The Millennium Project

[Michael]

Great start, Crystal! Laurel's encouraging response to yard work is enough to tempt one to become a gardener.

Looking forward to the next chapters!

 

[Butterfly]

Great start Crystal, made me feel like I was right there(I know we all will be but not yet)
Alright who came around the corner, who was first to get there? Now I'm impatiently waiting for the second chapter....

 

[Dixon Carter Lee]

Crystal -- fabulous opening. It's just how I've always pictured Laurel and Manu. Not only was it well written and sexy, but you have set up the other authors so well! Damn good work. Truly.

 

[Fallen Angel]

Bravo! Bravo! Crystal.
Have a happy holiday season!

 

[*Eve*]

Great start Crystal. You will be a tough act to follow.

 

[Bonnie Wee Lassie]

Well all I can say is awesome and that is how I voted for this one. It is an excellent piece of writing.

Bonnie

 

[Zoda]

i'm speechless (lucky i can still type then huh!). Crystal, you've done a magnificent job, if the other authors do half as well it'll still be fantastic.

 

[Bs]

Very Good! I could picture it in my mind as if I were there! This is going to a masterpiece! Bravo, loved it!

[This message has been edited by bs (edited 12-19-1999).]

 

[Deborah]

Hey Crystal, what's up with your story? Laurel and Manu are the only ones who got off? What about the rest of us?

Your spelling is strange. Bodrigo is gonna be on your ass. I don't think he'll buy your Brit accent excuse. You know how he is a stickler (gets all sticky) about this spelling stuff.

 

[Mrhappy]

Hey Deborah....Rodrigo also thinks that fractions of inches are important!! Micro-manager, big time!

Just humor Rodrigo. Don't get your panties in a wad (that 1/2 inch might stick out!).

Yes...great start Crystal. Excellent simile/metaphor(?), never could keep those two straight, with Manu in the back yard with his hose.
Looking forward to reading the next installments. Trying to get my mind (dirty little bugger), ready for my contribution. I have a question which I'm about to post on the 'general' board about female masturbation. A few scenes have been germinating for me involving several reunion attendees getting caught masturbating while they're driving to the reunion. Need some input <pun intended>.

Later, have fun

 

[Crystal]

Thank you everyone for the wonderful feedback! Deborah, I knew it was too tough a challenge satisfying your over indulgent imagination - I guess I failed on that front... I'm sure you will be able to make up for it though! Spelling? Well too be honesh I dont giv a shit!!
Its pretty weird that I got this response 'cos I really didn't take it seriously and just treated it like a bit of fun (which it is). The other stories that I've done didn't nearly get such a good response and I thought they were better! Just goes to show I guess. Have fun with your installments and your reading. Hope you all have a great New Year - I'm hiring a converted barn with a load of friends over New Year - could be an interesting setting for a story...
See you all in the New Year!
Lots of love,
Crystal
xx

[This message has been edited by crystal (edited 12-20-1999).]

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[Butterfly]

Crystal...as the saying goes you can never please everyone, all the time. So don't even try, I think your story was great and a wonderful start to this project. Like I said I was glad I wasn't going second, I'm still panicking(?) about when I do have to go. Crystal hang in there and I do expect a hot story about a barn and group of people and bringing in the new year.

should be interesting

 

[Laurel]

Just got HSWriter's Ch. 2 in my mailbox today and YEEOWW! Another scorcher... As soon as I get Sabrina's piece (or on Wednesday, whichever comes first), I'll post both Chapter 2's and we'll be off and running again... I think this story is going to be awesome, and I'm already looking forward to the next chain story - one that isn't so, umm, personal... hehe

 

[XXplorher]

Hmm, the fact it's personal is the fun behind it. I can't WAIT to see how people approach the situation. How they see the personalities and approach them sexualy. The whole idea is TREMENDOUS - my praise to Crystal.

Only reason I didn't get involved is because I was concerned about being misunderstood in my approach to it. My imagination would have run wild, and I get the feeling I'm not free to display my 'take' without possibly offending some. Wouldn't be my intention (I had quite the opposite in mind) but I couldn't write thinking 'Wait, will that be misinterpreted?' That's no fun, eh.

That said, if some of you want to cuff me and piss down my chest - go ahead. It's not being told as reality. Won't offend me in that context at all. But if you really want to chastize me - don't mention me at all. That'll crush my ego for certain. (Please don't do that. I wanna be Deborah's puppy at least!)

I can't wait to see Laurel get overwhelmed by the Literotica throng! God that's gonna be good. Fuck her senseless!! (And you better give Manu the biggest dick in the house - he built this place for christ sake. 'Cheers')

 

[Dixon Carter Lee]

HS -- great follow up! Loved it. Very nicely written. I have never been more filled with lust for Laurel (don't tell her).

 

[Laurel]

I have never been more filled with
lust for Laurel (don't tell her).

We won't.

Working on my piece right now, Dixon, so watch out what you wish for...

 

[Southernhelle]

I've got a roundabout question - in my section, I'm thinking about sliding in between Laurel's legs and licking her clit while DCL is fucking her from behind. Seeing as Literotica, from immaculate conception to present, is her baby, does this make me a motherfucker? heh.

 

[Dixon Carter Lee]

This is me not going there. (LOL)

[This message has been edited by Dixon Carter Lee (edited 12-23-1999).]

 

[Michael]

Laurel, your story was wonderful! I see you made sure Dixon has a very merry Christmas! Your chapter is one of the best so far! Thanks for your good work.

 

[Michael]

Great chapter, mrhappy! Since I'm only a year or two behind you, thanks for your plug for older guys. (Gosh, used to be that everyone you knew, knew what they were doing when Kennedy was shot. Now, you can party with people who weren't even born then!)

Mrhappy, you may look like Sean Connery, but I'm afraid I don't look like Pierce Brosnan. Still, I'll do my best to represent the Memphis contingent creditably, when my time...er, comes.

 

[Michael]

Then, again, I don't look like Q, either. There's a positive side to everything.

 

[Laurel]

This is me not going there. (LOL)

I dunno, Dixon, looks to me like you went there, and then some...

mrhappy steams it up again! Wow... whatta scorcher! We're all going to be tired and sore by the end of this one!!!

 

[SpecialK]

OMG deborah!! ROFLMAO!!!!!

Your chapter was HILARIOUS!!!!!!

K

 

[XXplorher]

I’m rich?!!! Holy shit! Wahoo!!!!!!!!!

I’m movin’ out of this one room studio, takin’ my shit 5 blocks to the beach and setting myself up in choice boardwalk home w/a big assed deck to fuck on during sunset! Hell yeah, this is good!

Hmm………..maybe I should have a house warming party, eh? It’s the least I could due with my gratitude to Deb for painting me loaded. All you bastards and evil women can come over and destroy the place for a week. Who gives a shit, I got plenty of cash, eh. Let’s freak! (seriously, I may do my own take on the characters of Literotica. I’m yearning to really delve into the personalities here and XXplore the possibilities in my vision. Really use the ‘people’ not just the limbs as much. Similar to Deborah’s, though with a higher premium on the ‘sexual’ personality. If some get offended, oh well – I assure you it wouldn’t be my intention to do so. )

So far I enjoyed MrHappy’s the most in a sexual sense. HSwriter had the best idea with the robes. Sabrina was the most enticing. And I’m in love with Dixon’s dick (you bastard). But Deb – this is the best story. You took advantage of the ‘people’ the personalities (as per their approach to the board). That’s what I’ve been waiting to see.

(Warning: Read no further if you haven't read the story yet - plotlines ruined)
That whole contract thing had me in tears.
MrHappy broke his viagra induced penis?! Hilarious.
The Gamecocks Bball game – perfect. Particularly how you went about it, the set up, everything! Take advantage of the personalities! Perfect!
The dialogue was exceptionally clever and funny.

In a word – tremendous!

Lastly – “Do the girls miss me? Do they ask about me with longing in their voice?” Ya got me Deb – and it was funny.

PS INquireHER' Hehehehe, lmao. Clever you are.

PPS Sorry for the rant. I got excited. Deborah got me jumpy ; )

 

[Hullo_nurse]

TOO FUCKING FUNNY!!!!! I was ROTFLMAO! Oh my gawd, you wrote a great chapter!!! I am trying so hard to stop laughing, I may just piss in my pants. You are incredible.
I wish I knew what exactly I suggested to "fix" MrHappy!!