Topless Jen Prequel

[ShirtlessMike05]

in parts are good but not too short otherwise its easier to just write them as one story.

yeah the farm maybe would be where melissa meets jen, grandparents are friends or something and thats how she reconnects with her grandparents.

Yeah I was thinking each part could be like two or three pages. Most of the multi parters I see on the website have at least three pages to each part. Sometimes they could just be one self contained story it depends on what I'm trying to tell. How long should I drag this whole prequel thing out? Should I tell it over time or just do it in one story and get it over with and move on with her adventures?

I was wondering about that because I already had jens grannie out in an old house that was sort of in the countryside away from everything so they could be nude there and not run into people unless they wanted to and there's a small town nearby and that would explain why they're so far out there.

I had this idea about Melissa living with or near the grandparents because her family is old friends with their family and they go to the same nudist resort. I just wanted some reason to explain why Melissa is always around so she can help Jen with stuff. Her mother gave her this bogus story about how her grandparents moved away and that's why she hasn't seen them for so long because they mostly stayed away since the mother doesn't approve of their lifestyle but since Jen is an adult now they had crystal bring Jen out there. Since crystal has done most of what she can with Jen she lets Melissa take over because she's better with the rest of it.

 

[jonyoungau]

Yeah I was thinking each part could be like two or three pages. Most of the multi parters I see on the website have at least three pages to each part. Sometimes they could just be one self contained story it depends on what I'm trying to tell. How long should I drag this whole prequel thing out? Should I tell it over time or just do it in one story and get it over with and move on with her adventures?

I was wondering about that because I already had jens grannie out in an old house that was sort of in the countryside away from everything so they could be nude there and not run into people unless they wanted to and there's a small town nearby and that would explain why they're so far out there.

I had this idea about Melissa living with or near the grandparents because her family is old friends with their family and they go to the same nudist resort. I just wanted some reason to explain why Melissa is always around so she can help Jen with stuff. Her mother gave her this bogus story about how her grandparents moved away and that's why she hasn't seen them for so long because they mostly stayed away since the mother doesn't approve of their lifestyle but since Jen is an adult now they had crystal bring Jen out there. Since crystal has done most of what she can with Jen she lets Melissa take over because she's better with the rest of it.

prequel i would think might have to be involved to get your story across, unless you write each section on its own and then join them together and see the side its hard to tell.

jens granny and melissas grannie go to the same nudist resort. Melissa wanted a holiday away from her life so when their all at the resort jens grannie said she could come to her farm and stay. so melissas already there when jen come to stat. and thats how they met? any good.....

 

[ShirtlessMike05]

prequel i would think might have to be involved to get your story across, unless you write each section on its own and then join them together and see the side its hard to tell.

jens granny and melissas grannie go to the same nudist resort. Melissa wanted a holiday away from her life so when their all at the resort jens grannie said she could come to her farm and stay. so melissas already there when jen come to stat. and thats how they met? any good.....

I was thinking that prequel didn't have to be told all in one story that would be pretty long and I really do want to get something on here. I was planning to have the whole prequel thing be part of the whole nudist resort thing.

I actually never fleshed out Melissa family. I suppose it makes sense her granny goes to the same resort Jens does. They could always meet up later. Right now I kinda wanted jens granny running things and then later introduce Melissa family and explain why she's around the farm so much and why she seems to have suddenly taken an interest in Jens development. I think it's kind of funny if she had Crystal helping Jen and then Melissa finds out about their adventures and realized she hasn't taken Jen as far as she would like because Jen shows up at the farm in clothes and is still hesitant about going totally naked.

 

[jonyoungau]

I was thinking that prequel didn't have to be told all in one story that would be pretty long and I really do want to get something on here. I was planning to have the whole prequel thing be part of the whole nudist resort thing.

I actually never fleshed out Melissa family. I suppose it makes sense her granny goes to the same resort Jens does. They could always meet up later. Right now I kinda wanted jens granny running things and then later introduce Melissa family and explain why she's around the farm so much and why she seems to have suddenly taken an interest in Jens development. I think it's kind of funny if she had Crystal helping Jen and then Melissa finds out about their adventures and realized she hasn't taken Jen as far as she would like because Jen shows up at the farm in clothes and is still hesitant about going totally naked.

sounds good to me if theres boots and straw hats and nothing else involved im happy.

the nudist resort and then they talking about old times could add to the whole prequel.

the funny if grannies farm is a clothing free zone and then sales people drop by or even just suppliers. makes jen get more comfortable talking naked to other naked embarrassed people if that accorded hahaha

 

[ShirtlessMike05]

sounds good to me if theres boots and straw hats and nothing else involved im happy.

the nudist resort and then they talking about old times could add to the whole prequel.

the funny if grannies farm is a clothing free zone and then sales people drop by or even just suppliers. makes jen get more comfortable talking naked to other naked embarrassed people if that accorded hahaha

I've always liked the boots and straw hat look especially with Melissa because she loves boots and the straw hat would add to the whole country vibe going on at grannie's farm.

They could talk about old times at the nudist resort. It's probably easier once they get Jen naked there because she would be more at ease.

I've always had the idea for grannie's farm to be a clothes free zone. She likes people to be naked there especially if they're family or staying there. I think it would be fun if Jen talked naked to other people coming to check the place out or bringing stuff to grannie especially if they're new to the whole nudity thing or embarrassed about getting naked and she puts them at ease as she shows them around or helps them with stuff. Jen is always more comfortable nude if other people are nude there with her.

 

[jonyoungau]

I've always liked the boots and straw hat look especially with Melissa because she loves boots and the straw hat would add to the whole country vibe going on at grannie's farm.

They could talk about old times at the nudist resort. It's probably easier once they get Jen naked there because she would be more at ease.

I've always had the idea for grannie's farm to be a clothes free zone. She likes people to be naked there especially if they're family or staying there. I think it would be fun if Jen talked naked to other people coming to check the place out or bringing stuff to grannie especially if they're new to the whole nudity thing or embarrassed about getting naked and she puts them at ease as she shows them around or helps them with stuff. Jen is always more comfortable nude if other people are nude there with her.

your description of melissa differently would work with the hat and boots

yeah being nude with them would help to get her calm, if their not embarrassed then why should she i would think

the farm being a nude one would be a good way to be one with nature and jen staying there she would love the life once she gets out of her clothes and the horse rides and swimming in the creek and running through the fields. makes for a great life

 

[ShirtlessMike05]

your description of melissa differently would work with the hat and boots

yeah being nude with them would help to get her calm, if their not embarrassed then why should she i would think

the farm being a nude one would be a good way to be one with nature and jen staying there she would love the life once she gets out of her clothes and the horse rides and swimming in the creek and running through the fields. makes for a great life

Every version of that Melissa character I thought of I had her wearing some kind of boots. The hat thing kind of came later but since she's outside a lot it makes sense. She certainly has the body for it. The big boobs and curvy hips and long legs.

It helps for Jen to get used to being nude around other nude people so when she's nude around clothed people it's no big deal for her. She likes being nude she just has been so disconnected by that lifestyle by her meddling mother that it takes some getting used to for her. Crystal always made some prank out of it whereas Melissa can make it more normal and mainstream.

Her Grannie's farm was always meant as a place she could go to be free of clothes and know she never has to worry about being nude or topless or wearing whatever she wants. It's funny because while she can wear clothes in some areas her Grannie kind of insists that she is nude in certain situations like eating dinner that most people have to dress for so I kind of like that but otherwise she's free to just wear or not wear what she wishes and do all the things nude that she couldn't before.

 

[jonyoungau]

Every version of that Melissa character I thought of I had her wearing some kind of boots. The hat thing kind of came later but since she's outside a lot it makes sense. She certainly has the body for it. The big boobs and curvy hips and long legs.

It helps for Jen to get used to being nude around other nude people so when she's nude around clothed people it's no big deal for her. She likes being nude she just has been so disconnected by that lifestyle by her meddling mother that it takes some getting used to for her. Crystal always made some prank out of it whereas Melissa can make it more normal and mainstream.

Her Grannie's farm was always meant as a place she could go to be free of clothes and know she never has to worry about being nude or topless or wearing whatever she wants. It's funny because while she can wear clothes in some areas her Grannie kind of insists that she is nude in certain situations like eating dinner that most people have to dress for so I kind of like that but otherwise she's free to just wear or not wear what she wishes and do all the things nude that she couldn't before.

her plump ass from the back with look good with some boots and the hat i think even if horse ridings involved as she bounces up and down.

yeah i think once shes nude and nobody see her differently she will be fine with it all.

running around the fields naked and feel the fresh air through her noise and over her body. makes her sensors extremely heightened.

 

[ShirtlessMike05]

her plump ass from the back with look good with some boots and the hat i think even if horse ridings involved as she bounces up and down.

yeah i think once shes nude and nobody see her differently she will be fine with it all.

running around the fields naked and feel the fresh air through her noise and over her body. makes her sensors extremely heightened.

Oh yeah the boots really make her ass look good from behind. The hat is really good with riding the horse because when she is bouncing along so is everything else on her like her breasts and her ass from behind as she sits on the horse.

That's why it's good Jen is with Melissa and Grannie because everyone in their neighborhood is used to her nudity so they won't think anything of Jens. I mean sure people around crystals neighborhood are used to it too but it's more unusual there. Once Jen gets used to it she would want to do it most of the time.

Jens sense are extremely sensitive so when she feels the air on her body and between her legs her nipples get hard and her lips get firm. Anyone who looks at her naked can tell she is turned on. Melissa gets kind of jealous because Jen gets turned on easier than she does.

 

[jonyoungau]

Hows the writing going?

 

[ShirtlessMike05]

Hows the writing going?

It's going slowly. The holidays kind of kept me busy. I've got some of the stuff written about how Jen meets Grannie and Melissa on the farm and they tell Jen about what they do there and they try to get her to go naked with them. Melissa tries to get Jen to go naked into town with her.

 

[jonyoungau]

It's going slowly. The holidays kind of kept me busy. I've got some of the stuff written about how Jen meets Grannie and Melissa on the farm and they tell Jen about what they do there and they try to get her to go naked with them. Melissa tries to get Jen to go naked into town with her.

oww hope you had a nice holidays, sounds like it will be a great story

 

[ShirtlessMike05]

oww hope you had a nice holidays, sounds like it will be a great story

Thanks yes it was. I thought it would be fun to have Melissa show Jen around and they would go shopping and visit her old school at night and she could show Jen some places she likes to go and they could do it all naked.

 

[jonyoungau]

Thanks yes it was. I thought it would be fun to have Melissa show Jen around and they would go shopping and visit her old school at night and she could show Jen some places she likes to go and they could do it all naked.

funny for them to go shopping for clothes if their naked while doing so.

was on holiday and heard of a group of girls streaking in a park through sprinklers for new years and then hanged out topless up a rocket playground structure

 

[ShirtlessMike05]

funny for them to go shopping for clothes if their naked while doing so.

was on holiday and heard of a group of girls streaking in a park through sprinklers for new years and then hanged out topless up a rocket playground structure

That's what I was going to have them do. They still like to go shopping even if they don't actually wear anything they see or get. Jen would think it's a fun experience to change in the middle of the store and while Melissa isn't crazy about clothes she likes the idea of doing that with Jen in front of people.

I actually was going to have a scene of them walking through a park where Melissa was naked and Jen was topless and there was supposed to be a playground involved.