidently" opening a toy and starting to mess around with it and ask her questions.

Has great potential as a lesbian first time.

 

[Sean Renaud]

I think you're idea is okay once you get past the initial idea of it being a backroom and not just her somehow not just a misunderstanding from the get go. I can easily see a young woman who needed a job, was new to the area (or the store was new) and her not realizeing what kinds of 'toys' were sold at 'Le Toy Shoppe' and when she walked in the door she was some combination of too embarassed to admit she hadn't known what she was getting into until she was already in it and she needed the money bad enough that once she was there she wasn't simply going to walk away. I have a hard time seeing a regular toy store with a 'backroom' it just doesn't quite hold up. From there I think the rest of it holds together relatively well though.

I think lovecraft might be onto something with midnight inventory. Though I think it would probably work better with one of two slight tweaks on the scenario.

a) The older woman suggests that you can't sell sex toys without having tried a few out. A lot of men are going to come in buying toys for their wives/girlfriends and they have no idea how big is too big especially for starting, double that for anal starting. Also a lot of women are going to be extremely shy and unable to express themselves so having someone who can tell them the difference between the Rainbow Deluxe Butterfly and Ecco the Dolphin and make a suggestion for them is a must.

b) The two of them are doing inventory and cracking jokes about all the various toys. Maybe watching some of the lesbian porn and pointing out how obvious it is that most lesbian porn is based more on male fantasies than actual lesbian encounters. (I'm neither female, nor lesbian but I suspect they don't spend as much time in real life sucking each other's strap ons, but maybe I'm wrong.)

If there is a backroom I think the best options there are that it's either a secret back groom that happens to show that the mirrors in the changing rooms are actually one way mirrors or what she thinks is a back room is actually a performance deck (or whatever those rooms were called. The ones where you pay a quarter and the window shows you a room with your own private stripper.

 

[lovecraft68]

The fucking with strap ons is 50/50 some women do like being fucked just not by a man. But a lot of it is played up for the male audience.

That's the funny thing with lit. The GN section is filled with women writing GM and reading it. The lesbian section is full of men writing and reading it.

Personally I only use strap ons in my stories if it is girl/girl femdom.

A lesbian friend of mine says it best. "The only problem I have with dick is that its usually attached to a dick"

The "you have to be familiar with the toys" idea is a good touch.

 

[Sean Renaud]

I said sucking, not fucking. I don't doubt that women use strap ons on occasion. I highly doubt they perform oral sex on rubber phalluses for any reason other than to excite men.

I've never really paid enough attention to who writes or reads GM or L stories at all. Gay just isn't my thing and I only write it when I'm in the Survivor Contest and it's usually a struggle and I'll be honest Lesbian sex just kind of bores me to tears most of the time. So again I almost exclusively write those when I need to check off a box on my list.

 

[lovecraft68]

I said sucking, not fucking. I don't doubt that women use strap ons on occasion. I highly doubt they perform oral sex on rubber phalluses for any reason other than to excite men.

I've never really paid enough attention to who writes or reads GM or L stories at all. Gay just isn't my thing and I only write it when I'm in the Survivor Contest and it's usually a struggle and I'll be honest Lesbian sex just kind of bores me to tears most of the time. So again I almost exclusively write those when I need to check off a box on my list.

I misread. The sucking is for men in some cases, but is also a huge part of femdom humiliation.

I attempted one GM story for a friend. He claims it came out okay, but I really was not keen on it and see no reason to force myself to write it.

I'm okay with lesbian, but usually focus on it being an older experienced lesbian with a young curious girl, hence my take on this one.

 

[Sean Renaud]

I never really stopped to think about femdom humiliation. I guess that makes perfect sense as a perfectly plausible reason why two girls or at least the subby would be sucking a dildo. I'm still convinced that no two girls ever grabbed a double headed dildo and kissed in the middle for any reason that didn't involve impressing a man. Also I know you misread, I wasn't trying to be a dick I was just pointing it out.

I like the older younger dynamic. It's definitely an interesting take on things and I can easily see that developing into an interesting story.

 

[lovecraft68]

I never really stopped to think about femdom humiliation. I guess that makes perfect sense as a perfectly plausible reason why two girls or at least the subby would be sucking a dildo. I'm still convinced that no two girls ever grabbed a double headed dildo and kissed in the middle for any reason that didn't involve impressing a man. Also I know you misread, I wasn't trying to be a dick I was just pointing it out.

I like the older younger dynamic. It's definitely an interesting take on things and I can easily see that developing into an interesting story.

Agreed, the double headed dildo is pure lipstick, porno lesbian fodder.