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Dirk13

Dirk13

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OOC: ok this is the situation, me and some other guys are here to cruze tha mall and check out some chicks, and whatever, so thats pretty much it for the writen part, make up your chars names and we can start the storyline goen!


IC:

Name: Jacob Young
Build: muscular, plays football and b-ball for highschool(this can continue to school if wanted) Brown hair and eyes, Wearing a Leather Jacket, kakies, and a No Fear shirt. 6 ft 2 in. tall. 192 lbs, and a White Sox fitted hat on backwards.

[Edited by Dirk13 on 01-07-2001 at 03:46 PM]
 
Scott:
5'11
189 pounds
wrestles and plays soccer in high school
wearing a blue tee-shirt with a collar and a Britches hat on
(kind of dresses like a preppy, in other words) and some dark khakis
 
Daia-
5'8"
110 pounds
newly dyed silver hair
light green eyes
usually wears a tight shirt that says "Reading this shirt could kill you, and tight black pants, and has about shoulder length hair
 
Jezbel Withers, 5' 6", long brown hair down to her waist, brown eyes,125 lbs, keeps fit by walking and jogging, wearing a pair of jeans and a green tank top, has come to the mall in hopes of meeting up with some of her friends and, if not she will just be happy shopping.
 
James Sanders
6'1" Blue hair, blue eyes
Wearing wide legged jeans, fraying at the bottom from wear, and a black dress shirt. Kind of the freak of the group.
 
I'll check on later tonight, give some more people a chance, then i'll start it up.
 
Richard Greene
19
6'3
tan,good build
has a peircing through his left eyebrow.
peircing green eyes.
wearing straight black leather
 
I'm assuming we are waiting for some females, but I could be wrong. WE NEED SOME THOUGH!!!!
 
David Wilson
5'10
Black hair dyed dark red, and brown eyes
Soccer and bball player, 160lbs slim build
Wearing loose black cotton pants and a white sleeveless top.
Friendly type of guy who's good at talking.
 
June
21 yr old
short blonde hair
blue eyes
36D-24-36

I loved the way men looked at my legs and my breasts whenever I go to the mall. I dress to kill, and I love to see them ogling and drooling all over me. In fact, many a times I even know the perfect spot to go if things should go beyond that.

I had my customary clothes on - a tight blouse with a really short miniskirt.

Walking around the mall as usual, a group of people catch my attention, especially one or two of the guys. This would be interesting, I thought to myself, as I started to head in their direction, knowing I would obtain their attention soon after...
 
OOC: anyone still willing to carry this on? I'm game...

Damn! Late again!

Good thing we arranged to meet at the cd store, then at least the guys won't notice how late i am.
Funny bunch of guys really, i mean we don't have so much in common, but i guess that's what keeps us friends. Don't think you'll see many friends around who look so different!

I threw my jacket into the car and slammed the door. As i made my way through the mall i couldn't help but notice some pretty fine females walking around. Hopefully i could turn my recent bad luck around!
 
Jezbel

OOC: I'm for it. Maybe we can kick it off.

IC: I was standing there looking in the window of the shoe store. I was trying to decide if I wanted to go in and try on the cute pair of pumps in the window when a familiar face reflected in the window.

Turning slightly, I saw David Wilson pass by. I had seen him at school and I knew he was with a group of guys-all sports types. Jocks I guess though I had never really talked to any of them.

Actually I never really ended up talking to any guys without blushing and getting tongue tied. I wish I could be like some of my girl friends and be able to start up a conversation seemingly out of thin air but I couldnt. I must have been the only girl who stayed home the day of the Sadie Hawkins dance because I couldnt bring myself to ask any of the guys to it.

Sighing I turned back to the window and decided that I really didnt need the pumps and maybe I should keep looking for any of my friends.
 
Richard:


I got to the mall alone.I walked in and past the shoe store.I saw Jezbel.Actually I bumbed into her as she was leaving. "Hi,Jezbel," I said suprised..
 
David:

When i got to the store i was surprised to see only three of them. Surprisingly Richard wasn't there. Even though he's a bit of a rebel he's normally on time. Since the guys looked pretty occupied i went outside to see if Richard was coming in.

Lookng around, i saw Richard standing in front of the shoe store talking to a girl. She looked familiar too, not bad looking. I strolled over slowly so i could get a closer look and i realised the girl was Jezbel Withers. We had a couple of classes together, and i'd contemplated chatting her up a few times but she was so shy i felt guilty just talking to her. She'd blush if a guy even looked at her. "Good luck Richard", is all i could think of, he'd probably need it!
 
Jezbel

I wasnt looking where I was going and I ran into someone. Looking up, I saw Richard Greene. He was in the same group as David. A bit more of a rebel than the rest of his pals.

I knew a few girls who swooned over him and his leather but I never joined in on it. He seemed like a nice guy and all but too much on the wild side for me.

I had often wanted to talk to his pal David, though and I sometimes went to the basketball and soccer games to see him play even though I'm not really into sports. I blushed as I thought how cute David looked in his shorts and suddenly I was brought back to earth by the realization that Richard was talking to me.

"What...oh...oh. H..Hi, Richard," I said, stumbling over my tongue like I always did,"I was..I was just going to go and...get a pair of shoes. Yeah...new pumps..well, see ya, bye." And I disappeared into the shoe store red creeping along my cheeks.

Turning, I saw that David was now talking to Richard and then they went into the music store. Damn! Had David seen that horrible scene? Why, oh why couldnt I be more outgoing?

At that moment, the clerk approached me and asked me if he could help with a purchase. I pointed to the pumps in the window, not even looking at them. My eyes were on the music store and my mind was on how stupid I must have looked to both of them.
 
David:

As i approached Jezbel suddenly turned aaway from David and whirled into the shoe shop. Looks like she blew him off pretty fast! I couldn't help but notice how tightly the jeans clung to her ass. "I really gotta try and chat her up one day", i sighed to myself

"Nice one Richard! Are all your conversations with girls as smooth as that?" Richard laughed and gave me a punch in the arm.
"Come on let's go check the rest of the guys! And don't tell them about this!"

As we turned away i saw Jezbel looking at us out of the corner of my eye. Walking back to the music store I made a mental note to keep an eye out for her.....
 
Jezbel

I pushed my burger and fries away and across the table. I was in the food court for lunch but I really didnt feel like eating right now. I was too mad at myself for blowing it so bad in front of not one but two guys. Both who were cute and one that I had been keeping an eye on for awhile.

I looked sadly down at the box that was laying at my feet. Yep, you guessed it, the pumps from the window. I didnt really want them but I was to embarassed to take them back.

"Jez, you are a wimp," I snapped at myself,"Why cant you just stand up for yourself?" I guess I could answer that by saying that my parent's divorce had something to do with it. It was so nasty that they both ended up hating each other and she always felt pulled into the middle of every fight they had. Now she avoided any kind of confrontation and usually appeared to be unreachable to all but her best friends.

It was also why she spent so much time out of the house. She found excuses to leave and go do other things. That way she wouldnt be home if her dad called and got into it with her mother.

She still hadnt found any of her friends and wondered where the other girls were. At least their chatter would keep her mind off of her predicament.

[Edited by Isolde on 01-11-2001 at 03:00 PM]
 
Jacob Young

OOC: sorry bout not starting it, i had to reinstall some shit on my comp cause of some guy trying to hack into me, he didn't get too far but still. Well good start, as i said sorry about not starting it earlier.


IC: I turned off my truck, the loud music stopping, I threw off my leather jacket and walked tword the mall, hitting the auto lock button. I looked around once i entered, we set up that we would meet at the music store so i started that way. I thought i might buy some music while i'm here, some bands put out some new cd's. I got in and Richard and David were already there, I walked up "hey Richard, sup David"
 
"Hey Jake" Guess me and Rich weren't the last guys after all.

Jake was a good friend of mine, we played basketball together for the school, and since he only lived a few blocks away from me we hook up all the time for a little streetball. He's a better football player though but don't tell him i said that ;op

"Jake, do u know a girl in our class called Jezbel Withers?"
I asked him.
"Yeah real shy type man, don't really talk to any guys at all. Why?"
"No reason" i hurridly replied. "Just saw her walking around before that's all.
 
Jacob Young

I looked at him 'oh nothen' so none-dave, "what man, you got the hots for her or somethen?" i raised my eyebrow a bit tword him, rich was laughing a bit from it, he got a kick out of me diggen in to him at times. He hadn't gotten into really any of the girls at school, but a lot of them wanted him.

I don't mean i havn't had my eye on a chick or two...but i didn't know if she had even really noticed me...she was beautiful, and she had some brains to go with them...her name was June, i was sorta staring off into space, but i snapped back quickly and looked up at Dave waiten for him to awnser me.
 
Richard:


I looked at them both babbling about Jezbel and June.They were cute,but I had my eye on Daia.Now that was a fox."you guys gonna buy something or what,"I asked.I grabbed up my selections,Disturbed and Linkon park and headed to the cash register..
 
OOC: Hey, Dirk, maybe you could post a note saying we need more females?

IC: I sighed and looked over to my other purchases. A smile came to my face. I had spent most of my time in the mall at The Art Shoppe. It was a small corner store that specialized in anything to do with art and artists. Book, paints, charcoal and drawing pads. I was a frequent visitor.

Reaching into my sack, I pulled out my new sketch book and charcol and sat them on the table. Opening my sketch book I began to draw. I wanted to take my mind of my great blunder at the shoe shop but no such luck.

When I draw, I kinda let my mind wonder. It's a great way to escape whats going on around you and I had been drawing alot more lately since things had been getting worse at home. When I looked down at the pad, I realized I had been drawing the one thing I was trying to forget. There, in charcol, was David the way I had seen him the night he scored the winning basket against our rival high school.

Blushing, I quickly closed the sketchbook and put it away. I didnt want anyone else to get a look at that. But with a smile I decided that I would finish it when I got home.
 
Jake raised his eyebrows at me after my unsure reply.
"Dammit why you looking at me like that! Well she is pretty nice", i admitted. "But she's so shy, i mean, i want to talk to her but i feel so guilty everytime because she gets so embarrased. I see her watching our games too sometimes you know."
Just then Richard butted in "You guys gonna buy something or what?" I sighed and walked to the cashier, still arguing with Jake
 
Jacob Young

I grabbed the couple of cd's i wanted, i saw Rich took me up and was getten Linkin Park, i had already gotten it and he seemed to like it. I grabbed the new Snoop Dogg, P.O.D. and Greenday one that i hadn't gotten yet and walked over to cashier behind Dave "Dude, you should just ask her out, she would say yes, she might be a bit shy, but she will get out of it after that. I mean it." he looked back at me, still a bit mad that i had brought it up, I checked out and walked over to the half bar like thing that they had set up near by in the store. I bought a Dr.Pepper and walked over to the others, Dave looked over at me "and what about June" i looked back at him "and what about her?" He raises his eyebrow to me now "I know you like her, i've seen the looks, and i know you got pissed when she didn't ask you to that dance where the girls ask" i looked back at him, i was a bit mad that she didn't...i guess she just didn't know i liked her. I was going to ask her out, but i wanted to make sure i wouldn't get smashed down if she said no. I also hoped i could see her in the mall today...maybe today i would ask her...you never knew. I looked back at him "yeah well, just so you know, if i see her today in the mall" i looked back at Rich, he knew what was comen, he almost always knew "i'm gonna ask her out, and for her to come to the game on friday wit me, what do you think about that?"
 
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