The Rosebud

[Rrrosyn]

All the feedback I have been getting for this has been great. I am trying to write a sequel and would like to know if any authors out there can see anything that should be improved or covered with more depth.

Please read it. (And vote.) Then, come give me some constructive criticism.

http://literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=25906

It is a Gay Male piece, so if you are not inclined to try the genre, don't.

Thanks.

 

[Marxist]

Can one read it even if they're not a gay male?

I personally like the main female character at the center

 

[Rrrosyn]

Of course!

Just a warning to some who may not like that catagory. I do.

I'd probably have a hard time looking objectively at a story from the "Extreme" catagory. It'd be work.

Is this payback for that hammer and chisel comment I made?