THE HUCOW BREEDING FARM

[Anarko99]

THE HUCOW BREEDING FARM

This fictional novella and working title will focus on the following sexual fetishes: Promiscuity, group sex, sexual risk play, unprotected sex, birth control, birth control sabotage, impregnation risk, impregnation, pregnancy, breeding, lactation, roleplay, cosplay, the gamification of sex, body modifications, weight gain, submission, domination, coercion and blackmail. The following is a green story outline of the plot and characters. If you have any feedback or questions, it will be welcomed by the author.

Chapter 1: The Distemperate

This chapter introduces Ms Lucy Carter. She's 18 years old, she has grown up in a care home in east London and has recently left care. She's trusting, good natured, naive and self-deprecating. She works at the local supermarket but she has aspirations of becoming a super model, just like her heroine and look alike, Gal Gadot. This chapter ends with Lucy having a lucky happenstance and her encounter with a high-profile fashion model scout, but it transpires not everything is as it seems to her.

Chapter 2: Noblesse Oblige

This chapter introduces Countess Anna Maria von Waxenstein of Carinthia, Austria. She's also 18 years old and has grown up in a wealthy and privileged family of nobility. She looks like Cate Blanchett and she's very entitled, over-confident, conniving and overindulged. She's the heir apparent, but she has a penchant for being a rap music artist, bad boys and chilling with a spliff. However, family machinations are afoot and Anna gets caught in a very compromising situation. This chapter ends with Anna being faced with a fait acompli of some delicacy.

Chapter 3-8?: The Finishing School

This chapter introduces Lucy and Anna to one another and to a place called Chateau Roussillon near Avignon in France. The Chateau is well appointed and has all the trappings of an exclusive holiday resort, for some very discerning "guests". However, it isn't long before Lucy and Anna realize that there are clandestine agendas at the Chateau conspiring against them. Their lull of being brought to the Chateau for bonafide purposes becomes harder for them to believe as events and their real fate unfold. Whilst Lucy and Anna have little choice about being roommates, their response to their situation and sexual awakenings requires them work together as a team in order to endure what happens to them next.

Chapters 9-14?

Following on from this, Chapter 7 and on wards will see Anna and Lucy "progressing" through the Finishing School "indoctrination and breeding curriculum". These chapters will explore sexual roleplay, impregnation risk and sex games involving blackmail and coercion in considerable detail. After several years of succumbing to the joys of unfettered sex, a number of consecutive impregnations and sexual submission together with numerous psychological and physical changes, Lucy and Anna will finally "graduate" from the Finishing School.

Chapters 15-25 and onwards?

The next Chapters could see Anna and Lucy and their blended offspring being allowed to "escape" to an apparently new life of supposed freedom in America on a hippy commune. However, their final destination is not all it seems and once again they have been deceived, trapped and sold like livestock. Lucy and Anna soon realise that they have jumped out of the metaphorical pan and that they now find themselves in the fire! In their own way, both of them eventually succumb and surrender to their desires to become full time hucows at what is unashamedly a free-for-all and free-love hucow breeding farm. Needless to say, more pregnancies and futile attempts with increasingly ineffective contraceptive games ensue for them both.

I am currently working on this erotic novel with another author and I am hoping to have chapters 1 and 2 ready for uploading in the next couple of months. This will be a work in progress for the next couple of years as I anticipate the final word count to be around 500 - 750k.

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

Doesn't look like a story idea to me.

 

[TheOtherTeacher]

I may have misunderstood your word count.

50k words is the NaNoWriMo target because it is considered the minimum for a novel.

75k is considered standard for a novel sold in bookshops.

If your word target is 500k - 750k, you aren't planning a story, you are planning 10.

 

[TheOtherTeacher]

If you are looking for guidance on what you've posted above, I would say the same thing I say to many posts in this sub-forum.

If you don't have a clear beginning, middle and ending, you don't have a story. You have a concept.

Imagine if Tolkien had written LoTR without the clear ending of destroying the ring.

Decide the clear ending now, and write with your goal always in mind.

 

[Rob_Royale]

If your word target is 500k - 750k, you aren't planning a story, you are planning 10.

Quite correct. The unabridged version of the Stand is 471,000 words and it is a doorstop of a book. War and Peace is 587,000 words.

 

[Anarko99]

I may have misunderstood your word count.

50k words is the NaNoWriMo target because it is considered the minimum for a novel.

75k is considered standard for a novel sold in bookshops.

If your word target is 500k - 750k, you aren't planning a story, you are planning 10.

I am anticipating that the word count range of my novel will be 500,000 words plus. I already have some 200,000 words written in uncompleted chapters. Although I am not a published author, I am a professional writer, and over the last 20 years I have written some 20 millions words worth of documents and academic essays. So, I am not intimidated by the length of my proposal. I agree though, most short novels tend to be around 50k words. The first Harry Potter book was around 80k, by the end of series they were up to 250k. So, I don't think 500k is unrealistic. I will say though, my concept for the chapters may end up being three times that number.

 

[Anarko99]

I may have misunderstood your word count.

50k words is the NaNoWriMo target because it is considered the minimum for a novel.

75k is considered standard for a novel sold in bookshops.

If your word target is 500k - 750k, you aren't planning a story, you are planning 10.

If you are looking for guidance on what you've posted above, I would say the same thing I say to many posts in this sub-forum.

If you don't have a clear beginning, middle and ending, you don't have a story. You have a concept.

Imagine if Tolkien had written LoTR without the clear ending of destroying the ring.

Decide the clear ending now, and write with your goal always in mind.

Yes, I agree, at this stage I have an overall concept and some nearly complete chapters. As for and ending, I wasn't actually intending to ever end the story, but to have it as a ongoing story that grows in the telling. Tolkien and King obviously wrote their books with a conclusion necessarily in mind. I deliberately don't really have one, and I'm not sure if I ever will. I definitely have a beginning though, and a plot that would probably cover some 20 years in the book.

 

[Anarko99]

Doesn't look like a story idea to me.

Just wondering if you had any thoughts about why this doesn't look like a story idea and what I could do to change that view? At this stage, I have an overall concept, but a number of key scenes written out that I need to tie to together as a whole.

 

[TheOtherTeacher]

I am anticipating that the word count range of my novel will be 500,000 words plus. I already have some 200,000 words written in uncompleted chapters. Although I am not a published author, I am a professional writer, and over the last 20 years I have written some 20 millions words worth of documents and academic essays.

The first Harry Potter book was around 80k, by the end of series they were up to 250k. So, I don't think 500k is unrealistic. I will say though, my concept for the chapters may end up being three times that number.

Ok. I think we have 3 points to consider.

Firstly - who do you imagine is your reader? If you are just writing this for yourself.... great! Follow your story outline written above.
But if you want others to read and enjoy it, think about who do you want to read it?

Yes, the final HP book is 250k words. It's a difficult, long book that people only read because they were invested in her characters from previous books. Do you think people would have bought HP1 if it was 250k words? If it was 500k words?

If you are honest, I think you know people wouldn't.

If you want people to read all the story you've outlined above, try to make it into 5 stories, each with a clear beginning, middle and ending.

Secondly, you say you write documents and academic essays. Fiction writing is very different, and you have to accept that. You may be the world best in academic writing, but that won't win you fiction readers. Perfect your skills with a shorter book first. Don't jump to 500k.

It's like a professional cyclist saying "I'm great at 1 specific sport...so I'll sign up for the Olympic marathon race." Sure, there's some overlap, but not much. That cyclist should train and do smaller, local races first. Not jump from zero to the Olympics.

Finally, your insistence on not needed a clearly defined ending concerns me.
Everything important has a clearly defined ending. Even life has an ending (death). The planet Earth eventually has an ending. Even the universe has the inevitable heat death. The fact you think you can write a 500k novel without any clear ending in your mind tells me a lot about you as a writer.

To bring it back to your field of work - academic writing. Imagine an academic essay that has no planned conclusion and summary. Just an endless middle. Would you write and submit that for publication and peer review?