time stop story idea

[Guest]

HI all

howe about a guy that can stop time for 1 hour a day. He is still able to mvoe around, touch things, move things.

He spots a attractive 21 year old in the shops, stops time, bends her over, gives her some from behind, dresses her again and moves away. REstarts time and then the lucky woman feels 20 minutes of sexual touching and sex in the space of a few seconds, multiple orgasms galour, all infront of the surprised customers.

Billy bob

 

[Tatewaki]

I'm answering this one just because I hate to see a lonely post in the Forum. Anyone who has the balls (ovaries?) to put up a suggestion deserves a response.

The idea seemed stale to me. I couldn't see how that one scene could be an entire story. Not how it was presented, anyway. Guy freezes time, assaults woman, then when time restarts all the effect pile up on her cumulatively.

Pretty boring stuff, left as it is.

What it needs is a 'Raison d'etre.' WHY does this guy feel the need to humiliate this woman in public so? Notice I don't ask how he gains this power, or why it is limited to one hour per day. In porn (erotica for the highbrow amongst us!) no one really cares. But he could've busted up his time into much smaller slices and spread the joy; bugger a nun here, suck the cunt of a female policewoman there and shove the baton up her ass, and such. Instead, he squanders a full third of his time on one woman?

Why?

That is what interested me the most in the proposal. It was this point you glossed over.

BTW, I don't consider myself a slouch in bed, but I have yet to give any woman I been with multiple screaming O's in twenty minutes. Foreplay takes more time than that, man!

Cheers!

-T

 

[Guest]

Stops time - Kicks you 100 times in the balls then starts time and watches you scream like a baby biatch

 

[Tatewaki]

Stops time - Kicks you 100 times in the balls then starts time and watches you scream like a baby biatch

Clown.

-T

 

[Chicklet]

Time Stops

Anyone ever read "Lady Slings The Booze" by Spider Robinson? In that story, a sexual predator is stopping time and raping women in the lady's brothel with what I thought of as realistic consequences...That is, they are bruised pretty badly from the penetration that happened so fast and very, very sore...I think that the level of nonconsent in this story idea would be too great for me to take on...

Chicklet