The Rival's Daughter

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The bar that Eden works at is a neutral zone for most people and families. One of her regulars, a hitman from another Mob and family has found himself lusting after her. The only thing he doesnt know is that she is the daughter of his boss' rival, and the only thing she doesnt know is what he does and who he works for. Will she be able to trust him? Will he be able to trust her?



Name: Eden Marlo
Age: 23
height: 5'9"
weight: 134lbs
hair: chocolate brown and wavvy
eyes: light brown

description: Her skin is a creamy white that looks soft and beautiful. She has a slim figure with some muscles. She is slightly curvy, with 36C breasts, and long legs. With mysterious and enchanting eyes it's hard for her to not grab the attention of a man.


bio: Eden was a simple girl working as a bartender at a local bar. She was sweet, smart, attractive and lethal. Unfortunately for those who became infatuated with her and hung with the wrong crowd had their lives ended earlier that planned if they made a wrong move. What people didnt know was that she was the daughter of a very large crime family, The Marlos. Her over protective father and family made it hard for her to date. She also worked for the family as a lethal hit-woman. She was trained and made to be deadly, and her looks helped with her plans. She is trained in Martial Arts as well as acrobats. She would rather use her hands and legs to kill a man then bullets or a knife, but is an amazing shot.

She wants to lead an average life, date, be a normal girl of her age but is held back by her family name.
 
OOC:

Is the position of the paramour taken already? And if not, do you mind if I give it a shot?
 
mfm_boyfriend said:
OOC:

Is the position of the paramour taken already? And if not, do you mind if I give it a shot?


i'm just looking for a hitman. what kind of idea did you have. this is a one-on-one rp.
 
here's an idea

Name : Antonio "Tony" Viccene
Age: 28
Height: 5' 10"
Weight : 170lbs
Hair: Black, thick, cut short and slicked back
Eyes: A riveting smouldering dark brown

Description:

Slim and fit, Tony is impeccably dressed and stylish. A smooth talker with fast hand, a fast wit, fast moves and a killer instinct. He packs a big gun on a holster hidden in his armani suits, and another big one in his pants. He's udes to being able to charm the pants off most women

Bio:

All his life, Tony was the little kid, picked on and mocked. He learned how to fight when he was young, and how to use his brains to get out of situations his fists couldnt handle. .. his moral ambiguity allowing him to move up the ranks alarmingly fast in his Uncles orgnaization

Now no one picks on Tony. He has a rep for being one of the best at what he does. This has led directly into conflict with the Marlo family and their relations. The feelings arent friendly.
 
OOC: i dig it.

I dont want the whole thing to be just sex, if you get my drift. I also like alot of detail. If that works with you. Hope it's okay if we start now. :-D


IC:
It was an average Wednesday night at the bar Eden worked at called "the red stone". At the moment she is wearing jeans, and a low cut haltar top. Her long hair draped around her shoulders as she smiles at the customers and makes their drinks.

It's a fairly slow night and she knows she has 'work' to do in the early morning hours that follow her shift for her father. Apparently some guy is causing a problem for business amongst many people and needs to be taken out. She takes a swig of her beer she has and leans against the bar waiting for more people or something to do.
 
mfm_boyfriend said:
here's an idea

Name : Antonio "Tony" Viccene
Age: 28
Height: 5' 10"
Weight : 170lbs
Hair: Black, thick, cut short and slicked back
Eyes: A riveting smouldering dark brown

Description:

Slim and fit, Tony is impeccably dressed and stylish. A smooth talker with fast hand, a fast wit, fast moves and a killer instinct. He packs a big gun on a holster hidden in his armani suits, and another big one in his pants. He's udes to being able to charm the pants off most women

Bio:

All his life, Tony was the little kid, picked on and mocked. He learned how to fight when he was young, and how to use his brains to get out of situations his fists couldnt handle. .. his moral ambiguity allowing him to move up the ranks alarmingly fast in his Uncles orgnaization

Now no one picks on Tony. He has a rep for being one of the best at what he does. This has led directly into conflict with the Marlo family and their relations. The feelings arent friendly.

Since you havent posted and you kinda said you would, i'm moving on to another person who would like to take your spot. sorry.
 
Leon DeMarco

Leonadro Demarco "Leo"
6'4"
Tough build
Dark blue eyes
Dark blonde, buzz cut
Tan

Bio: He had first worked for a undercover police force where he learned the basics and advance and after a few years, quit because of the lack of activities. Later on, he was asked to meet someone named Lorenzo whom he found out was the leader of a lethal mob, The Perelli's. He had been suggested to them because of his remarkable marksmen jobs, and was pleased with his work. About a year later, after first meeting Lorenzo and for working with him, he had become one with the shadows and carefully planned out each hit for he was a hitman. Stealthy and strong: I'll be in and out...

IC:
It had been quite the weekend in Africa, hot and damp, but dry at the same time. He never thought he would find so much sand there. A couple of hours ago, he had just gotten off the plane that had taken him there where he was forced to take out one of Lorenzo's old friend who was, doing some side work. A job was a job to him, no questions asked. He got answers and got paid, that's all he did.

He usually went to a bar, down the street a couple blocks where they served great drinks but more importantly, had one of the hottest women working there ever. He barely could supress his raging hard on whenever he entered that place. Tonight was no different kind of night, he stepped out of the house with a black shirt on, with blue jeans on and headed down to the bar.

As he entered, music was playing pretty hard, but soft enough for people to talk. And there before him was the beauty he was lusting for, Eden. It had taken him almost ten visits to finally get her name. He wondered how many more it would take to get her number. He had his peeper in his back pocket and hoped to god it never went off. He stepped up to the nearest bar stool and sat on it, looking over at her. "So how ya been Eden?" He asked her andhe could tell she seemed surprised, or faked it anyway.
 
Eden watched as Leo walked in and sat down. The only regular of hers who her knee's went weak over. She smiled at him and walked over to where he was sitting. Her normal ritual of walking over asking him what he wanted, even though he usually got the same thing everytime. But she was used to order, and everything accurate. Thats how she conducted the business of killing. Clean, accurate, and she was never seen, never left a trace and never ever messed up.

She wiped her hands on the rag she kept in her back pocket and then leaned against the bar.
"i've been doing pretty well. how are you? I havent seen ya for a few days, was startin' to worry that something happened to you."

Eden knew he was fine, but whenever she saw him she didnt know what to do or say, she usually didnt get this distracted by a man; she never showed it and always played cool when she saw him so he wouldnt notice.

"so what can i get ya to drink tonight?"
 
"Ah c'mon, you know what I want." He grinned and gave her a playful wink and he started laughing. "I've been fine, had a buinsess arrangment down in Africa with a fewother employees, seems there had been somekind of scandal. You know how it is." Whenever he walked into this place, he was greet with a smile and acknowledged like a human being and he liked it alot. Eden was the nicest to him, perhaps that is why he became attracted with her.

Females never really caught his eye on a mission but there were times, when he couldn't help but look. Usually however, it was a cover up of who he was. Considering he wasn't on a mission currently, he could lust over whoever he wanted. Eden was someone who was in his direct line of fire alot, but the lust started to decrease and perhaps a feeling of love and connection took it's place. Though, very miniscule.

He finally, after a couple months of talking with her, got his balls together and asked, "So, Eden, got any plans for tonight?"
 
She smiled and made his drink as he had talked about his trip. His smile was so sweet, she loved the way he looked at her. She set his drink in front of him and nodded along with his story, knowing what he was talking about and smiled softly.

She heard his question, and thought for a moment and frowned. She had a job that night, but didnt know what to tell him. She wanted to say, 'no i have nothing to do, lets go out.' but she couldnt. But she couldnt tell him she had to go kill a few people either, it was a big hit tonight and needed to focus.

"I'm sorry Leo, my other job calls tonight. Maybe another night."
And she winked and took the address that she had written on a piece of paper out of her pocket and looked at it, not letting him see under the bar, and shoved it back in her back pocket. She looked a little dissapointed, she wanted to see him outside the bar, but she had to do what her father told her.
 
He sighed and nodded. He really liked this girl and wanted to see her out and about. No one knew who she was. He liked challenges and she was the biggest challenge he ever faced. He swallowed a large gulp of the fine liquor she served and smiled. Leo's side vibrated and he felt it, he saw the number and closed his eyes. "You mind saving me my seat? This is an expensive seat, hard to get one with the most wonderfull babe in this entire city." He winked and walked towards the back, dodging large clumps of people.

He arrived at the payphone in the back, secluded where he could talk. Acting as normal as possible, he looked around for a microphone, yet couldn't find out and moved to the phone, putting a few quarters in and dialing the number, which he deleted after dialing. The phone on the other line picked up and it was quiet. "White Tiger..." It was his codename, he and the high officials of the Perelli's.

"Very nice work in Tanzania. That's what I like about you Tiger, your in and out like a flash of lightning." Leo grinned."Thank you sir, this was a bit harder compaired to the China ordeal." "Never mind about that, we've got a problem and it is in your area. The man's name is Frank O'Conner, he's been selling information to The Marlos and you know we can't have any of that. There is an address underneath the telephone you are in. Take him out, no guns, need it to be clean. I don't want the Feds after you, since it is to close to your heart. The money from the last job will be sent to your account tommorow afternoon and once I get word that this job is complete, you'll get your money. Go get'em Tiger." And like that, the conversation wasover.

He hung up the phone, felt around the underside of the phone and found a slip of paper, encoded with the address. He slipped it into his pocket and walked back to the bar. "I hate my job..." He said toher, once he got back.
 
She saw his facial expression change as he looked down at his pager. And then nodded as he had asked to 'save his seat'. She blushed at what he called her, he had a tendency to do that. He Always said something nice and made her smile. But he never said anything gross or overly sexual, which was another reason she was attracted to him.

She watched him walk away and she served other customers and no one sat in his seat. She sighed again wishing she could go out with Leo. He came back and she smiled at him.
"Yeah, i hate my job too...not this one..the other.." and her phone rang, and it was one of the people that worked for her father.
"i'll be right back."
and she walked away answering the phone. She nodded along to the phone call, "yes sir", "yes sir", "I understand sir". She hung up and wrote the name of the guy she was supposed to kill at the address she already had and shoved the paper in her pocket again.

She walked back over to him and sighed. She tucked her hair behind her ears and opened a beer for another guy and then looked back to Leo.
"you gotta work tonight now?"
 
"Yeah, hate working for those bloody bastards." He joked, using a fake Irish accent. He drank the rest of his drink and smiled. "I'm sorry about tonight, hope everything goes well for you. See you around." He gave her a quick wink and was on his way, after slapping the bar, leaving 30 dollars to deal with. He always tipped her well. It was only eight o'clock. The time he had been given was at nine thirty, thatis when he would strike. He always did things in an orderly manner.

Sitting in his DB9, he searched in his compartment for a serum that would kill the injectie after a few hours, giving him the fealing of a simple heart ache and head ache, though it left no trace of poision. He pulled out of the bar's parking lot, cruising the 25 mph road signs at about 45. After a good 20 minute drive, he parked outside the home. This man had absolutely no family. That is what the Don always checks before hiring a man, so this would move smoothly.

He awaited until all remaining lights were out until he could make his move. He opened and closed his door stealthly, before moving in the yard. Leo quickly scanned for lasers of any sort and found none, however, a couple gaurds did patrol the back yard and side yard. Leo hid in the bushes and made an attempt at the pipe on the side of the home which he was able to climb up to the second floor window. As he hopped through the window, he knew he was two rooms down from the man he was here to kill. Using a camera thathe stuck underneath the door, which could be viewed on the opposite end, he saw a gaurd walking towards the door, stop and then move away, down into the kitchen.

Hell, if he worked for a greedy bastard and didn't get paid much but left him in the house, I would steal his food. Leo opened the door slowly and crouched, walking down the halls where he could see two gaurds talking on the 1st floor. Using the shadows that were available, he made his way towards the mans room which he found was locked when he got there. Using a pick, he quickly unlocked the door. No alarms, no nothing, that was how he got things done. Leo approached the man's bed, whose arm was hanging out of the covers. He removed the needle from the sack and placed it inside his arm, injecting the serum, hebegan to stir, he moved towards the open window. Behind him, he heard a toliet flush and he hid against the outside wall, hearing the click click click of high heels. A woman had been in the bedroom before hehad gotten there, well this was his lucky timing, thank god.

Using the railing, he simply hung from the bottom of it, without any gaurds noticing him. Leo dropped to the ground and approached his car and entered it. Quick and easy, things weren't hard for Leo, thank god. His tasks were hard to the normal man but, Leo wasn't normal. As he looked towards the door, he saw the same woman exit the home and walk to her car, from what he could tell was very expensive and stormed off. He was confused by who she was for he had never been warned about a female, just the man and the gaurds.
 
Eden stood behind the bar looking frazzeled. Her hit did not go as planned the night before. She had the wrong shoes and had to go in her heels, in stead of the flat sole-less shoes she usually wore. And the worst part was, someone else was there, she heard him and smelt him. She knew it was a man, he wore enough cologne for her to smell him from the bathroom. After she had head the man come in and leave she snapped his neck and left just as quickly as she had come in.

The night was slow at the bar, no one was in and she had an even bigger job that night, it wasnt just one guy it was 4, heavily armed men, that belonged to The Perelli's. She didnt have names just locations and they would be together. She didnt know why she had to kill them she just knew she had too. They hated her father and her, and that was enough reason for her.

She sipped a beer and ran her fingers through her hair as she calculated her next moves for the hit that night. She was getting a little stressed and slightly edgy. This was something that she couldnt screw up.
 
He had checked his bank account and a 5 digit number had just been entered into his bank account, it was good life, taking it away. He stepped into the bar, rather earlier than usual and found Eden sitting at the bar, looking down while sipping a beer. He came and sat right next to her. "How'd you dolast night? Busy?"

He could tell he scarred her a bit but not to much. He smiled and went around the bar to get himself a drink, no one was around, it would keep her off her feet."Don't worry about it, I've got it covered." He winked and sat back down. She slipped the paper, behind the bar. "What were you working on?" He realized he was getting a bit personal and quickly stepped aside. "Sorry for being nosey."
 
She looked up and kinda jumped as she saw him and him walking around the bar. She didnt mind him walking behind, as long as her boss wasnt there.
"Last night...didnt go so hott, so tonight i hope i'll make it up for my boss."
She nodded and looked at him, blushing as he winked at her.

"working on? nothing really, just kinda thinking about my job tonight."
she paused and kinda sat there sipping her beer and leaning against the bar to talk to him.
"so what are you doin' tonight? any plans?"

She figured he'd be working too, but ya never know.
 
"Tonight? Nope. free as a bird, got any plans for later tonight?" He had a plan for him and her, if she accepted his proposal. If she didn't, he'd cancel and try another time, afterall she was a lady willing to go after. He stretched with a sigh and finally took one large gulp of beer. "I don't know how any job of yours could go wrong, you do it so well and perfect, especially with your looks. Hope my payment was sufficient by the way,"
 
"yeah, i've got some big clients to meet with tonight."
And by big she meant strong and powerful and by client she meant med she needed to kill.

"yeah, well my job has all kinda of twists and turns in it so...yeah. but thanks for the compliment and the huge tip! it was waay to much. if you keep tipping me that much you'll go broke!"

she smiled and grinned at him as she checked her watch for the time. She had some time left before she needed to get ready. She wanted to spend some time with Leo before she had to go be the deadly woman that she was.
 
"Clients, hm?" He sighed, this meant she wasn't going to be free. He sighed and looked into the mug of beer, giving off a depressed feeling. He had wanted her to spend some time with him for a while, he reached for the phone and looked at her. "Well, perhaps we can enjoy one anothers company some other night. Jobs tend to get in the way alot." He now hated his job because he could have more nights available to be with her, but considering the pay, he'd stick with it, even if it gave him few days off.

Leo opened his phone, the background of it had the picture of them two having their arms around each other, looking at the camera with faces of joy and excitement. It had been the one and only time they had gone out and it had been with a group of each others friends. He longed for another night like that. He opened up the recent contacts list and started to scan through it, after taking another chug of his beer.
 
She smiled at him as he looked at her, he said he wanted to see her again and she deffinately agreed. She OH SO desperately wanted to see him outside the bar, she was attracted to this guy and he wasnt someone on her list of people she wasnt allowed to date, as far as she knew. He was sweet, and honest with her. they never asked real penetrating questions and she wasnt real sure for what he did with his job, she just knew that he traveled...a lot!

She looked at her watch, it was 8:14 and she needed to be ready and at 8:52 and strike at 9:07. Her timing had to be perfect since these guys could not be messed with. Go in do her thing and get out. She might be able to come back to the bar afterwards. The way she worked she'd be able too.

She looked at Leo.
"well, i gotta get going, i might be back in a few hours, if you uh..wanna meet me here?"
She smiled sweetly and honestly in hopes he'd come back or stay or something.
 
He'd have to cancel-. He stopped midthought and looked at her. "You serious? You wanna do something later? Yeah, I'll be here sure. What time?" He quiestioned. He was finally going to hang out with her again, it was amazing. For once, he didn't have a job to do and she would be free alittle later. He couldn't wait.


{sorry, it's so short. Mind's alittle...out of it.}
 
She smiled and saw how excited he got when she told him she'd be back. Eden thought for a minute and calculated what time she'd be back.
"umm...maybe around 11:30 or later?"
she paused for a moment.
"I dont know how long it will take me, where i'm meeting them is close by so it shouldnt be too long...you have my number right?"


[no worries :)]
 
He checked through his phone and shook his head. "No...no I don't...What is it?" He couldn't believe it, he was finally going to hang out with her, alone however. Though his plans for the evening had to change, he could manuever through and tweak some things here and there to make it great. He placed some money on the bar for her, and a little tip, alittle less than the other night.

"Well, I hope everything goes well in your meeting. Chow." Out of the incredible blue sky that was now floating inside of his mind, he pressed his lips on her cheek and halfway out the door, realized what he had just done. He stopped, thought about it for a moment then kept going.
 
ooc: sorry, i didnt reply soon, i was sort of out of town. lol but i'm back now.

---------------------IC:

She took the money and felt his lips pressed to her cheek. Her cheeks turned bright red and she grinned. She didnt expect it at all, but she liked it. His lips were soft. She had forgotten what it was like to be kissed as softly as that. She was usually killing men, not getting cheek kisses from them.

After he left she went into the back pulling on black pants, long sleeved shirt, and pulled her hair back tight. She pulled her flat shoes on and put on some dark eye makeup. She got into her car and got to the Perelli house where the men were. She parked her car in the back and she saw an open window and laughter from men, and she smiled...they made her job easier than planned. She saw know censors and no gaurds outside, they were the guards, and taking them out would upset the whole Perelli 'gang' and throw them off completely. She got out of her Black Panoz Esperante GLTM Convertible and gently and acrobatically made her way towards the window, Harry Moe and Curly were all there. The 3 sat there drinking beers and watching a baseball game.

The window was small and their back was too it. She waited and calculated her moves, she sat there for some time waiting for the right time. She slithered herself through it without a sound and hid behind the couch where one of the men sat, there was a reason they called her The Snake. Before either of the other 2 men knew what was going on she snapped their friends neck silently. And as they saw him not move or respond to their questions she got up kicking, punching, the other 2 men, but dodging all of their moves. She dodged everything and felt a few bullets fly past her head. As she shoved a knife into one of the men she felt the other man's punch to her cheek, below her eye, but he got to feel a bullet enter his heart as she shot him with one of their own guns. Since she was always proud of her work she left her signature; The letter "s" written in calligraphy on a piece of cloth, she left it on the table there.This whole process had taken sometime and she crawled back out before anyone could notice or call anyone. she got back to her car and drove back to the bar parking in the back, and changing into a cute top and putting sandals on. She left her hair, make-up, and pants the same. She was running a little late and didnt have time to waste as she ran back into the bar.
 
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Leo had converted most of his plans that night while waiting for her. Alot of the changes had been done in the car. He looked toward the dashboard which held the time for him, it was getting to be almost eleven, just what she had told him. Though Leo was only a couple of blocks away, he noticed a gleam in the dark road and realized it was a dark vehicle, could've sworn it had been there the night of his mission...

He shrugged the thought off and pulled into the bar's parking lot. He opened the door and noticed the car a couple cars down and on the opposite side. Leo bit his lips and noticed, even through the dark black tint, no one was in there. He was very curious now, but it would have to wait, his life was now more important than his job. He stepped into the bar and ordered a light drink while he awaited her arrival at the bar.
 
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