The panties in the tree

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Normally I have some kind of idea of what I'd like to see in a story but this time I only have a very vague idea and a bit of a mystery. Namely:

A pair of panties is found atop a tree's upper branches. The tree is tall enough that it would at least require a ladder to reach the branch easily (i.e. without climbing tools) it was found on and there are no tall buildings close enough for some one to reach out and touch the branches.

Could the wind have snatched the panties away from a laundry line or a woman who was enjoying a moment of bliss in a field? Could it be the panties of some super hero who needs to learn how to properly change clothes mid flight, or...well I don't know.

Like I said, no story on my part (except maybe a story where a town tries to figure out who the panties belong to (maybe the tree is the town's Christmas tree)), so I'd love to hear your all's thoughts on how the panties got up there and what kind of story could be done with that.
 
How: slingshot

POV: An amateur detective who tries to find the launch point and perpetrator.

Big fun if the panties have an embroidered name or at least initials.

BBW fun if the panties are huge.
 
slingshot - love it!

but never mind the perpetrator - find the girl!!
 
How: slingshot

POV: An amateur detective who tries to find the launch point and perpetrator.

Big fun if the panties have an embroidered name or at least initials.

BBW fun if the panties are huge.

Hmm, a little twist I just thought of might be that a girl walking down the sidewalk sees the panties in the tree. She could be an amateur detective, a cop, or just a regular girl but either way, when she comes across the panties in the tree, she realizes they are hers. But she can't recall how they got there or who put them there! She must get the panties back without anybody seeing because of the embroidered name or at least initials on the panties.
 
I was interested in this post, since I am currently working on a voyeuristic/knicker-wetting story for my first submission; having been a reader for years. My story revolves around the messages and pairs of panties left on a bush.
Thus having been prompted by Strangebuddy et al, I will get on and finish 'The Knicker Bush' pronto
 
Cool idea. I think the girl was pleasing herself thinking she was alone in a park, some guys came along and grabbed up the panties she had set aside, and threw them up in the tree.
 
Cool idea. I think the girl was pleasing herself thinking she was alone in a park, some guys came along and grabbed up the panties she had set aside, and threw them up in the tree.
The bucket truck was left with the key in after the construction crew left for the day. After she left the bar, two guys followed her. Ones she'd danced with. When they saw the truck, one of them got an idea....
 
Normally I have some kind of idea of what I'd like to see in a story but this time I only have a very vague idea and a bit of a mystery. Namely:

A pair of panties is found atop a tree's upper branches. ....
and then there were two.
and one morning there were three up there.
...
 
Love SonNeedsMommy's idea about the amateur detective!

How about this though: two friends, a guy and a girl, are walking through a park when they see the panties on a branch. They spend the whole story speculating about what might have happened (the guy laying into it much more enthusiastically than the girl), then a gust of wind blows the girl's skirt up, and he glimpses the exact same panties on her. He catches her eyes, and the story ends. (Or begins.)
 
Love SonNeedsMommy's idea about the amateur detective!

How about this though: two friends, a guy and a girl, are walking through a park when they see the panties on a branch. They spend the whole story speculating about what might have happened (the guy laying into it much more enthusiastically than the girl), then a gust of wind blows the girl's skirt up, and he glimpses the exact same panties on her. He catches her eyes, and the story ends. (Or begins.)

Nifty idea! Are you writing it now?
 
Nah, I have a little too much on my plate to be writing stories right now. If you're asking if you (or anyone else) can run with it, go ahead. :) I'd love to read someone's take on this.
 
Love SonNeedsMommy's idea about the amateur detective!

How about this though: two friends, a guy and a girl, are walking through a park when they see the panties on a branch. They spend the whole story speculating about what might have happened (the guy laying into it much more enthusiastically than the girl), then a gust of wind blows the girl's skirt up, and he glimpses the exact same panties on her. He catches her eyes, and the story ends. (Or begins.)

Love it!

Could indeed very well be the start of the story as well: they walk through the park, see the panties in the tree, then thanks to that gust of wind he spots her wearing the exact same. Should be something distinct: very fancy with lace or so, maybe rather girlish with pink ponies printed on it, whatever. He'll have a great day fantasising about it, she'll be very reluctant or embarrassed.
 
Love SonNeedsMommy's idea about the amateur detective!

How about this though: two friends, a guy and a girl, are walking through a park when they see the panties on a branch. They spend the whole story speculating about what might have happened (the guy laying into it much more enthusiastically than the girl), then a gust of wind blows the girl's skirt up, and he glimpses the exact same panties on her. He catches her eyes, and the story ends. (Or begins.)

Oh my. I'd love to see that girl's eyes after the guy saw her wearing the same ones....

She's actually been goading him along, with her body language and facial expressions, all the time, acting like an innocent little, shocked maiden.

Man that's hot.
 
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