The hole in the wall

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Ted move's away from home and into a townhouse with his mom, after the divorce.

He notices a can sized round hole in his rooms closet leading into the house next door. One morning he notices a note had been passed through the hole. Rachel the girl next door begins to explain, how she's home schooled and barely gets to leave her extremely christian house.

Ted starts doing his homework by the hole alongside her, slipping her magazines comic books, sugar filled snacks etc. After weeks of communicating by notes, Rachel starts putting on seductive shows for Ted, where he kneels and watches her through the hole.

She eventually sucks his cock through the hole and more follows etc. Tag your it.
 
Ted move's away from home and into a townhouse with his mom, after the divorce.

He notices a can sized round hole in his rooms closet leading into the house next door. One morning he notices a note had been passed through the hole. Rachel the girl next door begins to explain, how she's home schooled and barely gets to leave her extremely christian house.

Ted starts doing his homework by the hole alongside her, slipping her magazines comic books, sugar filled snacks etc. After weeks of communicating by notes, Rachel starts putting on seductive shows for Ted, where he kneels and watches her through the hole.

She eventually sucks his cock through the hole and more follows etc. Tag your it.

I like the idea... I was reading about a case in 50s Hong Kong where a young woman got pregnant through a hole in the wall. Her family lived next door to another, and their son's room shared a wall with hers, and apparently a knothole fell out of the wall, and, well...
 
I like the idea... I was reading about a case in 50s Hong Kong where a young woman got pregnant through a hole in the wall. Her family lived next door to another, and their son's room shared a wall with hers, and apparently a knothole fell out of the wall, and, well...


Thanks, I was just going to do notes but I they'll talk after her note.

I was going to make her refuse vaginal sex and go for anal? Thoughts?
 
Could make for a good story. Especially when Ted finds out that it isn't a girl at all, but a boy who likes to pretend to be a girl. That's why he always refused vaginal sex, but was fine with oral and anal.....

It also reminds me very strongly of a (non-sexual) scene from the movie, "V for Vendetta."
 
Could make for a good story. Especially when Ted finds out that it isn't a girl at all, but a boy who likes to pretend to be a girl. That's why he always refused vaginal sex, but was fine with oral and anal.....

It also reminds me very strongly of a (non-sexual) scene from the movie, "V for Vendetta."

The refusal of vaginal was for religious reasons.



I was thinking of that, but I was like no. Let's not muddy the story. I won't write that, I may get to this next year if no one else does. I am not against those stories. I just thought this had a romantic let's run off together vibe. Instead of the betrayal resentment and legitimate distrust deception creates.

If I were to write a homosexual story it would have to be something of meaning soul, acceptance and understanding. I maybe full of shit, but I'm trying, trying to write stories of meaning. I want them to be friends not fuck buddy's. I don't believe I would have her perform oral on him. Just vaginal sex that ends with a pregnancy probably. Then they run off to Australia or Canada.
 
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