This is for Treyvon, the Teen killed in Florida by Hispanic

[pornstarwannabe]

I need help finishing it. I am rewriting Elton John's Levon. This could be big hit.


Treyvon holds his skittles like a gun
He calls his penis Jesus
`Cause he likes the name
And he enters him in the finest strange for fun

Treyvon, Treyvon likes his soda
He drinks a lot they say
Spends his nights stealing
In gated communities night and day

He was born a black kid to a pawn on a summer day
When the Sanford Times said Treyvon will be dead
And the racial war's begun
Zimmerman had him 9mm gun

And he shall be Treyvon
And he won't grow to a man
And he shall be Treyvon
In tradition not with the family plan
And he shall be Treyvon
And he won't grow to a man
He shall be Treyvon

 

[busybody..]

 

[busybody..]

http://moonbattery.com/george-zimmerman_trayvon-martin_media-bias.jpg

 

[pornstarwannabe]

Any other comments on my great song?

 

[Frizzle_Fry]

http://moonbattery.com/george-zimmerman_trayvon-martin_media-bias.jpg

I gotta hand it to ya busy body...you did pick out a really good demotivational...

 

[RoryN]

Any other comments on my great song?

Has anyone here ever given you props on your hilariously lame attempts at creativity?

Links, or it didn't happen...

 

[pornstarwannabe]

Has anyone here ever given you props on your hilariously lame attempts at creativity?

Links, or it didn't happen...

Yes. Do a search. I also received PMs in the past on my other creative endeavors.

 

[RoryN]

Links, or it didn't happen...

Yes. Do a search.

It didn't happen.

I also received PMs in the past

LOL - it definitely didn't happen.

 

[Stewart_Pidd]

I also received PMs in the past on my other creative endeavors.

sounds like a circle jerk bro!

Stew

 

[pornstarwannabe]

It didn't happen.



LOL - it definitely didn't happen.

sounds like a circle jerk bro!

Stew

I create. You two tear down. I am like a carpenter. You do guys do demolition.

 

[RoryN]

Did it happen here?

http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=803053

Nope - thread fail.

I create.

You don't create - you "make". And it's the same stuff a toddler points to in the potty.

 

[pornstarwannabe]

Did it happen here?

http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=803053

Nope - thread fail.



You don't create - you "make". And it's the same stuff a toddler points to in the potty.

What have to created? And poop does not count.

 

[JBCorbell]

If you are going to post something idiotic, at least make it original.

 

[pornstarwannabe]

If you are going to post something idiotic, at least make it original.

Can you say Parody?

 

[JBCorbell]

Can you say Parody?

Stick to your day job. Weird Al is in no danger from you.

 

[RoryN]

What have you created?

LIToons.

http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=507022&highlight=litoons

I love Ishmael's hair. Keep going, they're great.

those are awesome!!

I have to admit .. you're good. For stick figures you do an excellent job of getting them to show expressions. Very cool.

Excellent stuff RoryN.

Fucking hilarious.

They're pretty good; all have at least one thing to lol at.

But the DT one was flawless. The expressions, gestures, and dialog all come together to create the sort of unique quality humor which alone is responsible for those telltale spots on the monitors of Litsters everywhere.

(The cartoon images are no longer hosted. But good luck ever getting feedback like that for anything you post here.)

 

[pornstarwannabe]

LIToons.

http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=507022&highlight=litoons













(The cartoon images are no longer hosted. But good luck ever getting feedback like that for anything you post here.)

I can only aspire to be like you. You are the Creative One.