The Ultra Sound Test

[Guest]

This is the top-rated story on today's "Top Rated Submissions" list.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=14187

It was posted "New" on 5/10 and has a rating of 4.80 and 44 votes. No offense, Michelle B, but this two-page story is a 3 at best. And you keep calling a "crotch" a "crouch."

ROTFLMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And now, Michelle B, you have a sequel posted the very next day ...

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=14512

and say, "I had hundreds of e-mails asking me to write this so ..."

Really? You had hundreds of e-mails in one day and wrote up the sequel like pronto? And you still are calling a "crotch" a "crouch."

ROTFLMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

No wonder the "good" authors on this site bitch about the voting. What a fucking fraudulent joke. There is no way 40 people could give that first story a 5, not unless they were paid a lot of money.

 

[Guest]

Great presentation of evidence and superb logical argument dumb fuck. You don't like the story or you don't like that it's rated above yours so you make anonymous wild and unfounded accusations along with personal insults. Keep up the great work, loser.

 

[CelticsHeart]

Thats gotta hurt

OUCH !

 

[Guest]

Hey Redux, did you read the story? What would you give it, a 10?

 

[Guest]

Yes indeed, that story is a joke. But then, watch me flash my smile.

Where do they get these voters? The cemetery? Pet, pet, pet.

 

[DreamOn]

they say there is no such thing as bad publicity!!! After all I just read, I'll now read the stories in question....wow, it's vicious in here!

 

[DreamOn]

ultra sound

Well, I read it...Your ultra sound story was ultra funny. Thanks for sharing. How's the baby?

 

[bathsheba77]

I guess I'm one of those voters from the cemetery. I liked the story alot, I gave it a 5. When I was pregnant I was very sexual, it's hard to find good stories starring pregnant women. That story got me hot and it got me off, that's what counts. Not all of us read porno stories for the grammar and spelling, ya know. You don't like how I vote, you can kiss my ass. I have just as much right as you do.

 

[CelticsHeart]

This is just a personal opinion

OK the story might get you off, but I really do hate it when people try to give a story realism and then slap your face with it.

I got really ticked off with Micheles` saying "this is true..it really did happen to me!" Yeah? really?

The face slap was in the form of the blatent lack of plausible facts. Hey, I`d really love to see this clinic.

As to the hundreds of e-mails, votes and such - that isn`t really important to me. Enjoyment of a story isn`t in the grammer to everyone, how many do take note of punctuation whilst they "jack-off" anyway? And if you cum hard then I guess you`ll rate it a 5. I went back and re-read your work Michele, and the above still spoils it for me.

Sorry, but I like my realism to be real. Why not?b

 

[Guest]

The two stories in question are quite mediocre. Seems like a rather sad situation if this was the top rated story on Literotica yesterday. The author obviously did not get hundreds of e-mails which prompted the sequel, because the sequel was submitted before the first story was posted. It is rather dubious that many people would give this story a 5, unless they had ulterior motives.

 

[Weird Harold]

The author obviously did not get hundreds of e-mails which prompted the sequel, because the sequel was submitted before the first story was posted.

I don't recall any disclaimer that this story has never been posted elsewhere on the web. It certainly wouldn't be the first story dragged out of mothballs and reposted here without modifications from it's original posting.

I don't think either episode was worth a five, but then I can only speak for my own opinion. I can see where some people might like it well enough to vote a five, and It's not the first story to receive what seems to be an inordinate share that type of readers.

I notice that the people who posted first and most vehemently against this story didn't bother to register, and they all seem to have gone through the same grammar class.

 

[Guest]

it doesn't have anything to do with this story being posted elsewhere on the web. the 1st story was posted on 5/10 so it probably was submitted around 5/8. the 2nd story was posted on 5/11 so it was probably submitted the day after the 1st one was submitted. hundreds of e-mails prompted the sequel? ha ha ha. Sounds like a scam to me, including the voting.

 

[Guest]

it doesn't have anything to do with this story being posted elsewhere on the web. the 1st story was posted on 5/10 so it probably was submitted around 5/8. the 2nd story was posted on 5/11 so it was probably submitted the day after the 1st one was submitted. hundreds of e-mails prompted the sequel? ha ha ha. Sounds like a scam to me, including the voting.

in case you're wondering what that strange sound was, it was the point zooming right over the top of your head. reread harolds post dork.

 

[DreamOn]

I'd love to post an in depth reply but I just drank a gallon of beer and I have to empty my bladder....

 

[Mr_Neb]

Did anyone notice that Bathsheba77, newly registered in May, chose this topic for her very first post?