HumanBean
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"The Start of Something New"
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This is a reboot of a story my writing partner
had started with a partner
who abandoned her.
We are writing it with a similar start
but a much different middle and end..
Robert and Craig headed out from their little cabin for the woods to check the snares and forage spring mushrooms, fiddlehead fern shoots, and more of what the woods provided. They had done this very same thing nearly every morning for more than a decade, usually but not always together. Today, though, they had barely entered the woods before Robert stopped, saying, "Crap, I forgot the wire for the new snares."(closed)
This is a reboot of a story my writing partner
had started with a partner
who abandoned her.
We are writing it with a similar start
but a much different middle and end..
As the 40-year-old handed the bags intended to carry back their bounty, the 18-year-old said, "I got this, dad."
They parted, with Craig heading deeper into the woods. Robert didn't head back over the open ground to the cabin, though. Instead, he stood in the shadows for several minutes until he saw what he'd been expecting: a stranger rushing out of the woods on the far side of the six acres of cleared farm and ranch land, heading directly toward the outbuildings in which the stock animals lived.
Visitors to the property were a very rare event by design. After civilization as it had been known for so long collapsed, Robert and his now-deceased wife had gone to a lot of effort to hide themselves out here in the middle of the virgin forest that was part of the Everett National Monument. The property that they considered their own had originated as a mining claim in the hands of Carolyn's father, George. The claim had predated the establishment of the monument, allowing it to be grandfathered in.
After the virus, war, and collapse, the family had fled here with no intentions of ever leaving. Craig had been just 2 years old, so this was the only bit of the world that he'd ever known. Robert didn't talk about the world beyond them except to tell Craig that it was a place to which he never wanted to go.
Carolyn hadn't been quite so pessimistic about what might have happened to the outside world, and Robert had agreed that when Craig was old enough to know more, he would be told about it. When Carolyn died of pneumonia just days after her son's 5th birthday, though, Robert decided to keep the truth from him.
So far, Robert had kept the larger world away from Craig, in part by ensuring that no one from that larger world reached their little world here. Surrounding their 20 acres of open and forested land were a variety of barriers that isolated them. They included a deep ravine to the west and most of the north. To the east and south, Robert and (before her death) Carolyn had installed an 8-foot-tall heavy gauge wire fence, then encouraged the spread of thick Himalayan Blackberries on both sides by planting the invasive species. After ten years of unrestricted growth, the briar patch was now more than forty feet wide and, in places, as much as 15 feet high.
As he watched, Robert wondered where the uninvited visitor had entered the property from. Once the trespasser had enter the hen house, Robert sprinted for the same destination. He arrived near the backside of the little building, slowed to catch his breath, then pulled from his waist band the little pistol that his son hadn't realized he was carrying. He came around to the front side of the coop just as the thief emerged, carrying a little cloth bag with a shape that verified its contents: stolen eggs.
The thief stopped short, eyes wide at the sight of the pistol pointing at the space right between them from just three feet away. The thief's eyes weren't the only ones wide with surprise, though. Robert hadn't expected a beautiful young woman to be the thief in question.
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