THE HUCOW BREEDING FARM

[Anarko99]

THE HUCOW BREEDING FARM

This fictional novella and working title will focus on the following sexual fetishes: Promiscuity, group sex, sexual risk play, unprotected sex, birth control, birth control sabotage, impregnation risk, impregnation, pregnancy, breeding, lactation, roleplay, cosplay, the gamification of sex, body modifications, weight gain, submission, domination, coercion and blackmail. The following is a green story outline of the plot and characters. If you have any feedback or questions, it will be welcomed by the author.

Chapter 1: The Distemperate

This chapter introduces Ms Lucy Carter. She's 18 years old, she has grown up in a care home in east London and has recently left care. She's trusting, good natured, naive and self-deprecating. She works at the local supermarket but she has aspirations of becoming a super model, just like her heroine and look alike, Gal Gadot. This chapter ends with Lucy having a lucky happenstance and her encounter with a high-profile fashion model scout, but it transpires not everything is as it seems to her.

Chapter 2: Noblesse Oblige

This chapter introduces Countess Anna Maria von Waxenstein of Carinthia, Austria. She's also 18 years old and has grown up in a wealthy and privileged family of nobility. She looks like Cate Blanchett and she's very entitled, over-confident, conniving and overindulged. She's the heir apparent, but she has a penchant for being a rap music artist, bad boys and chilling with a spliff. However, family machinations are afoot and Anna gets caught in a very compromising situation. This chapter ends with Anna being faced with a fait acompli of some delicacy.

Chapter 3-8?: The Finishing School

This chapter introduces Lucy and Anna to one another and to a place called Chateau Roussillon near Avignon in France. The Chateau is well appointed and has all the trappings of an exclusive holiday resort, for some very discerning "guests". However, it isn't long before Lucy and Anna realize that there are clandestine agendas at the Chateau conspiring against them. Their lull of being brought to the Chateau for bonafide purposes becomes harder for them to believe as events and their real fate unfold. Whilst Lucy and Anna have little choice about being roommates, their response to their situation and sexual awakenings requires them work together as a team in order to endure what happens to them next.

Chapters 9-14?

Following on from this, Chapter 7 and on wards will see Anna and Lucy "progressing" through the Finishing School "indoctrination and breeding curriculum". These chapters will explore sexual roleplay, impregnation risk and sex games involving blackmail and coercion in considerable detail. After several years of succumbing to the joys of unfettered sex, a number of consecutive impregnations and sexual submission together with numerous psychological and physical changes, Lucy and Anna will finally "graduate" from the Finishing School.

Chapters 15-25 and onwards?

The next Chapters could see Anna and Lucy and their blended offspring being allowed to "escape" to an apparently new life of supposed freedom in America on a hippy commune. However, their final destination is not all it seems and once again they have been deceived, trapped and sold like livestock. Lucy and Anna soon realise that they have jumped out of the metaphorical pan and that they now find themselves in the fire! In their own way, both of them eventually succumb and surrender to their desires to become full time hucows at what is unashamedly a free-for-all and free-love hucow breeding farm. Needless to say, more pregnancies and futile attempts with increasingly ineffective contraceptive games ensue for them both.

I am currently working on this erotic novel with another author and I am hoping to have chapters 1 and 2 ready for uploading in the next couple of months. This will be a work in progress for the next couple of years as I anticipate the final word count to be around 500 - 750k.

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

Doesn't look like a story idea to me.

 

[TheOtherTeacher]

I may have misunderstood your word count.

50k words is the NaNoWriMo target because it is considered the minimum for a novel.

75k is considered standard for a novel sold in bookshops.

If your word target is 500k - 750k, you aren't planning a story, you are planning 10.

 

[TheOtherTeacher]

If you are looking for guidance on what you've posted above, I would say the same thing I say to many posts in this sub-forum.

If you don't have a clear beginning, middle and ending, you don't have a story. You have a concept.

Imagine if Tolkien had written LoTR without the clear ending of destroying the ring.

Decide the clear ending now, and write with your goal always in mind.

 

[Rob_Royale]

If your word target is 500k - 750k, you aren't planning a story, you are planning 10.

Quite correct. The unabridged version of the Stand is 471,000 words and it is a doorstop of a book. War and Peace is 587,000 words.

 

[Anarko99]

I may have misunderstood your word count.

50k words is the NaNoWriMo target because it is considered the minimum for a novel.

75k is considered standard for a novel sold in bookshops.

If your word target is 500k - 750k, you aren't planning a story, you are planning 10.

I am anticipating that the word count range of my novel will be 500,000 words plus. I already have some 200,000 words written in uncompleted chapters. Although I am not a published author, I am a professional writer, and over the last 20 years I have written some 20 millions words worth of documents and academic essays. So, I am not intimidated by the length of my proposal. I agree though, most short novels tend to be around 50k words. The first Harry Potter book was around 80k, by the end of series they were up to 250k. So, I don't think 500k is unrealistic. I will say though, my concept for the chapters may end up being three times that number.

 

[Anarko99]

I may have misunderstood your word count.

50k words is the NaNoWriMo target because it is considered the minimum for a novel.

75k is considered standard for a novel sold in bookshops.

If your word target is 500k - 750k, you aren't planning a story, you are planning 10.

If you are looking for guidance on what you've posted above, I would say the same thing I say to many posts in this sub-forum.

If you don't have a clear beginning, middle and ending, you don't have a story. You have a concept.

Imagine if Tolkien had written LoTR without the clear ending of destroying the ring.

Decide the clear ending now, and write with your goal always in mind.

Yes, I agree, at this stage I have an overall concept and some nearly complete chapters. As for and ending, I wasn't actually intending to ever end the story, but to have it as a ongoing story that grows in the telling. Tolkien and King obviously wrote their books with a conclusion necessarily in mind. I deliberately don't really have one, and I'm not sure if I ever will. I definitely have a beginning though, and a plot that would probably cover some 20 years in the book.

 

[Anarko99]

Doesn't look like a story idea to me.

Just wondering if you had any thoughts about why this doesn't look like a story idea and what I could do to change that view? At this stage, I have an overall concept, but a number of key scenes written out that I need to tie to together as a whole.

 

[TheOtherTeacher]

I am anticipating that the word count range of my novel will be 500,000 words plus. I already have some 200,000 words written in uncompleted chapters. Although I am not a published author, I am a professional writer, and over the last 20 years I have written some 20 millions words worth of documents and academic essays.

The first Harry Potter book was around 80k, by the end of series they were up to 250k. So, I don't think 500k is unrealistic. I will say though, my concept for the chapters may end up being three times that number.

Ok. I think we have 3 points to consider.

Firstly - who do you imagine is your reader? If you are just writing this for yourself.... great! Follow your story outline written above.
But if you want others to read and enjoy it, think about who do you want to read it?

Yes, the final HP book is 250k words. It's a difficult, long book that people only read because they were invested in her characters from previous books. Do you think people would have bought HP1 if it was 250k words? If it was 500k words?

If you are honest, I think you know people wouldn't.

If you want people to read all the story you've outlined above, try to make it into 5 stories, each with a clear beginning, middle and ending.

Secondly, you say you write documents and academic essays. Fiction writing is very different, and you have to accept that. You may be the world best in academic writing, but that won't win you fiction readers. Perfect your skills with a shorter book first. Don't jump to 500k.

It's like a professional cyclist saying "I'm great at 1 specific sport...so I'll sign up for the Olympic marathon race." Sure, there's some overlap, but not much. That cyclist should train and do smaller, local races first. Not jump from zero to the Olympics.

Finally, your insistence on not needed a clearly defined ending concerns me.
Everything important has a clearly defined ending. Even life has an ending (death). The planet Earth eventually has an ending. Even the universe has the inevitable heat death. The fact you think you can write a 500k novel without any clear ending in your mind tells me a lot about you as a writer.

To bring it back to your field of work - academic writing. Imagine an academic essay that has no planned conclusion and summary. Just an endless middle. Would you write and submit that for publication and peer review?

 

[Anarko99]

Ok. I think we have 3 points to consider.

Firstly - who do you imagine is your reader? If you are just writing this for yourself.... great! Follow your story outline written above.
But if you want others to read and enjoy it, think about who do you want to read it?

Yes, the final HP book is 250k words. It's a difficult, long book that people only read because they were invested in her characters from previous books. Do you think people would have bought HP1 if it was 250k words? If it was 500k words?

If you are honest, I think you know people wouldn't.

If you want people to read all the story you've outlined above, try to make it into 5 stories, each with a clear beginning, middle and ending.

Secondly, you say you write documents and academic essays. Fiction writing is very different, and you have to accept that. You may be the world best in academic writing, but that won't win you fiction readers. Perfect your skills with a shorter book first. Don't jump to 500k.

It's like a professional cyclist saying "I'm great at 1 specific sport...so I'll sign up for the Olympic marathon race." Sure, there's some overlap, but not much. That cyclist should train and do smaller, local races first. Not jump from zero to the Olympics.

Finally, your insistence on not needed a clearly defined ending concerns me.
Everything important has a clearly defined ending. Even life has an ending (death). The planet Earth eventually has an ending. Even the universe has the inevitable heat death. The fact you think you can write a 500k novel without any clear ending in your mind tells me a lot about you as a writer.

To bring it back to your field of work - academic writing. Imagine an academic essay that has no planned conclusion and summary. Just an endless middle. Would you write and submit that for publication and peer review?

Firstly, thanks for taking the time to write your post as it was really appreciated.

Secondly, I guess my intended readership would be people who are interested in the genre of impregnation and sex games.

Thirdly, I am not really worried about a lengthy word count at this stage. And I think for as many people who are put off by a 1000 pages plus book, the same can be said for readers being put off by a book of 50 pages or less. Horses for courses really when it comes to word count. And even then, long stories are often split up into several books, like David Eddings Belgariad and Raymond Feists Magician series, which started off with 700 odd page book and went on forever lol. I guess what I was outlining my scope and ambition, maybe I am being too ambitious lol. But as for only short books being successful, I don't think that's correct to say.

Fourthly, I know you are right about traditional stories having a beginning, middle and end. But I am deliberately trying to do something different and open ended. There are lots of examples of stories and films that have an open ending, which isn't really an ending because the reader is intentionally left with lots of unanswered questions. For example, Interstellar and Inception.

Fifth, you are absolutely right, there is a huge difference between my academic works and writing a good novel or story. To be honest with you, composing believable dialogue and humor is probably what I am worried about most. I feel quietly confident about everything else though, plot, prose etc. In terms of being a cyclist then, I'm okay cycling all day on the road, but I need more practice off road then lol.

Sixth, endings, why are you so concerned about endings? lol That seems a very human way of looking at things. I am sure you are aware of that analogy of the concept of infinity and an infinite number of monkeys typing randomly will at some point write the whole works of Shakespeare lol It is deliberately my intention not to conclude the story, so that I can add to it whenever I like and whenever I am able to. For example, the TV series Red Dwarf, Lister seems no closer to getting back to Earth at episode 60 than he did at episode 1, yet we all want to know what's going to happen next! lol So, even though there might be no more future episodes of Red Dwarf, the story hasn't ended. Its left ongoing, and I have a feeling that Lister will wonder the cosmos forever, or die trying lol.

Lastly, quite correct, most academic paper are not without a beginning, middle and end. But, maybe that's why I am trying to depart from that in the first place, hmmmm?

Thanks once again for you views, very thought provoking and appreciated, and I will bear you advice in mind.

 

[Anarko99]

Ok. I think we have 3 points to consider.

Firstly - who do you imagine is your reader? If you are just writing this for yourself.... great! Follow your story outline written above.
But if you want others to read and enjoy it, think about who do you want to read it?

Yes, the final HP book is 250k words. It's a difficult, long book that people only read because they were invested in her characters from previous books. Do you think people would have bought HP1 if it was 250k words? If it was 500k words?

If you are honest, I think you know people wouldn't.

If you want people to read all the story you've outlined above, try to make it into 5 stories, each with a clear beginning, middle and ending.

Secondly, you say you write documents and academic essays. Fiction writing is very different, and you have to accept that. You may be the world best in academic writing, but that won't win you fiction readers. Perfect your skills with a shorter book first. Don't jump to 500k.

It's like a professional cyclist saying "I'm great at 1 specific sport...so I'll sign up for the Olympic marathon race." Sure, there's some overlap, but not much. That cyclist should train and do smaller, local races first. Not jump from zero to the Olympics.

Finally, your insistence on not needed a clearly defined ending concerns me.
Everything important has a clearly defined ending. Even life has an ending (death). The planet Earth eventually has an ending. Even the universe has the inevitable heat death. The fact you think you can write a 500k novel without any clear ending in your mind tells me a lot about you as a writer.

To bring it back to your field of work - academic writing. Imagine an academic essay that has no planned conclusion and summary. Just an endless middle. Would you write and submit that for publication and peer review?

Actually, message me if you would like to have a look at my draft for the first couple of chapters as I would appreciate your thoughts on where I am at so far.

 

[KimAwakened]

'Gamification'.

God help us...

 

[Celand]

I never post any critiques BUT this headline intrigued me…. Of course it’s Literotica ( heavily censored ) so your story complies “ with happy go lucky pablum like story”…. Breeding farm should be harsh slave establishment where women are subjected to produce offspring for sale to rich couples….. aside ‘husbands” to impregnate the “ donors”, for those who cannot they should have some slave stalions to service the wives. A lot of coercion, involuntary sex, punishments and body modifications… are in place instead of this “ pablum”, but then Literotica will NOT let you publish it. So you are between rock and the hard place.

 

[Anarko99]

'Gamification'.

God help us...

Don't knock it until you understand what it means as a sexual fetish. Essentially it means sex play with rules, like for example sexual roulette and truth or dare.

 

[Anarko99]

I never post any critiques BUT this headline intrigued me…. Of course it’s Literotica ( heavily censored ) so your story complies “ with happy go lucky pablum like story”…. Breeding farm should be harsh slave establishment where women are subjected to produce offspring for sale to rich couples….. aside ‘husbands” to impregnate the “ donors”, for those who cannot they should have some slave stalions to service the wives. A lot of coercion, involuntary sex, punishments and body modifications… are in place instead of this “ pablum”, but then Literotica will NOT let you publish it. So you are between rock and the hard place.

Hi, this was a good post that got me thinking about a few things.

Firstly, I don't think literotica or the laws in the UK have any issues about sexual fantasy that involves aspects of coercion, involuntary sex and reluctance. As human beings we can have complex thoughts and attitudes and it is quite normal and common for people to want and not want to do something including sex in equal measure. For example, someone can want to have sex, but be unsure of cheating on their partner etc. Alternatively, someone can want to have sex, but be reluctant to have children as a result. The permutations of this are endless really.

This is quite different from someone saying an absolute hundred percent "NO" to something sexual and who is definitely "NOT" consenting, which is then forced and clearly and rightly illegal. Sexual assault and rape like this causes victims severe harm, so it isn't right to ignore that and be concerned only with selfish sexual gratification without any care for the other person. So, for me, even fantasy about rape and sexual assault is morally and legally wrong. Not to mention that if you did write about this and publish something like this, you could get in trouble with the Police, so I wouldn't advise doing that. And literotica are right to ban this kind of thing. Speaking for myself, I am not sexually aroused by any form of sexual assault.

Secondly, sex punishments and body modifications. Spanking a person with open palm hand, leaving no lasting mark and things like breast growth due to lactation from pregnancy, breast implants, hair removal, having tattoos etc are normally not viewed as problematic. Gray areas might include taking hormones without medical supervision for gender transition and the more extreme forms of body piercings. Impregnation, may be described as a body modification as well, but being pregnant by itself isn't an illegal body modification for a woman. Some people have had modifications like pointy elf ears, which might be technically illegal even though the prospect of being prosecuted may not be likely. For the most part, I don't think literotica or the laws in the UK have any issues about sexual fantasy that involves these aspects of body modification.

Beyond this, the law in the UK is quite clear about it. If a sexual act causes an actual lasting physical injury and harm, like cuts, deep bruises, broken bones etc or death, then it is illegal even if a person is saying they consent to it being done to them. The issue here is about deriving sexual pleasure from causing someone real physical harm and pain. Again, this is a selfish act not to mention risky in terms of causing harm that could be unforeseen and unexpected. Like for example, sex involving choking could easily result in the recipient having unintended breathing difficulties which may put their life at risk. Clearly, neither the person doing it to them or the recipient would want to end up seriously harmed or dying. No one can legally consent to this kind of sexual act. Recently there was a case in the news where men consented to things like amputation and castration for sexual gratification, those who did it to them were quite rightly convicted of serious violent offenses. So, again, for me, even fantasy about sexualised violence and physical assault resulting in injury and harm is morally and legally wrong. Not to mention that if you did write about this and publish something like this, you could again get in trouble with the Police, so I wouldn't advise doing that either. Speaking for myself, I am not sexually aroused by any form of sexual act that causes anyone to suffer an injury. And again literotica are right to ban this kind of thing.

So, the notion that writing a story about an impregnation hucow sex farm would have to be constrained to a "pablum" that would stifle my creativity as an author or end up becoming sexually muted or bland, isn't something I would agree with as there is plenty that can be explored with this plot line without causing anyone to be offended or breaking any laws. It is precisely ambivalence and ambiguity about sex and the potential consequences of sex that can sexually thrilling. I think this is far more interesting to explore than acts that are obviously illegal for very good reasons. I think I will be able to expand upon nearly everything you suggested with sexual servitude, breeding, submission and how the women would be transformed into creampie addict hucows with stretched out tummies and milky udders. I don't see me being stuck between any rock and hard place with all that!

Anyway, message me if you would like to discuss this story plot line further.

 

[Celand]

As I have said “ pablum”, but hey good luck with it. But I believe that you are confused about fantasy and reality.

 

[KimAwakened]

Don't knock it until you understand what it means as a sexual fetish. Essentially it means sex play with rules, like for example sexual roulette and truth or dare.

I'm knocking it because of the totally absurd liberties taken with the English language, as anyone with half a brain cell would have understood. I couldn't give a flying fuck about whatever the sexual detail is.

 

[Anarko99]

I'm knocking it because of the totally absurd liberties taken with the English language, as anyone with half a brain cell would have understood. I couldn't give a flying fuck about whatever the sexual detail is.

Hi, "absurd liberties taken with the English language", can you clarify what you mean by this comment and how it relates to anything I have said, because, frankly I am baffled by your response and I have no idea what you are talking about lol. But then again, it might be that I can't understand your comment by virtue of me being autistic and dyslexic, so, clarification and explanation from you would help. Thanks.

 

[Anarko99]

As I have said “ pablum”, but hey good luck with it. But I believe that you are confused about fantasy and reality.

No, I don't believe I am confused about fantasy and reality. I am here to write a novel, not a plan to carry out in real life. As for even fantasizing about serious crimes, like rape, child abduction etc, that is still a serious criminal offense under UK law, so moral objections aside even, I don't want to do that either, and neither should anyone else. You again refer to "pablum". So I looked it up, Google said: "What is an example of a pablum? The term pablum comes directly from the brand name Pablum, which manufactured a children's cereal known for being bland and easily digestible. Example: Celebrity news is the sort of pablum that distracts people from the actual issues happening in our world." My story won't be bland or predictable, I can assure you of that. I can also assure you that it will not include anything that is illegal to fantasize about by glorifying serious crimes.

 

[000zing]

Hi, "absurd liberties taken with the English language", can you clarify what you mean by this comment and how it relates to anything I have said, because, frankly I am baffled by your response and I have no idea what you are talking about lol. But then again, it might be that I can't understand your comment by virtue of me being autistic and dyslexic, so, clarification and explanation from you would help. Thanks.

I suspect she may have meant that the non-existent word "gamification", produced by inventification by a group of people involved with low-brow, moronic nerdification activities, strikes her as absurdification. Your non-understandification of this will probably strike her similarly, as it does me.

I might be wrong. Just my best guessification.

 

[alohadave]

I suspect she may have meant that the non-existent word "gamification"

Might want to check on that.

https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/gamification

It's also in the OED if you prefer a British source.