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A clip from a near book I am writing:

Dream Scene (“Northland Pyramids” Chapter 3)
He slowly peels my clothing off... kissing every inch of my pale, soft skin...making his way down my neck and then beginning to massage my voluptuous bosom;
He begins to run his manhood between my breasts and I tease him some, taking him into my mouth;
After the first climax, he works his way downward, kissing me further;
He pins me down, and enters me... my back arches in ecstasy... barely being able to breathe;
Gently pressing my legs further apart he begins the moves of love... thrusting in and out... my hips move up to meet him as sweat pours over our rubbing bodies…
I knead his buttocks... exciting him more as he begins to thrust faster... pushing deeper and harder...
The sound of our rapture echoes down the block out my bedroom window
Just when we thought our elation was at it's highest... his thrusts slow down and he moves in passionately harder and with a moan and a heave, he releases his seed within me as my back arches more... We collapse into a trembling, sexual embrace… Breathing heavily, perfumed in sweat, we lie together tangled in the sheets… He remains within me as we fall into a somber sleep.


:) SDG :)
 
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