Topless Jen

[ShirtlessMike05]

Hi, my name is Michael and im new to this site. Im really into the exhibitionist/voyeur category here. I like the stories about being topless/nude in public and situations involving this. I have a idea for a story (series I hope) involving a girl who has turned 18 recently, her name is Jennifer, I simply call her Jen in the story though. She has this desire to go topless in public practically anywhere. Jen is blonde and slim but in shape. She has these firm smallish breasts but has like these big blue eyes and this super outgoing personality. Ive finished the first chapter of the story but I wanted some input before I post it on here.

The first chapter involves Jen going to the beach with her childhood friend Crystal who is pretty wild herself but is more into wearing thongs than going topless. She encourages Jen to use her newfound freedom since she has moved out of her parents home a while back to go topless in public. Crystal knows Jen likes wearing bikinis and other minimal clothing in public and has known of her desire to go topless for a while and wants to help her acheive this goal.

Jen starts out wearing a bikini top and some shorty shorts to the beach because she is nervous about people seeing her ass and pussy. I thought this was a unique idea, she loves going topless but is afraid of people seeing her naked below the waist. Jen is convinced by Crystal to eventually takes off the shorts. While she is sunbathing on the beach Crystal continues to persuade Jen and she decides to remove her top and lay out to get a tan.

Shes worn bikini tops so long that she has a tan over her whole body except for her breasts and pussy so she wants to rid herself of tanlines. Her friend Crystal knows Jen would like to go topless in other situations besides just getting a sun tan so she convinces her to leave her bikini top in the car and basically get her to go topless all day.

Jen likes the idea but is afraid of getting in trouble for indecent exposure. The first story establishes the fact that this beach town she lives in has a law that allows going topless so she can pretty much do it anywhere. I was thinking maybe expanding this to allow for nudity too but right now its just topless. The location is fictional, I havent decided exactly where its supposed to be and I dont want to alienate anyone by picking somewhere I dont know that much about so its just a typical beach town for now. Its supposed to be in the US but its very liberal.

Anyways Jen is eventually convinced to go places like a snack shop (fast food place), a bikini store, and a music store all topless. Then Jen and Crystal have some wild time on the beach and in the water in between. At the end of the day they go get dinner out at another restaurant the whole time with Jen being topless and loving it. I was thinking of adding more places to the story where Jen goes topless and have them do more but I didnt want the first story to get too long. Jen also meets a couple of new friends and gets them to go topless with her. Crystal doesnt go topless very much because she doesnt like it, shes more of a thonger and I wanted to keep the focus on Jen since Crystal is basically trying to encourage her to do it.

Like I said ive completed the first chapter of the story but its still kind of a rough idea. I have some other ideas for places she can go topless in other chapters and things she can do but I want to get some input before I get too much into this. I was thinking of the whole her starting out wearing clothes and then taking them off or losing them and having her end up topless but that just seemed kind of contrary to the person she was that loves being topless and would go topless anywhere and anytime she had a choice to. I am open to the idea of her getting into situations involving "sex" later in the story since this is basically a "sex" story site but right now I just want to focus on her and the desire to go topless in public with her friends and get into all sorts of fun and mischief. I might have her end up naked in some situations, she does briefly in the first chapter but so many stories deal with that here so I mostly want to keep her topless and have her basically be the woman who wears no top most of the time.

Please let me know what you think and if you think im totally off my nut and this story is just garbage then by all means please let me know. Im more into the whole exhibitionist thing than the whole having sex thing but thats just me. I love going shirtless myself but im a guy so im trying to write what I know and think if I was a girl and I thought like her what would she do in this situation. Input please.

 

[cuck_wantobe]

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[TheTwistedOne]

I'm almost certain that toplessness is legal in Key West, FL. The irony of course, is that if part of the thrill is being counter-cultural, she's going to get less stares in places where this is legal.

Last time I was in Key West, many years ago, topless was not legal. You had to go back up a few keys to get to a nude beach.

Fantasy Fest, the Halloween celebration on the island, is no exception, they have to be painted or something not just out in their natural glory.

But things could have changed.

 

[ShirtlessMike05]

I'm almost certain that toplessness is legal in Key West, FL. The irony of course, is that if part of the thrill is being counter-cultural, she's going to get less stares in places where this is legal.

Somewhere in Florida was my inspiration for the story but im not all that familiar with Florida beyond I know going topless is legal in some places so thats why I avoided saying exactly where the location in the story was.

I thought about having toplessness be illegal in the story and somehow she gets around that and runs afoul of the law but I really wanted her to be able to go topless to all these places and see all these reactions from people that see her topless because even though its legal in the story not too many people do it so its still unusual. While she likes going topless its relatively new to her doing it in public so she wants to go all these places topless and do things she normally did before wearing the top and its not quite as crazy.

I had thought about starting her off wearing a top in the stories and then somehow she gets topless and has to deal with it but so many people do that I just besides the original story and maybe some other ones I just wanted her to start out topless and stay that way as long as she could because if she wore a top all the time it would be contrary to who she was.

 

[TheTwistedOne]

I grew up in Florida and there aren’t any places that its actually legal other than a nudist camp. There used to be one located just outside of Kissimmee in the middle of orange groves. As a kid we used to ride our dirt bikes out there and climb the trees to look over the top of the wall. Damn, does that ever bring back memories. There are several beaches that are scattered around Florida that are not legal but clothing optional is tolerated. There is a really nice one in around Miami.

In Rio and most beaches in the Mediterranean that I've been to topless was almost a given rule of thumb. Maybe Jen and her friend go on a summer backpacking trip in Europe before going off to college? Just an idea, it’ll give a lot of culture and local flare to work with too.

~Twisted

 

[millieteases]

Twisted, the nudist resort is still there - it's called Cypress Cove and it's actually a pretty nice place. Lots of the other resorts are in Pasco County near Tampa - Paradise Lakes, Lake Como, Caliente, etc.

As for the story, I might try more of an exhibitionist thing - have her covered but easily seen - all she has to do is raise an arm or bend over a little to start, then push it from there.

Millie, a nudist because her spouse introduced her to it at Cypress Cove.

 

[ShirtlessMike05]

I grew up in Florida and there aren’t any places that its actually legal other than a nudist camp.

Thats why I didnt pick Florida specifically I just used some ideas about the location from it. Im really trying to keep away from the whole nudist thing in my story. Shes not really a nudist.

There are several beaches that are scattered around Florida that are not legal but clothing optional is tolerated. There is a really nice one in around Miami.

In my story I did kind of want to go more for the feel that going topless in this place is more "tolerated" than just outright allowed but I thought making it at least legal gave me more options in the story at least for stuff that she could do without getting in any serious trouble.

In Rio and most beaches in the Mediterranean that I've been to topless was almost a given rule of thumb. Maybe Jen and her friend go on a summer backpacking trip in Europe before going off to college? Just an idea, it’ll give a lot of culture and local flare to work with too.

I just didnt think itd be a big deal if going topless there was a real rule of thumb since I didnt want everyone doing it, least not at first. I wanted to mostly start out with Jen doing it and kind of inspiring people to want to do it over time. The whole summer backpacking thing in Europe sounds like a good idea. Ive never actually been to Europe but I know about it and like its used in other stories by people so I could always use locations that are sort of themed from Europe for that without actually saying its in a specific country or province.


-Michael

 

[ShirtlessMike05]

As for the story, I might try more of an exhibitionist thing - have her covered but easily seen - all she has to do is raise an arm or bend over a little to start, then push it from there.

I was thinking of at first at the beginning of the story having it be sort of an exhibitionist thing where she showed some skin here and there to see what she could get away with before doing the whole topless thing and working up to that. Its just shes not the kind of person to really wear alot or be really covered up anyways unless it was like something that covered her for the most part but if she moved a certain way you could see everything.

Millie, a nudist because her spouse introduced her to it at Cypress Cove.

Im trying to avoid the whole nudist thing. I mean she loves being nude at home and is okay doing it in front of her friends but doesnt really like having her pussy exposed in public. I mean I want to have it where she learns to get over that to a certain degree and go naked in some situations but for the most part shes not a nudist and if given the choice will go topless over just being naked. I think the nudist club idea could work later on as sort of a thing she might visit with her friends but I dont know if she would go there regularly or not.


-Michael

 

[ms.read]

So what you're trying to say is that Jen has no problem showin' off those wonderful Boobies, but she likes her pussy covered. Why? she obviously has some inhibitions here, and you (the author) needs to explain why she gets off going shirtless, but not fully nude. remeber actions speak louder than words. Example:

"Say, Jen! Those are some really perky boobs there." Says Joe Schmoe

Jen giggles something furious and does something to hilight how perky those boobs are.

Joe reaches for Jen's skirt to lift it up, only to see some polka dotted old fashioned pantaloons. She slaps his hand and pulls her skirt down, giving the man a dirty look.

"Perv!" says jen before huffing off, letting her perky boobs bounce as she walks out of the diner. All a man ever wants is a peek at the pussy, jen thought to herself.*

*sorry for the really bad grammar.


ms.read - executive beta reader.

 

[ShirtlessMike05]

So what you're trying to say is that Jen has no problem showin' off those wonderful Boobies, but she likes her pussy covered. Why? she obviously has some inhibitions here, and you (the author) needs to explain why she gets off going shirtless, but not fully nude. remeber actions speak louder than words.

Basically, in the story Jen sees a difference between showing her breasts in public and showing her pussy. She feels going topless is basically just her expressing her freedom and enjoy the feel of her breasts being bare. She feels her pussy is something more intimate and she doesnt like people seeing it in public (shes got no problem being naked in private) and she feels it adds a sort of mystery when she goes topless because people can see her breasts but theres still something hidden that they cant see.

Yes she does have an inhibition about exposing her pussy in public and I thought that it would be interesting that she totally doesnt mind going topless in public in fact shes sort of obsessed with it once she starts doing it but shes totally terrified of people seeing her pussy or going fully naked. I tried to think of a explanation behind that like a reason for why she does that maybe something about her past but I just hadnt got around to it yet and thought it was something I could include in a later story so right now it would kind of be a little detail people wonder about but really dont know the whole story yet but when they find out later they understand. I knew people would ask about that eventually and that was the idea.

Joe reaches for Jen's skirt to lift it up, only to see some polka dotted old fashioned pantaloons. She slaps his hand and pulls her skirt down, giving the man a dirty look.

"Perv!" says jen before huffing off, letting her perky boobs bounce as she walks out of the diner. All a man ever wants is a peek at the pussy, jen thought to herself.*

Firstly she wouldnt wear polka dot anything under her skirt, alot of the time she would wear panties or beleive it or not just go commando under the skirt. She wouldnt really think the guy was a perv if he tried to lift her skirt and show her pussy. She just would feel very exposed and vulnerable. She does wish she could expose her pussy in public despite the fact she loves going topless and prefers it but something keeps holding her back. Actually there is a guy named Joe in the first chapter of the story, he runs a bikini shop on the beach.

-Michael

 

[ShirtlessMike05]

I also got the idea of Jen not showing her pussy from the kind of people who go to the topless beaches and dont mind showing off their boobs but wouldnt be caught dead showing their pussy because theyre not nudists and really going topless isnt naked to them.

 

[soflabbwlvr]

I grew up in Florida and there aren’t any places that its actually legal other than a nudist camp. There used to be one located just outside of Kissimmee in the middle of orange groves. As a kid we used to ride our dirt bikes out there and climb the trees to look over the top of the wall. Damn, does that ever bring back memories. There are several beaches that are scattered around Florida that are not legal but clothing optional is tolerated. There is a really nice one in around Miami.

In Rio and most beaches in the Mediterranean that I've been to topless was almost a given rule of thumb. Maybe Jen and her friend go on a summer backpacking trip in Europe before going off to college? Just an idea, it’ll give a lot of culture and local flare to work with too.

~Twisted

Actually, in addition to the two or three nude and clothing optional resorts scattered throughout Florida, there are a number of other nude and clothing optional venues. Topless bathing is legal on South Beach. Haulover Beach, north of Miami, is a legal, clothing optional beach. The Rooftop Hotel in Hollywood is cclothing optional. There is a clothing optional beach on the southern tip of Canaveral National Shoreline in Volusia. I am not sure of the legal status of that one. There is a clothing optional bar in Key West. There are also at least two clothing optional guest houses in Key West.

You could easily work some of these locations into your story.

 

[jeninflorida]

here i thought you were gonna write a story about me

Hi, my name is Michael and im new to this site. Im really into the exhibitionist/voyeur category here. I like the stories about being topless/nude in public and situations involving this. I have a idea for a story (series I hope) involving a girl who has turned 18 recently, her name is Jennifer, I simply call her Jen in the story though. She has this desire to go topless in public practically anywhere. Jen is blonde and slim but in shape. She has these firm smallish breasts but has like these big blue eyes and this super outgoing personality. Ive finished the first chapter of the story but I wanted some input before I post it on here.

The first chapter involves Jen going to the beach with her childhood friend Crystal who is pretty wild herself but is more into wearing thongs than going topless. She encourages Jen to use her newfound freedom since she has moved out of her parents home a while back to go topless in public. Crystal knows Jen likes wearing bikinis and other minimal clothing in public and has known of her desire to go topless for a while and wants to help her acheive this goal.

Jen starts out wearing a bikini top and some shorty shorts to the beach because she is nervous about people seeing her ass and pussy. I thought this was a unique idea, she loves going topless but is afraid of people seeing her naked below the waist. Jen is convinced by Crystal to eventually takes off the shorts. While she is sunbathing on the beach Crystal continues to persuade Jen and she decides to remove her top and lay out to get a tan.

Shes worn bikini tops so long that she has a tan over her whole body except for her breasts and pussy so she wants to rid herself of tanlines. Her friend Crystal knows Jen would like to go topless in other situations besides just getting a sun tan so she convinces her to leave her bikini top in the car and basically get her to go topless all day.

Jen likes the idea but is afraid of getting in trouble for indecent exposure. The first story establishes the fact that this beach town she lives in has a law that allows going topless so she can pretty much do it anywhere. I was thinking maybe expanding this to allow for nudity too but right now its just topless. The location is fictional, I havent decided exactly where its supposed to be and I dont want to alienate anyone by picking somewhere I dont know that much about so its just a typical beach town for now. Its supposed to be in the US but its very liberal.

Anyways Jen is eventually convinced to go places like a snack shop (fast food place), a bikini store, and a music store all topless. Then Jen and Crystal have some wild time on the beach and in the water in between. At the end of the day they go get dinner out at another restaurant the whole time with Jen being topless and loving it. I was thinking of adding more places to the story where Jen goes topless and have them do more but I didnt want the first story to get too long. Jen also meets a couple of new friends and gets them to go topless with her. Crystal doesnt go topless very much because she doesnt like it, shes more of a thonger and I wanted to keep the focus on Jen since Crystal is basically trying to encourage her to do it.

Like I said ive completed the first chapter of the story but its still kind of a rough idea. I have some other ideas for places she can go topless in other chapters and things she can do but I want to get some input before I get too much into this. I was thinking of the whole her starting out wearing clothes and then taking them off or losing them and having her end up topless but that just seemed kind of contrary to the person she was that loves being topless and would go topless anywhere and anytime she had a choice to. I am open to the idea of her getting into situations involving "sex" later in the story since this is basically a "sex" story site but right now I just want to focus on her and the desire to go topless in public with her friends and get into all sorts of fun and mischief. I might have her end up naked in some situations, she does briefly in the first chapter but so many stories deal with that here so I mostly want to keep her topless and have her basically be the woman who wears no top most of the time.

Please let me know what you think and if you think im totally off my nut and this story is just garbage then by all means please let me know. Im more into the whole exhibitionist thing than the whole having sex thing but thats just me. I love going shirtless myself but im a guy so im trying to write what I know and think if I was a girl and I thought like her what would she do in this situation. Input please.

 

[jeninflorida]

hum...okay a couple of quick notes....a young woman will be shy and lack self confidence to go topless or a thong. then she has to deal with culture/society. but i think the 20 yo today don't have the same issues that my generation had. 20 yo and 40yo women are more open and just don't care what society tells her ...what to do...act...or feel.

so having 2 hotties egging each other on...building each other up is a good start. one key, is that every woman wants to feel sexy and attractive.

what is the goal? do you want her to be bi? 3, or 4 some?

Hi, my name is Michael and im new to this site. Im really into the exhibitionist/voyeur category here. I like the stories about being topless/nude in public and situations involving this. I have a idea for a story (series I hope) involving a girl who has turned 18 recently, her name is Jennifer, I simply call her Jen in the story though. She has this desire to go topless in public practically anywhere. Jen is blonde and slim but in shape. She has these firm smallish breasts but has like these big blue eyes and this super outgoing personality. Ive finished the first chapter of the story but I wanted some input before I post it on here.

The first chapter involves Jen going to the beach with her childhood friend Crystal who is pretty wild herself but is more into wearing thongs than going topless. She encourages Jen to use her newfound freedom since she has moved out of her parents home a while back to go topless in public. Crystal knows Jen likes wearing bikinis and other minimal clothing in public and has known of her desire to go topless for a while and wants to help her acheive this goal.

Jen starts out wearing a bikini top and some shorty shorts to the beach because she is nervous about people seeing her ass and pussy. I thought this was a unique idea, she loves going topless but is afraid of people seeing her naked below the waist. Jen is convinced by Crystal to eventually takes off the shorts. While she is sunbathing on the beach Crystal continues to persuade Jen and she decides to remove her top and lay out to get a tan.

Shes worn bikini tops so long that she has a tan over her whole body except for her breasts and pussy so she wants to rid herself of tanlines. Her friend Crystal knows Jen would like to go topless in other situations besides just getting a sun tan so she convinces her to leave her bikini top in the car and basically get her to go topless all day.

Jen likes the idea but is afraid of getting in trouble for indecent exposure. The first story establishes the fact that this beach town she lives in has a law that allows going topless so she can pretty much do it anywhere. I was thinking maybe expanding this to allow for nudity too but right now its just topless. The location is fictional, I havent decided exactly where its supposed to be and I dont want to alienate anyone by picking somewhere I dont know that much about so its just a typical beach town for now. Its supposed to be in the US but its very liberal.

Anyways Jen is eventually convinced to go places like a snack shop (fast food place), a bikini store, and a music store all topless. Then Jen and Crystal have some wild time on the beach and in the water in between. At the end of the day they go get dinner out at another restaurant the whole time with Jen being topless and loving it. I was thinking of adding more places to the story where Jen goes topless and have them do more but I didnt want the first story to get too long. Jen also meets a couple of new friends and gets them to go topless with her. Crystal doesnt go topless very much because she doesnt like it, shes more of a thonger and I wanted to keep the focus on Jen since Crystal is basically trying to encourage her to do it.

Like I said ive completed the first chapter of the story but its still kind of a rough idea. I have some other ideas for places she can go topless in other chapters and things she can do but I want to get some input before I get too much into this. I was thinking of the whole her starting out wearing clothes and then taking them off or losing them and having her end up topless but that just seemed kind of contrary to the person she was that loves being topless and would go topless anywhere and anytime she had a choice to. I am open to the idea of her getting into situations involving "sex" later in the story since this is basically a "sex" story site but right now I just want to focus on her and the desire to go topless in public with her friends and get into all sorts of fun and mischief. I might have her end up naked in some situations, she does briefly in the first chapter but so many stories deal with that here so I mostly want to keep her topless and have her basically be the woman who wears no top most of the time.

Please let me know what you think and if you think im totally off my nut and this story is just garbage then by all means please let me know. Im more into the whole exhibitionist thing than the whole having sex thing but thats just me. I love going shirtless myself but im a guy so im trying to write what I know and think if I was a girl and I thought like her what would she do in this situation. Input please.

 

[TheTwistedOne]

Actually, in addition to the two or three nude and clothing optional resorts scattered throughout Florida, there are a number of other nude and clothing optional venues. Topless bathing is legal on South Beach. Haulover Beach, north of Miami, is a legal, clothing optional beach. The Rooftop Hotel in Hollywood is cclothing optional. There is a clothing optional beach on the southern tip of Canaveral National Shoreline in Volusia. I am not sure of the legal status of that one. There is a clothing optional bar in Key West. There are also at least two clothing optional guest houses in Key West..

Its been about 20 years since I left Florida. Sounds like some things have changed and in the much better category!

We did a lot of partying on the overnight swingers cruises out of Tampa.

 

[ShirtlessMike05]

here i thought you were gonna write a story about me

I apologize, I assure you that this story is not about you. Any similarities between the character in my story and you are purely coincidental. I honestly dont know enough about you to make a character based on you in any way.

Ive been reading stories here for a while but ive just joined recently so I dont know alot of the people here beyond some of the work they do in their stories and while I might get some inspiration from them I wouldnt directly copy things or take any ideas from their stories word for word.

If theres anything you dont like about my story that you feel is too close to you or something youve done by all means please let me know and I can either change it or remove it.

 

[ShirtlessMike05]

hum...okay a couple of quick notes....a young woman will be shy and lack self confidence to go topless or a thong. then she has to deal with culture/society. but i think the 20 yo today don't have the same issues that my generation had. 20 yo and 40yo women are more open and just don't care what society tells her ...what to do...act...or feel.

Well this Jen character is supposed to be rather headstrong and independent. She does care about other people and what they think but she also feels very strongly about what she wants too do and will often do things despite what other people think or say. She wants to go topless so shes gonna go topless. There are times when she can inevitably put on a top but only if its the last resort.

so having 2 hotties egging each other on...building each other up is a good start. one key, is that every woman wants to feel sexy and attractive.

The two girls in the story jen and Crystal are both hotties and yeah they like to egg each other on to do different things and push their limits but each has their own limits and so they push each other in different ways. They do more in the stories later. My character in the story does feel sexy and attractive. She likes her body alot but also wears some flashy clothes sometimes but usually likes to forego the top when she can. Jen likes to use her body more to be sexy and attractive rather than just rely on the clothe she wears.

what is the goal? do you want her to be bi? 3, or 4 some?

I guess you could say she has bi tendencies, I mean she likes to experiment and explore things with girls but like as far as relationships and sex goes, shes straight. I havent really explored the sex part of the story yet beyond the whole exhibitionist voyeur thing but yeah eventually she could always have a 3 or 4 some although I think shes more likely to just spend the night with a guy or just mess around with one or more of her lady friends.

-Michael

 

[jeninflorida]

I apologize, I assure you that this story is not about you. Any similarities between the character in my story and you are purely coincidental. I honestly dont know enough about you to make a character based on you in any way.

Ive been reading stories here for a while but ive just joined recently so I dont know alot of the people here beyond some of the work they do in their stories and while I might get some inspiration from them I wouldnt directly copy things or take any ideas from their stories word for word.

If theres anything you dont like about my story that you feel is too close to you or something youve done by all means please let me know and I can either change it or remove it.

no worries, just teasing....

 

[ShirtlessMike05]

I had this other totally cool idea for another part of the story where Jen goes with Crystal to this clothing optional beach. At the end of the day Crystal disappears for some unknown reason and Jen has to go across town to get home. She loses her bikini so she has to go home naked and its like her worst fear because she hates to expose her pussy in public but she has to deal with it in order to get home and find out what happened to Crystal.

 

[ShirtlessMike05]

Topless Jen Depiction

Hi its Michael. This is what Jen would look like in the story. Obviously its her from the first story where she goes topless on the beach in her blue bikini. She still has tanlines on her boobs because until now shes worn bikini tops. Let me know what you think. Enjoy.

 

[Totzman]

I think this is a great idea! Good concept and your illustration definitely fuels the imagination!

 

[ShirtlessMike05]

I liked the whole idea how Jen had tanlines on her boobs to make her being topless really noticeable and I thought the blue bikini went well with her body too.

 

[LindsayRae]

She must not be topless for long periods of time to have such deep tan lines though...

 

[ShirtlessMike05]

Thats because this picture in particular is based on the first chapter of the story. I have some pictures of her without the tanlines for later on too. I mostly tried out different things with her in the bikini.

 

[ShirtlessMike05]

Topless Jen Without Tanlines

Okay heres Jen if she was wearing that bikini without the tanlines for when she goes to the beach later or wherever and has been topless for a longer time. This what I meant in the other post.