madelinemasoch
Masoch's 2nd Cumming
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I am facing trouble with my current main project when it comes to describing the sex from a close point of view. It is not in the perspective of any of the characters having sex but rather in the perspective of the character watching them have sex. It still feels too distant, not close enough in terms of point of view, really being in that scene, putting the reader into that scene... I think I have my own problems with emotional blockages that keep me too far away from scenes like this, but I really want to make it closer and describe everything in detail so that the reader can see it in their head, too. I have the visuals but I think the feeling of being there is blocked off by negative voices in my head. That's pretty horrible, but I'm powering through the writing process anyway.
So, do you have any tips when it comes to describing bodies as they're having sex, characters as they're having sex? I would like to get better at this. How do you get the reader to see it too? How do you enchant the reader into existing in that space with the characters? How would you describe it in a close way from a point of view of an onlooker? Maybe we can turn this thread into a kind of exercise: describe two characters having sex from a close third person point of view of a third character.
For reference, the two women characters I'm trying to describe now are a BBW blonde woman with huge tits and a voluptuous and thick brunette woman with a big ass but not as fat as the first woman. They're both having sex with muscular black men with huge cocks.
So, do you have any tips when it comes to describing bodies as they're having sex, characters as they're having sex? I would like to get better at this. How do you get the reader to see it too? How do you enchant the reader into existing in that space with the characters? How would you describe it in a close way from a point of view of an onlooker? Maybe we can turn this thread into a kind of exercise: describe two characters having sex from a close third person point of view of a third character.
For reference, the two women characters I'm trying to describe now are a BBW blonde woman with huge tits and a voluptuous and thick brunette woman with a big ass but not as fat as the first woman. They're both having sex with muscular black men with huge cocks.