The homewrecking bastard.

[MysteryStranger]

I'm throwing this idea out there in hope that one of you will like it enough to write it. I'd do it myself, but i'm pretty inexperienced as a writer and plan on writing other stories before writing sex.

It's the week before Johns wedding, and to say he's nervous would be an understatement. One morning he stops by a cafe to get some breakfast, where he's unlucky enough to bump into Tommy: the charming, funny, ridiculously good looking bastard that knowingly seduced Johns ex-wife and made sure he was caught in Johns own bed with her.
John had been married to Molly since they were 19, they'd travelled the world together, and spent 8 years together before Tommy came into their lives. At first he was just a friend, but slowly and surely his flirting with Molly began to work and they fell into a torrid affair built on mindblowingly kinky sex.
Molly felt guilty about what she was doing, to the point where she'd break down sobbing over it. One day, Johns returns home and catches the 2 of them in bed, a massive fight breaks out, Tommy admits he went after her simply to break up their marriage, and leaves town days later.
John and Molly divorce, despite her begging for a second chance.

5 years later, John is set to marry again, this time to Sophie. Meeting Tommy in the cafe, John is not pleased to see him, and during a short conversation John lets slip that he's getting married again. Tommy seemingly doesn't care.

The night of Sophie's bachelorette party arrives, and when the stripper arrives, it's Tommy, though she doesn't know this. Drunk out of her mind, Tommy soon tempts her into sucking on his dick, and eventually convinces her to let him give her one last fuck before she marries, right there in the middle of the nightclub, surround by her girlfriends.

The morning of the wedding arrives, and John recieves a dvd in the mail showing what Sophie got up to at her party, and with who.
The end.

So that turned out to be quiet a big post, sorry about that.
I hope you like it, and i hope that some kind...nay, horny person out there will write it.

Than you for your time.

 

[sirhugs]

the trolls would attack in force, but it would find an audience. IMHO needs resolution AFTER he receives the dvd though - one way or the other.

 

[Lost_Yonder]

There was a story once, many years ago, in a newspaper that relates to this story. At the dinner reception after his wedding, a guy stands up to make a toast. He informs everyone that taped underneat their chair is an envelop and that they should all open it. Loud gasps are heard, particularly at the head table from the parents of the bride as they see pictures of their daughter fucking the best man. the groom then walks out of the party, announcing he is having the marriage annulled. Apparently, he knew his fiancee was having an affair and had pics taken. Rather than cancelling the wedding, he went through with it out of spite, forcing her family to pay the bills...

sick, demented world...

 

[MysteryStranger]

the trolls would attack in force, but it would find an audience. IMHO needs resolution AFTER he receives the dvd though - one way or the other.

There's a couple reasons i ended it there:
A: So that who ever writes this can resolve it in their own way
B: I think it works without any resolution after, as the reader is left to imagine what he does. So if the trolls want to imagine the characters dieing in violent, horrific ways, they can.

There was a story once, many years ago, in a newspaper that relates to this story. At the dinner reception after his wedding, a guy stands up to make a toast. He informs everyone that taped underneat their chair is an envelop and that they should all open it. Loud gasps are heard, particularly at the head table from the parents of the bride as they see pictures of their daughter fucking the best man. the groom then walks out of the party, announcing he is having the marriage annulled. Apparently, he knew his fiancee was having an affair and had pics taken. Rather than cancelling the wedding, he went through with it out of spite, forcing her family to pay the bills...

sick, demented world...

Yes, yes it is.

 

[bumblegrum]

Hi MysteryStranger. I like the theme of this story, and I'd like to have a crack at it - one day, because I've got four or five other projects on the go at present. BUT, and it's a huge but, I'd like to write it as a HEA romance (because I'm a big softie ) without any major erotic content, and possibly on another site where erotica isn't a major component.

Please let me know if this doesn't work for you, and I'll pull the story - after all, it is your idea.

 

[Carnevil9]

I like it. I like it a lot. I don't really believe that all love is doomed, but it sure makes for some damn nice cathartic fiction!!

 

[MysteryStranger]

Hi MysteryStranger. I like the theme of this story, and I'd like to have a crack at it - one day, because I've got four or five other projects on the go at present. BUT, and it's a huge but, I'd like to write it as a HEA romance (because I'm a big softie ) without any major erotic content, and possibly on another site where erotica isn't a major component.

Please let me know if this doesn't work for you, and I'll pull the story - after all, it is your idea.

If you want to write it, go ahead. Just post a link when you get around to it.

And the same goes for anyone wanting to write a straight up sex story based on this, just go ahead and remember to post a link.

 

[wheelchairman85]

MsteryStranger I got a thought of my own why doesn't John murder the homewrecking bastard tommy? Tommy already ruined John's first marriage. Why can't John murder Tommy and get rid of him.

 

[Sean Renaud]

Civilized people don't murder.

 

[wheelchairman85]

Sean Renaud that is true but this is a story.

 

[Lost_Yonder]

Civilized people don't murder.

guess that means there is no such thing as a civilized people!

 

[Sean Renaud]

Sean Renaud that is true but this is a story.

My point more accurately is it's grossly disproportionate to the crime. Which is why you don't see it often in stories. It just seems overly brutal and any sympathy you had for the charachter is lost because they're not the victim. Lorana Bobbit is not the victim, nor the hero of the my husband had an affair story. Like Magneto you understand the motivation but that doesn't mean he's not still the villian.

 

[sirhugs]

Civilized people don't murder.

NO WONDER my Elysium Island Adventures did so poorly! Oh well, what can you do with a "challenge" story that had to include a machete? I guess they could have sliced pineapples & made tropical drinks...

 

[sassysasha89]

Another home-wrecking bastard

I'm throwing this idea out there in hope that one of you will like it enough to write it. I'd do it myself, but i'm pretty inexperienced as a writer and plan on writing other stories before writing sex.

It's the week before Johns wedding, and to say he's nervous would be an understatement. One morning he stops by a cafe to get some breakfast, where he's unlucky enough to bump into Tommy: the charming, funny, ridiculously good looking bastard that knowingly seduced Johns ex-wife and made sure he was caught in Johns own bed with her.
John had been married to Molly since they were 19, they'd travelled the world together, and spent 8 years together before Tommy came into their lives. At first he was just a friend, but slowly and surely his flirting with Molly began to work and they fell into a torrid affair built on mindblowingly kinky sex.
Molly felt guilty about what she was doing, to the point where she'd break down sobbing over it. One day, Johns returns home and catches the 2 of them in bed, a massive fight breaks out, Tommy admits he went after her simply to break up their marriage, and leaves town days later.
John and Molly divorce, despite her begging for a second chance.

5 years later, John is set to marry again, this time to Sophie. Meeting Tommy in the cafe, John is not pleased to see him, and during a short conversation John lets slip that he's getting married again. Tommy seemingly doesn't care.

The night of Sophie's bachelorette party arrives, and when the stripper arrives, it's Tommy, though she doesn't know this. Drunk out of her mind, Tommy soon tempts her into sucking on his dick, and eventually convinces her to let him give her one last fuck before she marries, right there in the middle of the nightclub, surround by her girlfriends.

The morning of the wedding arrives, and John recieves a dvd in the mail showing what Sophie got up to at her party, and with who.
The end.

So that turned out to be quiet a big post, sorry about that.
I hope you like it, and i hope that some kind...nay, horny person out there will write it.

Than you for your time.

So when Sophie ends up pregnant, there's no doubt of the paternity of the baby. In the video, he sees that the one last fuck turned into several because she begged for more.

This one destroys not only a home but also destroys a family. A hot sexy charming irresistible man initially was engaged/married to one woman but cheated on her with her cousin/sister. Three years later, he married the cousin but wasn't faithful to her either. He seduces his former fiance/wife whose now remarried and fucks and impregnates her. He also manipulates her sister's marriage so her husband begins to cheat on her with other women and even has threesomes with the man. Meanwhile the man places himself in a position where the woman turns to him for comfortable and fucks her without any objection from her . . .