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Not a sex goddess?

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[FatDino]

For weeks I paid special attention to the interplay between father and daughter when in the company of friends and family. I carefully listened to my two daughters. I even taped some conversations.

You make me sick.

I'm just saying.

 

[Stella_Omega]

Are you sure you aren't Andy Kaufman?

 

[Scribbled]

I find this thread somewhat of a joke. If anyone finds that they need to proclaim how great they are and how wonderful their work is in this fashion, it says something about the size of their egos.

Talk about the pot calling the kettle black. LMFAO! Remember this thread over on that other site . . .

Daniellekitten wrote:
I've always had great turn out through Lit, as a matter of fact, I won Most literary genre in the year end contest and Most Influential Writer, a fact which still staggers me. I have a huge following there and some of my stories have over 100,000 reads and boy does this sound like I am bragging


sickpuppy123 wrote:
If it wasn't for you DK, I would have some of those trophies sittin on my mantle.



I am quite amazed by the arogance displayed in this thread. I have read works by both of the above authors and have been left rather unimpressed. The competition clearly isn't that high at "Lit". I would reccomend both of you read some of the excellent stories on this site for inspiration and quit trumpeting your acheivements.

Respectfully.

Walter

 

[jomar]

I got some popcorn from the GB. Anyone want some?

 

[FatDino]

I got some popcorn from the GB. Anyone want some?

Please don't. I may be tempted to throw those at this guy...and we all know that's not allowed in public.

 

[fcdc]

Are you sure you aren't Andy Kaufman?

Stella,

Andy Kaufman had wit and a knowledge of the subject matter.

That should draw enough of a difference.

 

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[scouries]

New story on the bookshelves

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[yevkassem72]

Story Review…

Here’s a brand new story review. The story is just out today May 16th 2007.

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Paul’s Baby[/size]​

by scouries​

Loving Wives Category​

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Hot off the press from the great, but besieged, award winning author J.R. Scouries comes this new tale of marriage and cuckoldry in twenty first century America.

Yes, it is a ‘Loving Wives’ category story, but no, this author doesn’t cater to the sick minds of the pitiful crowd of losers who often hover around new LW stories like hungry piranhas. It’s no tale of revenge nor is it meant to assuage the pain so many of these cuckolded men, who’ve so often been left by their wives for younger, better endowed men, often feel.

Instead it looks at how a modern woman, a beautiful, sexy twenty-seven year old, faces the realities of work and love and sex in suburban America. Of how she’s often pushed into corners not of her own making. Of hard but real choices every American woman is forced to make.

It’s also a cautionary tale for those men who believe that today’s modern woman will be satisfied only with a nice home and clothes and baubles, that this new sexually wise woman will be satisfied by an inattentive and unskilled lover.

Liz Roberts, twenty-six, a nurse and happily married for five years, slowly drifts into a frustration born of her inability to conceive and her husband Johnnies seeming lack of interest in doing anything more than going through the motions when it comes to sex.

Finding it increasingly difficult to ignore the siren call of sexual freedom that seems to be blared incessantly at adult Americans through every media outlet, Liz finally finds herself lured into temptation by her best friend, the lusty, man devouring Cathy.

His name is Paul, just only nineteen, a boy/man freshman at the local university. And yet he possesses a sexual confidence and presence that belies his years. As he drives her to his den deep in the student quarter, the throbbing, motor of his Harley, which vibrates angrily between her thighs, simply presages what she’s soon to feel. COCK! Big cock. A cock that instantly drives any thought of her husband from her mind. Liz feels no guilt or regret as the pleasure rolls in wave after wave through her body.

And she knows immediately that this relentlessly spurting prick will finally deliver the seed that will wipe away her barrenness. Will Liz ultimately be able to balance her conflicting needs? Will she be able to maintain a loving, family lifestyle while still satisfying this aching need for sex the boy has unleashed?

This is a story that may also be especially helpful for many of Literotica’s most well known female authors, often frustrated women who toil all day to produce erotica for the masses and then thrash alone all night in unsatisfied need. Can Liz’s experiences signal some avenue of release for these lovely but often ill tempered creatures? God willing.

Please people, before all copies of this masterwork disappear off the shelves, rush out and read it. Early reviews have been both gratifying and bizarre.

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to be continued – jrs

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[starrkers]

Just checked out some impartial commentary on this story. So far it has garnered 10 public comments.
The first one (I suspect from the author himself) is a glowing 100.
There are two 75s, one 25 and six 0s.

Guess it's all uphill from here.

ETA: Congrats Scouries, on the newly found H filled status.

 

[Stella_Omega]

Stella,

Andy Kaufman had wit and a knowledge of the subject matter.

That should draw enough of a difference.

But if Andy were getting into a role -- he could be as obnoxious, or dim, or whatever, as was required... And he would never break role, not even if it got him kicked out of his parents' home. he was known for it...

 

[jomar]

Please don't. I may be tempted to throw those at this guy...and we all know that's not allowed in public.

No, don't! We're his best friends. You think this thread would stay on the top of the list if it weren't for us. Where do I vote!

 

[cloudy]

Just checked out some impartial commentary on this story. So far it has garnered 10 public comments.
The first one (I suspect from the author himself) is a glowing 100.
There are two 75s, one 25 and six 0s.

Guess it's all uphill from here.

ETA: Congrats Scouries, on the newly found H filled status.

No H on his newest.

Hmmm....let's see what these comments say, shall we?

just another idiot stupid writer
05/16/07 by Anonymous
sick...youre sick, you need medical help wimppy (sic) or just need to die for the best of all, you idiot

What a waste of time!
05/16/07 by Anonymous in Atlanta, GA
This story is nothing more than a couple of bitches who's only concerns in the world are their own gratification. Who now plot to have the husband fit the bill as "Daddy" to not one but two bastard kids. There isn't one redeeming value in any of these characters. What a waste of time to write as well as read.

When you got it as a writer?
05/16/07 by Anonymous
What, did you have your friend write you a comment? Maybe you did it yourself. Wasn't particularly well written and the subject matter was disgusting. Once again, no justice in the world and indiscretions all right because she "enjoys" it. In what universe is cheating all right? Bad enough to cuckold her husband, but to let him raise her bastard child? Let's hope someone has the stones to write a decent ending to thus story, I don't think we can count on the author to do it.

Don't hate her?
05/16/07 by Anonymous in Behing You
Just a couple of cheating conniving whores. Don't hate them? They're "normal"? you are one sick fuck, I hope one day your wife does the same to you!

What Can I Say?
05/16/07 by Anonymous in The United States
I thought this "story" sucked. The "writer" tried to ward off criticism with his lead in to the text, but he apparently failed miserably. Never fear, "writer," the comment Nazis will be here soon to chastise the rest of us for making unfavorable remarks. Then you'll feel better. You won't learn anything useful, but you'll feel better.

Oh, Well!!
05/16/07 by louguy35 in SoutheastUSA
As I have stated before, there are good wirters in the Loving Wives genre, and there are not so good writers. The story is the only way to judge. This is a bad story.

If it was a good sex story
05/16/07 by Kanga40
it may have been bearable.
Maybe thinking this story has good sex is a 'man thing', 'cause it sure did nothing for me.
The one redeeming feature it could have had, it didn't.

 

[jomar]

Just checked out some impartial commentary on this story. So far it has garnered 10 public comments.
The first one (I suspect from the author himself) is a glowing 100.
There are two 75s, one 25 and six 0s.

Guess it's all uphill from here.

ETA: Congrats Scouries, on the newly found H filled status.

I besiege thee, do not torment the great award winning Scouries, he has new book on the shelves.

 

[FatDino]

No, don't! We're his best friends. You think this thread would stay on the top of the list if it weren't for us. Where do I vote!

This thread hurts to read, but at the same time, fucking hilarious.

 

[drksideofthemoon]

Is there a point to this thread?

 

[jomar]

Is there a point to this thread?

In an existential manner.

 

[drksideofthemoon]

In an existential manner.

Okay...

 

[jomar]

Okay...

As in "it is what you make it," that's all. It's bizarre, but most posting here are making it fun.

 

[drksideofthemoon]

As in "it is what you make it," that's all. It's bizarre, but most posting here are making it fun.

Okay - as in whatever floats your boat...

 

[jomar]

Okay - as in whatever floats your boat...

I know. This thread is an acquired taste.

 

[drksideofthemoon]

I know. This thread is an acquired taste.

Something like sheep's eyeballs? Thanks, but no thanks.

 

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