The Lit Story

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haunting shadow which seems to be floating moving through
everything wwhat could this be is she dreaming are they
dreaming as the echos of moans grows louder and more ................................................................................
 
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biggbear8 said:
haunting shadow which seems to be floating moving through
everything wwhat could this be is she dreaming are they
dreaming as the echos of moans grows louder and more ................................................................................


.........pitching.....the frightened couple open the door to its fullest as the ghostly apparition glides effortlessly past them and down the hallway...they............
 
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they feel a cold cold draft as more and more ghostly
apparitions appear out of other closed rooms floating effortlessly past them a haunting moan and sudden hher lover starts to fade as she holds his..........................................................
 
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biggbear8 said:
they feel a cold cold draft as more and more ghostly
apparitions appear out of other closed rooms floating effortlessly past them a haunting moan and sudden hher lover starts to fade as she holds his..........................................................


.....hand tightly before becoming weightless herself and whilst looking back drifts....................
 
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as they drift effortlessly though the rest of eternity together
holding hands making love as the ships fades into the ........................................................................................



ok dom ill let you put the ending to this story lol
it was fun we should do it again

bear
 
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biggbear8 said:
as they drift effortlessly though the rest of eternity together
holding hands making love as the ships fades into the ........................................................................................



ok dom ill let you put the ending to this story lol
it was fun we should do it again

bear


the sunset, becoming an apparition just like it's occupants......


THE END.


This story was brought to you by BigBear and Churchydom, whom are good friends.





Thanks buddy it has been fun.....:D

Good luck to you buddy.
 
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thanks dom that was alot of fun maybe we should do a story together some time so once again thx my good friend

have a wonderful day and stay warm delivering that mail.
 
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biggbear8 said:
thanks dom that was alot of fun maybe we should do a story together some time so once again thx my good friend

have a wonderful day and stay warm delivering that mail.


Thank you buddy.

I'll try to stay warm...hahaha

Listen you take care of yourself and stay happy.........:D
 
The evening was nt a goo d evening Josha was fighting with his girlfiend again, waking up and getting ready for work Josha thought it was going to be a good day the sun was shining bright the skies were clear,whistling he heads out the door and decides to walk the short distance to work half way there when.................................................................
 
........he heard a whistle coming from behind him. He turned to see his flustered girlfriend running toward him........she said......
 
churchydom said:
........he heard a whistle coming from behind him. He turned to see his flustered girlfriend running toward him........she said......



"Oh Josh that was a lovely thing to do , especially after our argument last night! The note you slipped under the door was so sexy and erotic......ty honey!"

Josh looks at her funny , "What note Julie?".........
 
"What do you mean 'What note?'.........the note you slipped under my door this morning" she explained.......

Josh felt a mixture of confusion and later anger build up inside him.......

"Letitia, I didn't put a note under your door. To be honest I am still pretty upset by last night. Do you have the note on you?" Josh protested.............
 
churchydom said:
"What do you mean 'What note?'.........the note you slipped under my door this morning" she explained.......

Josh felt a mixture of confusion and later anger build up inside him.......

"Letitia, I didn't put a note under your door. To be honest I am still pretty upset by last night. Do you have the note on you?" Josh protested.............



"Yes I have it right here , but now I'm really upset. My name's Julie , who in Hell is Letitia?"
 
cookiejar said:
"Yes I have it right here , but now I'm really upset. My name's Julie , who in Hell is Letitia?"


"Letitia??....err.........Letitia is my Sister of course. It is her birthday soon, and I am stuck for a gift. Now come come Julie...this note....may I see it?".........Josh explains nervously.......
 
churchydom said:
"Letitia??....err.........Letitia is my Sister of course. It is her birthday soon, and I am stuck for a gift. Now come come Julie...this note....may I see it?".........Josh explains nervously.......



Looking at Josh suspiciously.....Julie hands him the note. "So you didn't write it , I should have known better!"

Great save Dom...lol
 
cookiejar said:
Looking at Josh suspiciously.....Julie hands him the note. "So you didn't write it , I should have known better!"

Great save Dom...lol



Julie hands Josh the note, which he starts to read at once.
"A romantic getaway to a log cabin, with champagne, strawberries and massage oils??" Josh reads aloud,

"Who sent you this?" Josh asks.........."Are you....no wait..I am late for work, meet me at Cafe Uno at 12.30, we'll talk then. Ok?"
 
churchydom said:
Julie hands Josh the note, which he starts to read at once.
"A romantic getaway to a log cabin, with champagne, strawberries and massage oils??" Josh reads aloud,

"Who sent you this?" Josh asks.........."Are you....no wait..I am late for work, meet me at Cafe Uno at 12.30, we'll talk then. Ok?"



"Alright," Julie answers , "We really need to talk."


Walking away Julie's mind is whirling......"Who could have written this....who knew it's my secret fantasy?"
 
cookiejar said:
"Alright," Julie answers , "We really need to talk."


Walking away Julie's mind is whirling......"Who could have written this....who knew it's my secret fantasy?"


With a turn on his heel, Josh walked toward his place of work. When he reached the crossing in the road, he turned round to watch julie turn the corner and disappear. With a mixture of anger and now confusion, he turned and carried on his journey to work........
 
churchydom said:
With a turn on his heel, Josh walked toward his place of work. When he reached the crossing in the road, he turned round to watch julie turn the corner and disappear. With a mixture of anger and now confusion, he turned and carried on his journey to work........



Julie reaches home.....What's this?......another note in the door! Eagerly she rips it open, her eyes scanning the pages......smiling she kisses the letter and goes inside........
 
The morning at work seemed to drag for what seemed like an eternity for Josh. All he could think about was that note and who wrote it. He started to think whether he was unfair to Julie the previous night. After all they had been together for almost two years now, perhaps it was time to move in together......

He glanced up at the clock....11.45am it read.......

"I will leave in about half an hour" he thought........"I hope she turns up."
 
writing julie another note " Julie i have adored you for so long i have live in your shadows for so long and i long to come out into the light and show you who I am and show you how much i love you" slipping the note under the door , please meet me tonight at...............................................................
 
biggbear8 said:
writing julie another note " Julie i have adored you for so long i have live in your shadows for so long and i long to come out into the light and show you who I am and show you how much i love you" slipping the note under the door , please meet me tonight at...............................................................




the lighthouse....." Julie is in a turmoil.....who is he? Should she really meet him , after all they may fight but she really loves Josh. She runs upstairs to dress for Josh.....those denim hip-huggers he loves so much and the little red halter top. A quick check on her hair and make-up and out the door.......
 
as julie steps out the door wayne a tall haomesome man stops her and asks wheres she's off to he seems alittle nervous as he talk to julie hes secret love , then he ask's if she's ever been to the old lighthouse ,but he knows the answer he;s seen her there alone crying.............................................................................
 
biggbear8 said:
as julie steps out the door wayne a tall haomesome man stops her and asks wheres she's off to he seems alittle nervous as he talk to julie hes secret love , then he ask's if she's ever been to the old lighthouse ,but he knows the answer he;s seen her there alone crying.............................................................................



"How do you know about the lighthouse"? Julie gasps as she realizes this is her secret love.....the manager of the grocery store where she shops. He always made it a point to speak to her.....she always felt tongue-tied in his presence.......he was so handsome , older and distinguished. Julie mumbles something and runs away.........
 
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