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meop79

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So I'm still writing sporadically... and since I'm not allowed to post them here anymore... :rolleyes:

I was hoping I could at least get some conversations going regarding them with my peeps... :D Hey peeps... *HUGS*

Obviously not asking for anything so formal or crass as feedback, as that would suggest to some small minded soul that this thread should be somewhere else... :rolleyes:
 
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So I'm still writing sporadically... and since I'm not allowed to post them here anymore... :rolleyes:

I was hoping I could at least get some conversations going regarding them with my peeps... :D Hey peeps... *HUGS*

Obviously not asking for anything so formal or crass as feedback, as that would suggest to some small minded soul that this thread should be somewhere else... :rolleyes:

I don't think I qualify as one of your peeps...but I'm interested anyways : )
I used to have someone from here I exchanged writing with and gave each other writing challenges, but he disappeared
 
I don't think I qualify as one of your peeps...but I'm interested anyways : )
I used to have someone from here I exchanged writing with and gave each other writing challenges, but he disappeared

Sad, that happens here on Lit though...
 
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meop79 said:
Big girls don't cry,
but we've yet to figure why...
Life is tough and bad things happen,
but we're not supposed to cry.
We muddle along and pretend in some fashion,
but I have a secret I'm not supposed to share.
Life happens, shit happens, eat shit and die, it happens,
but I've never figured how to live without my secret anywhere.
People hurt you, this is true, there's not much about that you can do
but I have a little secret...
People will hurt you and tease you, beat you and cheat you, they will hate you and rape you, they will date you and skate on you, hop you and drop you...
but I have my little secret...
I cry...

https://www.literotica.com/p/big-girls-dont-cry-3
 
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meop79 said:
It's not hard to please a woman... just listen.

It's not hard... Not really... Not if you're willing to act on what you hear. Not if you tell her and more importantly, show her, she's safe, loved, wanted, and needed. If you listen to her dreams and her fears, and her hopes, and hold her through her tears, if you listen when you love her and make sure she's getting what she needs, if you listen to those wistful longings and store the information for later to surprise her with her dreams...

No...

Just listen, and follow from there.

https://www.literotica.com/p/its-not-hard
 
Thank you kindly. I read a bunch of yours, so far Cherry Chapstick is my favorite. That last line, sublime!

I think my personal favorites of those submitted are Exclusivity and You... though I like them all for one reason or other...
 
I can't write prose poetry, the closest I've come is Prison Break.

Susansnow does the best job of it that I've come across. I can't always understand her pieces, but I can almost always feel them, which to me is what poetry is about.
 
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