This Girl is now a Woman

[choco1469]

This girl
Is a beauty
In and out.

This girl
Is unique.
She would rather give than take
Because at the end,
Giving is like taking in help.

This girl
Wants love and protection
To know that someone could love her
As much
As she loves herself.

This girl’s emotions
Are shown right away.
When she is in the happiest mood
She will make you proud
To know that you can make a difference
In someone’s life.

This girl
Wants to be
The best
That she can be.

This girl
Will make your day
When you look at her
You will know what I mean.

This girl
Is now a woman.

 

[butters]

hello, choco - nice of you to share some of your writing with us. welcome to the forum.

having said that, it's a bit spammy to put quite so many threads up at once your pieces are more likely to be ignored this way. are they intended just as an introduction, or would you like comments/critique?

i ask since, again, putting up so many at once won't get them the individual attention.

while your enthusiasm is great, and i'd not like to be a discouragement, it's also nice to look around and get the feel of a new forum. read other people's posts, add your own comments. have a browse and begin to interact with some of the members here.


butty

 

[choco1469]

hello butty, thanks for the advice. Yes I am new and felt inspired.