The Submission of Mary

[zenwstick]

I have totally rewritten the Submission of Mary novel and am beginning to post the series again. The previous version is no longer on Literotica. For those of you who read the first series, I invite you to reacquaint yourself with the story about Mary's journey in the BDSM lifestyle and the many challenges and discoveries that occur along the way. This is erotica, not smut (though I do like and write smut -- see my other stories)... but in the story my focus is to focus on the discovery and pychological aspects of BDSM/alternative living.

Feedback about the novel is welcome. [Sentence deleted by moderator]

Best wishes
Zen

The first part of the rewrite is here:
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=227679

My other stories are listed here
http://english.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=69995&page=submissions

 

[Pure]

Hi, Zenw,

I am an admirer of that fine work, and I'm glad you're still around Literotica. It is an SM classic, as far as I'm concerned, and I recommend it frequently. I was unaware the old version was taken down, but am glad to hear a new version is going up.

Your posting about this new version, however is not really suited to the Discussion Circle, but more to Author's Hangout or Story Feedback.**

(If you wish to join the Circle, you would have to write two critiques of others' works that have been posted.)

You should let me know, here or by PM, where you want this thread moved, since that is what I, as moderator, do in these cases.

**You, on your own, can post a note to the BDSM forum--that would be a good idea. Incidentally I have frequently recommended your "Auction of a Slave" which is a fine 'hard edge' piece of work.

All the best,
J.

 

[zenwstick]

Thanks

I appreciate your kind words... Please post it to the Story Discussion section. I appreciate your help.

I will thinkaboiut joining the Circle at a later time when i have more time to write a critique.

Best
Z