This thread sucks.

Spinaroonie

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I really didn't have my heart into it and it shows. It's not my best, and I dont' think too much of it. It's not that good and not one that many people will come back to. And overly selfreferential. And uses 'and' at the start of sentances, which a grammer buddy would have my balls in a quick-grip over if they existed. However, this thread is family friendly. But, still it sucks. The idea just wasn't good enough.
 
Laurel said:
It's not so bad. I kinda like it, actually.

I wouldn't rank it second greatest in history or feature it in a newsletter.

I dont' think anybody's gonna call their signifigant other/parents/children/grand children/Neighbor's kid/Child they kidnapped in from the other room to see it.
 
Spinaroonie said:


I wouldn't rank it second greatest in history or feature it in a newsletter.

I dont' think anybody's gonna call their signifigant other/parents/children/grand children/Neighbor's kid/Child they kidnapped in from the other room to see it.

so, don't see any other threads i'd do that for either
 
But it's okay to use 'and' or 'but' at the begining of a sentence if you're trying to emphasize something.
 
ScarlettRose said:


so, don't see any other threads i'd do that for either

Really? I called my mom so that she could read "I'm so HORNY", the epic by Avery_Chisolm.
 
Private Vasquez said:
But it's okay to use 'and' or 'but' at the begining of a sentence if you're trying to emphasize something.

Great. Just what I needed. Now the starting post gives out inaccurate grammar information. What will happen to the ADD-rattled children who get their parents permission to use the computer, check out Disney.com then head straight over here, read my thread, BUT cannot stand to pay attention to replies (and I'm pretty sure that this run-on sentance would get them to go away as well) and they only take that one bit of erronious grammar knowledge with them for the rest of their lives? I could be to blame for them not going to college and becoming somebody important! I'm going to run SAT scores for the state of Wisconsin (would've said Mississippi, but theirs are already bad enough.)
 
Private Vasquez said:
And the run-on sentence is a tough one to swallow. Use more colons: You'll be okay.

I only have one colon and I'm using it as much as I can.

I could show you a picture of a colon, but that would take even THIS thread down a notch.

I'm sorry, LusForSex, wherever you are, but sometimes, we just can't reach your stature.
 
Private Vasquez said:
Then use a semi-colon. It's only half as powerful as a regular colon.
And it's fun to use; see?

Now we're getting thigns rolling; We'll get things back up to the normal quality!

Well... heck, we'll even go one better and supply mediocre threads!

why do I use the royal we so mucH?
 
We is reserved for one-dimensional individuals who feel the need to fit in with the 3-D folks.

Maybe you need a colonoscopy.
 
Private Vasquez said:
We is reserved for one-dimensional individuals who feel the need to fit in with the 3-D folks.

Maybe you need a colonoscopy.

Barbi is almost done with PV's pelvic exam and will be with you in a few minutes spin. Have a seat. Please fill out these forms and have a seat over there. Did you have mexican food last night? Nevermind.
 
It makes me sad to watch Owen sometimes. When we found him, none of his legs worked, so the fact that he can walk at all is damn amazing. Still, his back legs are a bit deformed, and he has trouble jumping. Sometimes, he looks like walking hurts him. And even though he's got at least a 7 lb. advantage on Aiko, she whups him regularly because he's not as agile as she is. He's such the nice guy, and she's such a little beotch that I sometimes have to jump in and carry him away. I give him massages along his lower spine. He seems to like that. Still, it hurts my feelings to see him gimp around some days.
 
SaintPeter said:
Barbi is almost done with PV's pelvic exam and will be with you in a few minutes spin. Have a seat. Please fill out these forms and have a seat over there. Did you have mexican food last night? Nevermind.


Remember that movie, "Fantastic Voyage"?
 
Private Vasquez said:
We is reserved for one-dimensional individuals who feel the need to fit in with the 3-D folks.

Maybe you need a colonoscopy.

YOu're just beggin' for it.
 
Laurel said:
It makes me sad to watch Owen sometimes. When we found him, none of his legs worked, so the fact that he can walk at all is damn amazing. Still, his back legs are a bit deformed, and he has trouble jumping. Sometimes, he looks like walking hurts him. And even though he's got at least a 7 lb. advantage on Aiko, she whups him regularly because he's not as agile as she is. He's such the nice guy, and she's such a little beotch that I sometimes have to jump in and carry him away. I give him massages along his lower spine. He seems to like that. Still, it hurts my feelings to see him gimp around some days.

poor Owen. But then, maybe Aiko's refusal to aknowledge his disabilty is good for him.
 
Today it looks to be kinda ok, but not great by any stretch of the imagination.
 
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