The Setup

BlackSnake

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I just submitted a story in the Loving wives category called "The Setup"

It's about a wife who learns of an affair her husband is having with his best friends wife. She has the hots for her husband's best friend. She also knows that her husband's best friend has the hots for her.

She figures that her husband's best friend would use any excuse to sleep with her, but she knew he would just come right out with it otherwise.

She leaves an anonymous message on his work phone, to come home early and find out who his wife is having an affair with.

Her husband's best friend arranges an open sex fest after catching his wife in bed with his best friend.

Comments....
 
excert:

Nancy was down to her panties and bra, Don was in his boxers, Jenny was in her bra and skirt, and Richard was down to his t-shirt and boxers. Each time the person with the lowest hand had to remove an article of clothing and go around to each of the players. They were drinking more as the clothes began to disappear.

Two rounds later, Jenny was taking off her bra. She had lost two rounds in a row. She stood up, released the clamps on her bra and let her full tits pop from the cups. The others cheered as Jenny went around to each of the players and jiggled her large tits in their faces.
 
You might post this at Story Feedback. I play there a bit. You wil get solid respectful but tough comments on your story. Here, you are more likely to get ideas for a sequel.
 
sirhugs said:
You might post this at Story Feedback. I play there a bit. You wil get solid respectful but tough comments on your story. Here, you are more likely to get ideas for a sequel.

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