Time Travel (Closed Thread)

[little_golden]

"Well it's getting dark - let's go"

 

[PhoenixPrime01]

Jeff Winslow:

"If you wish, but you need to get used to the concept that time isn't an important factor any longer. We have all of the time we'll ever need Romona."

He packs everything up, making very sure nothing is left behind, an puts it into the box again. A small box it removed and he punches a long series of letters and numbers, replaces it and closes and fastens the box again.

He reaches over and pulls you up beside him, close enough that the two of you are nearly touching and smiles as the golden motes apprear and begin to swirl.

The scene fades away and when the motes are gone you're back in the chamber once more. Your hand is taken and he leads you into the healing room and has you lay on the hammock and lays beside you.

The door to the chamber closes and latches and in moments the humming you've already experienced begins. The pheremones he has on surround and fill your senses with a powerful attraction as the aphrodisiac continues to course through you and the tingling felt on your first healing is felt once again, but far less intensely.

 

[little_golden]

"I guess I'm just tired of this time.... I never dreamt of time travelling to sit by a pond in maybe 1300 AD in North America away from the locals. I want to see and experience history" Romona explained.

"Time is still precious to me" explained Romona.

She watched him pack up and listened as he whistled the tune to get his little black box and his sequence for returning to his own time period.

The golden glitter took a fraction of a second to send them swirling forward in time....


Back at the healing lad she resists his plans for to lay down on a hammock.

"I just slept for several hours..." Romona explained.

"You have a nap I'll wander around"

 

[PhoenixPrime01]

Jeff Winslow:

"No you won't Romona. I said lay down.
"The doors will stay closed until the machine has done it's job. No unexpected viruses or plagues will ever be brought back from the past and this ensures it.
"To bad you were napping. You could have watched the box materializing and how the motes attracted butterflies," he says from the 'hammock'.

 

[little_golden]

Escape!

Romona wasn't about to nap.

"Jump in a lake" she laughed as she headed from the health unit. Upon exiting the doors, she remembered the self locking device and pressed a red button that forced the external locks trapping Jeff within.

"So long pal!" she grinned as she approached the control panel.

She flipped through the dials remembering how she had carefully watched him..... From her point of view he was full of it and of himself. Time travelling wasn't for those who wanted to rest and sleep all the time.

No wonder he had to look back in time for someone to travel with she thought to herself as she adjusted the device to the 1790s.

Naked she entered the box with the time period set and the gold glitter surrounding her and she disappeared backward into time.

Seconds later, she appeared naked on a street in Paris...

I don't have a black box to get back... Romona realized.

I'll have to steal some clothes and ...money. I didn't plan this well she lamented,

But here I am... France... Paris... early 1790's

 

[PhoenixPrime01]

1) The doors lock as previously stated until the healing is over.
2) Access to the time chamber is via the healing area only. No other entrance was given.
3) What a quick study Romona is and a computer whiz in future technology too, especially exotic symbols she can't possibly understand.
4) She's be stark naked, penniless and unable to speak 1700's French on arrival and likely have a hard time making herself undestood by even an Englishman as the dialect, slang, etc was entirely different.


lg, sorry I wasn't moving as quickly as you wished, but I think perhaps it's best if I withdraw and let you have someone else take over as Jeff Winslow.
The ground work has been laid so it shouldn't be hard for someone to walk into the character.

Thank you for asking me to try out the story *s*, but I think I'll withdraw now.

 

[little_golden]

Thanks For Withdrawing... I'm pleased.

I am pleased that you are willing to withdraw. The thread was just too boring and was painful to post in. You seemed to be resisting the whole purpose which was time travel.

Our PMs had always discussed time travel and for some reason you wanted to keep resting and resting. Sorry that made it even more boring for me.

From past experience posting with you, I know you like being all powerful over the woman character. This time you went for a technology advantage and tried to write posts to lock it in a pre-set direction but you don't seem to take it well when someone escapes your pre-set path. I know the female domination thing is something you use a lot but try to stretch your imagination a little.
It can be fun when the woman character isn't a complete bimbo and isn't motivated by physical pain.

I'll find someone who is interested in time travel and a more balanced thread. Thanks.

Good luck in your other threads. I hope they better meet your needs.

(edited)

 

[PhoenixPrime01]

I was basing the character on a socially inexperienced and uncomfortable nerd computer/scienctist type personality, hence his hope to get laid and his use of chemicals to enhance that chance.

The time travel I used is based on reading a lot of sci fi and following those principals as a basis for it.

Sorry you didn't understand that and do remember it was you to was "pleased" when I offered to take one of the proposed roles and told me you looked forward to it.

Thank you very much for you assessment and your opinion and suggestion.

Good luck to you in your future writings and goodbye little golden. *s
PP.

 

[little_golden]

I guess the miscommunication is that the thread I had communicated and was posted for was based on time travel. Going back to the first thread - it set up that a grad student was studying the French Revolution. I don't know where you got the idea it was about "a socially inexperienced and uncomfortable nerd computer/scienctist type personality, hence his hope to get laid and his use of chemicals to enhance that chance".

I'm read a lot of sci-fi too. I think when you decided he simply downloads everything about a time period from language to customs and everything else, into his brain, I knew the thread was hopeless. The disease free machine seemed just another line to get her naked. The zap gun also moved the thread away from the adventure of time travel to the old "force her into sex by torture".

I actually was pleased when you offered to take the role. I thought you'd break away from the mold of female domination from the point go. I thought it would be a break for you and you'd use cunning, charm and other traits to secude or influence her rather than the old zap her with a gun.

Have fun.

 

[PhoenixPrime01]

You may have the final word.

Adieu and bon chance. *s