The intruder ( Looking for new co-writer in female role)

[JonathanBair]

Jon says in a sharp firm but caring tone "No its not safe. Let me make it safe. Tomorrow you can be there. Not today tho with bears, wolfs or mountain lions. The moose will draw them. Let me make it safe and remove it for you. Stay here so I don't worry about you if I gotta fight." with that he spun on his heals and ran out the door sprinting off. He hoped she had enough brains to listen to his warning. He hopes she didn't forget the last time she ran into a bear, as he still had the sores from it visible on his bare back.

 

[debbiev]

Debbie Gets Creative

Jon seems pretty stern on his idea of having Debbie stay in the dugout while he goes back to the cabin and to make it safe. As he begins darts off to my cabin Debbie yells out, "Jon I need to go back there today, so please fix my door and come back this afternoon. I'm not staying here all night"

Debbie watches as Jon sprints down hill towards the cabin. She thinks about following him but knows she couldn't keep up and would probably end up getting lost. So she makes the decision to listen to Jon and stay put.

Debbie sits there and wonders, now what do I do now? Naked and in Jon's dugout with just trees, bushes and crawly bugs around her. Debbie isn't one to just lounge around so she decides to be creative and ventures out to find some vines and maybe some large leaves on twigs. She wanders off and after a long search on finding the perfect ones she brings them back to the dugout and sits down.

She intertwines twigs with the leaves and with the vine and wraps it around her waist. Then ties the vine and she has a primitive thong. She looks down at herself and smiles thinking, "I guess i am adapting to being in the wild" Debbie laughs and feels proud about the natural thong she made, thinking wait until Jon sees what I did.

 

[JonathanBair]

Jon sprinted while being bent over low. He wanted speed and to be small to get under most the tree branches. When he got near the clearing he started to shout " No bear, get going. Stay away." He wasn't sure what kind of animals would be near the cabin, but most of them would hear the ruckus he was making and get away. Jon got into the cabin. Seeing signs animals had got to it. He lifted it up and moved it into the woods. He then chopped down a tree and put it in the hole he started to dig. He used it to start a fire. With the green wood it was extra smokey.

He then started to make a new temp door out of pine and evergreen branches. He wove them nice and thick. He then grabbed a burning log and moved it into the cabin and built up a fire there in the fire place. He had a feeling with the 2 fires that should keep most animals away and whats left of the moose would draw them away.

Before leaving Jon taken his knife and stabbed the 4 tires then found the hood release. He cut any tube or wire he could see. Jon smiles closing the hood and walks into the cabin. He walks to the bedroom and grabs the cot. Then runs back up to the dugout.

Its late afternoon now when he gets back. Jon fumbles with the door while holding the cot.

 

[debbiev]

Debbie Welcomes Jon Back But Has Her Plan

As Debbie starts to worry about the approaching night and being alone, she hears Jon's footsteps and his heavy breathing. Then banging on the door, Debbie opens the door to see Jon carrying her cot from the cabin. Watching as he barrels in and drops it in the dugout.

Debbie is surprised to see that Jon carried the cot all the way from her cabin, but is grateful he did. "Thank you so much Jon, that was really nice of you to bring that, now I can be more comfortable" She smiles at Jon. But Jon seems a little angry and that puzzles her, thanking maybe he is just really tired.

Despite Debbie's wide smile, she still has her plan though, getting back to the cabin and getting in her car and never coming back here again. To her Jon is just a wild uncivilized man who just takes what he wants without regard. She just cannot be with someone like that, despite the sex being mind blowing with him.

 

[JonathanBair]

Jon moves the cot in and puts his mattress on it. Jon then turns and smiles saying in a soft/caring but firm tone"you sleep here tonight. Cabin is getting a good smoking to be safe for my mate."

Jon wants to show her that he will do what is best for her... If she wants to sleep in the cot he was glad to haul it up the mountain for her. Jon also knows the fires should keep any animals away from the house and moving the moose should draw them into the woods.

 

[debbiev]

Debbie's Plan

Debbie smiles at Jon and thanks him for bringing her cot up to the dugout. Although she wishes he brought up some of her clothes too. Just wearing a vine with some leaves attached like a primitive thong makes her a bit uncomfortable especially when Jon is all dressed. Debbie wonders if he is purposefully keeping her just about naked. Maybe so she won't escape as she would have to run through the woods just about naked. She is also surprised Jon didn't comment about her homemade thong as she thought making it was pretty talented, especially for a city girl.

Debbie thinks about another night with Jon and how he will probably force himself on her again. But then thinking, one more night and tomorrow she is definitely getting back to the cabin, packing her stuff, loading the car and driving out of here. This is a crazy life, especially with wild man Jon around.

The sun has set and Debbie feels herself getting hungry. She looks at Jon and says, "Do you think we can eat something, I'm really starving".

 

[JonathanBair]

Jon nods and says "I will go hunt quickly." Before he dose leave he starts a fire in his small hill side fireplace that is carved from the hill side. Jon then scoots out the door. About 10 minutes later Jon comes back holding a dead rabbit that has been gutted.

Jon takes his knife and removes the hide from the meat. Then he cracks the ribs pulling the rabbit open like a book. Jon then starts to remove the bones before putting it over the fire. Jon asks "Do you want animal hide or to wear the vines?" as Jon waits for his mate to respond he looks her up and down and smiles.

 

[debbiev]

Debbie Settles in For One Night

Debbie watches as Jon goes out and hunts for dinner. She knows he will bring back something. The fire Jon made feels good and she feels safe sitting near it. It keeping the bugs and maybe animals away too.

Ten minutes later Debbie hears footsteps and gets nervous, but thankfully it's Jon and he has a rabbit. He is a master at cooking it and offers her the hide to wear, but she responds, "Thanks Jon but I'll keep the vine thong on". Her not wanting to remove it in front of him. Then she adds, "Jon I would like my regular clothes, so tomorrow we will go back down to my cabin, I have lots of clothes there". Debbie letting him know that is her plan and this time it's happening.

 

[JonathanBair]

Together at home

Jon smiles as he adds a few more logs to the fire and cooks over the fire in the dugout and the hole in the wall for the small fire place. He keeps looking over at his mate with his light blue eyes. As he he sits with his back to the dugout and his side to his mate and her cot. Jon makes cooks the rabbit.

While cooking the rabbit Jon says "the morning it should be safe at the cabin." As he says it he smiles looking with a face full of love to deb. He hopes he can make her happy and make her want to stay with him. He knows she says she will, but he also remembers being very clear that she would go, and he would never see her again. He don't know what way she wants to go. He smiles knowing he trashed her car and he is sure he killed it. Not knowing how much damage he really did to it.

When the rabbit is done he pulls it from over the fire and puts half the rabbit on a section of a tree stump he formed into a plate long ago. He normally uses it as a cooling plate, but today he is giving it for his mate to eat off of. He sits at her feet and lays his head on her lap while he waits for her to eat. Jon's hands softly rub up and down her far left thigh as his body lightly pressing along her right leg.

Jon is enjoying being so close to her and him being in a relaxed state.

 

[debbiev]

Is It All Really Good?

Debbie looks at Jon and sees he is very content in the dugout, cooking the rabbit and having her near him. Debbie notices Jon's bright blue eyes as he stares at her and tells her about going back to the cabin tomorrow morning. That gives her hope that finally she will be able to leave this crazy life out here. She does know Jon would be crushed, but she has to do what is best for her and living out here is not for her.

Debbie watches as Jon places the rabbit down on the unique tree stump plate. She smiles at him and thanks him for taking care of her. Feeling Jon's hands lovingly caress her thigh as Debbie enjoys eating the rabbit. She talks about never having rabbit before and how well he cooked it up and it's so fresh. She smiles at him as she sees Jon stare back at her, him seemingly so happy now. But Debbie knows she will burst his bubble tomorrow morning when she gets to her cabin, packs her stuff and drives off. At least that is the plan.

 

[JonathanBair]

T L C

Jon starts to kiss her outer thighs as she eats. He feels good with her saying she never had fresh rabbit like this. Jon wants her to be happy so she will want to stay.

Jon gets a idea... Jon jumps up to his feet and turns with his back to her. He takes a few steps to the door and stops then says "I will be back" His bask still showing the fresh scabbing cuts from the bears claws from a few days ago. He then busts out the door at full speed.

He runs down to the cabin. He goes inside the cabin and looks in a dresser for a long shirt. He finds one and runs back to the dugout. As he comes close to the dugout he says "Just me"as he now starts to slow down near the door. He opens the door and holds the shirt with a big smile. He asks "Is this good to sleep in?" Jon walks to his mates side and sits on the floor looking up at her.

 

[debbiev]

The Night Before Her Escape Plan

Debbie sees the proud look on Jon's face when she says how much she likes the fresh rabbit. She smiles at Jon, knowing he cares for her, but sadly he has that wildness mentality in him, especially when it comes to sex. Of course the sex is mind blowing but the way he just grabs her and fucks her without consent bothers her....his cave man mentality towards her makes her feel like she is being raped. She just feels he totally lacks respect for her and her plan remains to get down to the cabin and escape tomorrow.

She watches Jon suddenly stand up, and takes off. Her having no idea where he is going, wishing he would say instead of just running off. Debbie is left alone again and she lays on her cot and waits for Jon.

She wakes up from the sound of Jon announcing he is back and she smiles when he shows her long shirt. Debbie puts her shirt on. It's enough to cover her up better and make her feel less exposed. And well a bit more dignified. Debbie looks down at Jon who is now sitting and responds, "Yes Jon, this shirt is perfect to sleep in. Thank you for bringing it here" Debbie smiles at Jon and then lays down on her cot and says, "Jon, I would like to leave for my cabin at dawn, so if we can both go down there together that would be great." She smiles at Jon, knowing she is one step closer to freedom. "Good night Jon."

Then she closes her eyes and dozes off.

 

[JonathanBair]

Jon sits by her side as she sleep. He is watching the fire burn out. He then slips into the cot laying on his side next to her as he lays his head on her chest. He leans into her as he watches for a reaction and hopes not to wake her.

 

[debbiev]

Debbie's Nighttime Thoughts

Debbie wakes up briefly as she feels Jon lay on the cot and put his head on her breasts. She likes that it's not sexual, that he just wants to be close to her. She likes the feeling because it makes her feel safe.

She keeps her eyes closed but just thinks. This was a day she isn't used to having, as have been the last few days which have been life changing. But she knows she needs to get back to her life in New York City again. As much as this life has some great things, Debbie wants the comforts of home and convenience too. She just cannot live in dugouts, and cabins with broken doors and moose on the kitchen floor and with Jon's stubbornness. She doesn't like being told what to do and Jon tends to do that, maybe in the name of protecting her, but she doesn't like it.

Debbie dozes back off into a deep sleep.

 

[JonathanBair]

Jon can hear the breathing change as she wakes up with him slipping onto the cot with her. He lays still enjoying being so close to her. When she falls back to sleep he pulls her arms around him to make her lightly hug him.

Jon then falls into a light sleep for a few hours. He wakes up and its still dark out but he dont move.

 

[debbiev]

Debbie stirs and opens her eyes but it's pretty dark. She feels Jon laying next to her, figuring he is still sleeping. She feels safe with Jon next to her. She then dozes back off.

When Debbie wakes up again she can see some a trace of light, she sits up and says to Jon, we need to start getting ready to leave for the cabin. It's getting light out. Knowing she appears super anxious, but she doesn't care as her first step is getting to her cabin again.

 

[JonathanBair]

Deb's moving as she wakes up, wakes Jon up. Jon flinchs as her breathing quickens as she wakes up but he holds still with his eyes closed. He waits to see what she will do with him cuddled up into her like that.

He can hear her head move as she looks around, but stays relaxed. He keeps acting like he is sleeping. He hears her settle down and her breathing slows as she drifts off to sleep. Jon then goes back too sleep again. To his normal very light sleeping.

When she starts to wake up she shifts a bit and her breathing picks up. The breathing alone would wake Jon up as his head rests on her breast. As she starts to sit up she pushs him to a side a bit and he looks up at her. He hears her wanting to go back to the cabin. Jon is hard with his normal morning hard on.. Only today its harder then normal. He thinks it must be because of her.

He gets up and picks her up, but today shes not over his shoulder as normal. Today he pics her up pinning her hips to his hips. As her chest is firmly pressed into his. One hand holding her ass up and the other pressing her shoulder blades in so she stays close. He says "Hold on tight" He looks into her eyes as they are nose to nose. He has that devilish/playful smile.

Jon waits to see if she will wrap both arms around his neck and her legs around his hips.

 

[debbiev]

Debbie Gets Closer To Leaving

Hoping she isn't rude by pushing his head off her breasts as she sits up on her cot. She notices that Jon doesn't seem thrilled about going back to the cabin. But she doesn't care, that's what she wants and she figures he has already gotten what he wants, so it's her turn. When Jon gets up she notices that he is hard, but she ignores it and just continues to talk about going back to the cabin.

When he suddenly picks her up and tells her to hold on, Debbie knows Jon is being playful and him carrying her like this is all in good fun. She is now confident the Jon would never drop her. But she holds on anyway, grabbing his strong shoulders tightly and then locking her arms around his neck. Then wrapping her legs around his hips. She likes the journey down the huge hill and towards her cabin. She likes the feeling of Jon's strength and how it makes her feel safe. But still, her plan is to get to her cabin and then leave forever. She will miss him, and she knows Jon will be heartbroken but she just cannot continue to live out here.

 

[JonathanBair]

It was clear from the start. Todays trip wasn't going too be a normal one. If you can call being thrown over someones shoulder then them sprinting like you weren't there normal mode of transportation..

Nope today Jon was is no rush. He spent the time with his hard cock trapped in the middle of there body's. Jon slowly walked down the mountain side. He spent most of the peaceful trip looking into debs eyes and rubbing his nose on her nose. He knew the act was called some kind of indian kiss. Not remembering the name "eskimo kisses". Deb was light and no strain on his body even with the slow place. He knew she wanted to get to her cabin. He also wanted to show her the soft gentle side of him. He wanted to spend the day walking in the woods with her...

He knew he had nothing too fear. She had no idea he killed her car. He was sure he trashed it, but not knowing much of engines other then as a kid knowing a lose wire or bad tube would cause problumes. He didn't know how much damage other then cutting all the tubes and wires he could see along with slashing all 4 tires and they would be way flat now. He felt good about keeping his mate here with him.

The playful and peaceful look on his eyes with the light and very bright blue eyes of his should be telling her how much he is happy. Even with his hard cock trapped in the middle of there body's. He hoped it was teasing her as much as it was him. Now an then his strong hand would squeezes her ass cheek as he held her hips tight to him. He knows she gets turned on by spankings. He hopes the squeezing of her ass cheeks will have the same effect.

Jon is enjoying him self very much and hopes to be driving her crazy. He would love to see her start something like a kiss or something more sexual bold.

 

[debbiev]

Debbie Tries To Take Control

Debbie is surprised Jon is walking so slowly, it bothers her some as she wants to get back to her cabin, pack and leave forever. Thinking that Jon must be up to something, but what? She feels his cock harden as he presses her against him while continuing to carry her down the mountain. But she is not in the mood for sex, she just has a one track mind and wants to leave this horribly place. Although she knows Jon does have some good qualities, and she likes him some, but not to live with him forever. Her mind is made up, she wants to leave forever.

Jon gives cute Eskimo kisses to Debbie as he is being really playful, but it gets her a bite upset, she doesn't want him to get so attached to her. But Jon continues and begins squeezing her ass. She smiles a half smile at Jon, but then says, "Jon, I need to get down to my cabin, if you aren't gonna run or at least walk at a fast pace I can just walk down the mountain side myself. I have lots of things to do when I get to my cabin, so I don't need to take all day to get there."

Knowing that she just sounded really harsh, but also knowing she needs to control this situation, that Jon has controlled it enough. If he needs to see the bitch come out of her, then it will.

 

[JonathanBair]

Jon walks a bit faster. Making sure to bounce her more as he carries her. The rubbing of her hips on his hard cock is teasing him and keeping it rock hard. Jon now lowers his hand more under her hips. Her pussy is over his fingers. His middle finger is pushing the vine up her cunt slit and he can feel her cunt lips hugging the side of his finger while the ring and index fingers are under her cunt lips. He is letting her body mass spank his hand with her cunt. He wonders if this will get her worked up and better her mood.

 

[debbiev]

Walk and Cum at the Same Time?

Feeling Jon's fingers pushing against Debbie's vine thong as the motion of him walking only serves to move her back and forth over his fingers. She know that he is doing this to her on purpose. Debbie tries to silently withstand the excitement, but she is getting wet quickly and knows that Jon will soon be feeling her wetness if he hasn't already. She hates how much Jon controls her sexually and that he knows he does.

Her wanting to tell him to pull his fingers away, that it's not fair doing this to her and that he is only doing this to try to avoid listening to her talk about her cabin. But Debbie now gets quiet, hoping she can make it down to her cabin before cumming.

 

[JonathanBair]

The tame side of the wildman.

Jon turns and takes a rocky rout down the mountain side. Now he has to hop a bit jerking both there body. He is enjoying this and lets out a soft moan as her hips rub on his cock.

Jon looks into her eyes. His eyes are so light dark blue as he asks "Can I kiss you?" He now rubs his nose on her nose up and over her bridge od down then back up and over her nostrils. He wants to show her that he can ask to do stuff to her.Jon wants her to feel good and respected. Jon can smell her wettness a bit but no where near as good as if he had her over her shoulder. He also asks "do you like this or the other way?" He finds him self torn. He hopes she enjoys this way better. He loves her body pressing along his chest. Tho it dose sting a bit with her hands on the drieed blood from the bears claws marks. From when he faught the bear to protect her.

He smiles and say. You know I will do anything to make you happy and keep you safe my mate. I will get you your favorite meat. Bear, Moose, Deer, Elk, fish or Rabbit. I can make you pants or a dress that will protect your skin from the branches and the water. I want my mate happy and do anything for her. As he finishes saying the. Jon moves his hand from her back and quickly lowers it and gives her a playfully 3 spanks then rubs and massages her ass cheek that he spanked playfully but hard. He asks with a playful look. Want a bigger bed while I make a new door?

Jon smiles as he knows if she wants a bigger bed that will give him a better place to hide if he is going to sneak into the cabin and watch her unaware.

Jon smiles and says "Tomorrow I can take you to a hot spring, for swimming and washing." He rubs his cheek to her cheek for a few seconds then pulls back so only his nose is touching her face as he looks at her in her eyes.

 

[debbiev]

The Ultimatum

Debbie sees that Jon is totally respecting her now. So maybe he has turned over a new leaf. Debbie answers his 'can I kiss you' question by just kissing Jon. She finds it odd he asked that question after just about raping her previously without asking. But maybe this is the new Jon. She does like him but he needs to be tamed some and learn how to treat her. She is now thinking that maybe it can be done. Hating that her mind flip flops when it comes to staying or leaving Jon.

In answer to his questions, Debbie responds, "Jon, I like when you carry me both ways, it's fun and I know you know it gets me excited. I know you are doing that to tease me." She feels embarrassed saying that as she smiles at Jon. She laughs when he playfully spanks her as she says, "Yes I know I've been a bad girl" Instantly she feels herself getting wet again.

Debbie knows that Jon will do anything to make her happy and take care of her. However, he just needs to be civil to her, to not take her sexually whenever he gets the urge. Despite it feeling oh so good when he does, something that Debbie will not admit to Jon but Jon obviously knows.

Debbie smiles at Jon when he mentions bathing in the hot spring, "Yes I would love doing that, that sounds amazing."

Then she decides it's time to let Jon know exactly how she feels, she looks up at Jon and says, "Jon, I have a few things to tell you, I wanna stay here with you, but under certain conditions. I have to feel that I'm free to come and go as I please. Like take my car and drive to town. You have to trust me that I will be back. If you don't trust me then this relationship will not work. I also have to consent to having sex with you. And I need my cabin door fixed, so I can sleep there. You have to listen to things I say and not just do things, like put a dead moose on my kitchen floor. If you can agree to that I am willing to give us chance. And I like my own clothes, so I will be going shopping once in awhile. I'm not thrilled with wearing a leaf thong". Debbie smiles and waits for Jon to respond to her demands.

 

[JonathanBair]

Jon can see she seams to be enjoying this more. He has also learned to read her. Shes so close to cumming. Jon can also see her thinking about something. Shes here but not here at the same time mentally.He still wants her to cum so he picks up the bouncing a bit trying to mask it with the rocks. He also smiles enjoying her kissing him in response to his question of if he can kiss her.

As his mate says she likes to be carried both ways and she finds it fun to be over his shoulder. When she says it gets her excited. He flexes his cock that is trapped in the middle of there hips and bellys. He also flexes his cock 3 times as she talks about wanting to go to the hot springs with him tomrow.

Jons world is going perfectly as he hears her saying how she feels. When she says " I have to feel that I'm free to come and go as I please. Like take my car and drive to town" Jon stops to a skidding halt and his face tenses with fear. He starts to panic and look around.... Meanwhile she keeps on talking about trust and having a relationship. The cabin door, her clothing.

As he listens his mind is racing. He trashed her car. Should he take her to see it or try and take the long way to sneak past his handy work at night. He starts to take a long way around closer to the lake, so he can come up from the back of the cabin. Hoping it will be night time and she will want to go to bed.

He wonders if the car is going to be a braking point to her. As its dead and trashed. He knows there will need to be allot of work into getting it going. He also knows he is past doing it....

He gulps loudly and says takes a deep breath with a pleading look on his face. His eyes going from the lightest blue to the darkest blue almost looking black... Then says "Ummmm about the car.... Its dead. Last night it got killed when you wanted to run away and never come back, when I would never see you soon as you got back to it."Jon knew this was a make or brake point could she forgive him for wanting her to stay? Jon tightened his grip with out hurting her. He is expecting her to try and wiggle and put up a fight. He knows she will be pissed but no idea how mad she will get.

The eyes shift with his mood from so happy and loving to fearful and anger. The anger would be the car could be risking there happiness.