The Vampire of Hades - nonhuman

[nested456]

https://literotica.com/s/the-vampire-of-hades

I'm considering expanding this into a full length novel. Is it good as a short?

 

[AlinaX]

Some of the description is good. But…
It’s not seductive, it’s not erotic, it’s not really a story. What even is the point?
(Sorry, I’m fussy about vampires.)