It has been years since I wrote chapter 2 of "Lord of Many Nights" the overarching plot is still firm in my mind but I seem to be having trouble negotiating... sadly enough... the sex. I have received really strong feedback on both chapters and want to continue and conclude the series. Is anyone interested in talking through some of my ideas and helping me to streamline and get through this and maybe future chapters? If you've read the story and have any input, i'd love to hear it.
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