The power of illustration critisim wanted

[rondori]

I have the same stories up in both illustrated and non illustrated forms:

'I remember Bethany' and 'The Two Companions' and the stats consistently show ten times the number of reads for the illustrated version. To me this shows that people want to see stories with pictures.

If you have any thoughts or wish to criticize the drawings (composition, shading, etc.) feel free.

examples:

 

[xssve]

I think that's pretty cool, and illustration can add a lot.

As far as criticism goes, just draw, these work for me as illustrations - a little sketchy on the anatomy here and there, but the composition is good, and they do what they need to do, which is to tell a story.

 

[jm_kaye]

The composition is very good. I'd recommend some more practice in anatomical drawing. I know, it's boring as hell but it's one of those things that an artist just as to keep on doing throughout life in order to keep an edge.