DRxBlue
Literotica Guru
- Joined
- Jan 31, 2002
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i'd like to enlist your help for a moment.
i'm writing a story which contains a scene where a girl is giving deep throat for the first time.
i've never had the opportunity to try this,
(no volunteers just yet please
)
but i'd like the scene to be as realistic as possible.
i've put up the excerpt in question at:
http://drxblue.tripod.com/TestPage/pageone.html
if you'd care to read it. Your "Back" button would bring you back here.
The wavy lines indicate a POV shift (i may think of a better way of getting into her head later) but for right now my interest is purely technical.
You needn't read the excerpt, just giving any impressions you remember from the experience would be GREATLY appreciated.
Gay input is VERY welcome (perhaps i should rephrase that--naw!)
i thank you
i'm writing a story which contains a scene where a girl is giving deep throat for the first time.
i've never had the opportunity to try this,
(no volunteers just yet please
but i'd like the scene to be as realistic as possible.
i've put up the excerpt in question at:
http://drxblue.tripod.com/TestPage/pageone.html
if you'd care to read it. Your "Back" button would bring you back here.
The wavy lines indicate a POV shift (i may think of a better way of getting into her head later) but for right now my interest is purely technical.
You needn't read the excerpt, just giving any impressions you remember from the experience would be GREATLY appreciated.
Gay input is VERY welcome (perhaps i should rephrase that--naw!)
i thank you
