the trainride story new name

[spikeyspike]

ok i am new so i dont know how to tell you to get there unless via my name but the train ride story is now out under the dare

thanxs for the feed back on the wrongly titaled bound to please

 

[dr_mabeuse]

I don;t know which story you mean, but here's a link to your member page where all the stories are:

http://www.literotica.com:81/storie...&author=spikeyspike&Submit=Search+The+Stories

It's easy to paste a link. Just go to the target page and right click in the URL address box at the top of your browser. You should geta drop down list that will include "copy". Choose "copy", then come back here to Lit start writing a message for posting. Right click the mouse and you get another drop-down box. One of the options will be "paste". Choose that, and the link will paste.

It won't look like a link until you actually post the message, but then the Literotica text editor will automatically turn it into a hyperlink.

I'll check out the story later on, but already I see it's in second person, which kind of gives me the willies. Most authors here don't like reading second person ('I/you') stories, but we'll see.

---dr.M.

 

[spikeyspike]

second person

thanks dr i am new here and the link is v helpful

thank you for takeing time to look at the story even if not to your taste any feed back is welcome

from my short time here i know you are an active member and there for even critical comments can be a bonus on future writings

and even tho i write my stories from a me /you/ i / we angle as the great beast said

love is the law , love under will


love for the loveing wives should be expressed in there if its nit i have failed