The Girl Next Door?

[XXXtremeSubSlt]

Hi. Let me start off by saying that I am relatively new to Lit. I have been reading the BB (more so than the stories) almost religiously now (lol), and since I would love to become a published author someday I figured I had better get to writing!

My question, this poll, is quite simple:
Which "Girl Next Door" theme do you like the best?

You may use my thread as an area of discussion if you like, or you may reply to the poll alone.

Thank you.

 

[millieteases]

I like innocent newlywed, former catholic school girl, discovers she really likes sex, explores lots of options - with her equally innocent husband, and their slightly more experienced neighbors.

 

[BlackSnake]

I like the new bride slut story. A few years ago I help a couple move into an apartment across the hall where I was staying at the time. Both were young and had a kid. The young dude was a bragger and his babe was backing him up. He liked talking about how good he screwed his girl. Cool with me, the little hottie, especially since she just smiled when he talked about it. My anaconda was always hard around them. I went over to kick-it with them, and after greeting the guy she gave me one of those full body hugs. The anaconda woke up and I slid my hand over her ass as she moved away. Dude didn't seem to mind, so I compliment him on how nice her ass was, as a joke and to feel him out. Dude shock me by grabbing her ass saying that it was really nice while she just giggled. I knew I had a shot, so I kept the conversation going. I was hoping that he would want to show off and let me get away with a lot more. Both of them got high, but I only drank. Got my wish. I start telling him how perfectly shaped her ass was as I rubbed my hand over it. I was standing close at her side and he was behind her. As I was rubbing my hand over her ass I quick copped a feel on her crotch. He didn't see it and she didn't make a move. Dude just grabbed her ass with both of his hands. I tried thinking hard and fast, I figured if I could get him to fuck her in front of me, maybe I could join in. She was just giggling and going along with what ever he did. He started bragging about an outfit he had bought her, and had her to go put it on to model. While she was changing he lit a joint and started telling me how he liked fucking her. I played invious, which I was and wanted a shot at that ass. She came into the kitchen where we were standing in this one piece lace jumper number (I don't know what you call it) She didn't have on anything under it. Her nipples and pubic hair was clearly visible. I was show my excitement of how good I thought it look and felt. I noticed that it button at the crotch, but played dump and asked how she got into it. As I hoped she unsnapped it at the crotch. Dude was just patting himself on the back while I was checking out her nicely trimed pussy. I remember saying "Man...I know you have fun licking that, I never went down on a girl before. How do you do it?" Well, something to that effect. I was lying of course, but I figured sterotypes would help me. Dude demonstrated, she sat in a chair while I was right down there with him watching closely. I asked him could I try. Dude became a teacher. I did what he said, enjoying licking his girl with his guidance. Then I asked him did he finger her while he did it. Of course he did, and I slid my finger into her cunt beifly. I didn't want to blow it. I told him that he just had to show me how he fucked her, her pussy was just too good. Dude laughed and she laughed with him as he took off his clothes and she pulled the lacey thing off. He took he by the hand and I followed them into their bedroom. Dude fucked like a rabbit. I kept interrupting him asking him did he do it this way or that. I just didn't want him to cum, before I thought of away to join in. Dude was proud of himself as I sung his praises. He told me she gave great head and had her to suck his dick while he laid on his back. I told him that they were better than watching a pron movie. Dude must have felt like a king as much smoke I was blowing up his ass. I told him I had to jerk off watching them. I told me to go for it. His girl had her knees at the edge of the bed, so all I had to do was stand behind her and stick it in. That was my plan. I told him that I didn't know how could stand it as I got closer and closer pointing my dick at her pussy. I was say how well she was sucking his dick and that it must feel great. He held her hair up, so I could see what she was doing, and at that time I had my dick to her pussy moving it around until I got the head of my dick in her. I told him that I saw what he meant when he said that her pussy was hot. He said her mouth was hot too as I pushed my dick in. There was no going back from there. All signals were go. He came in her mouth and she shallowed it all and then he got off the bed and went to get another joint, leaving me to fuck his girl. I was on the clouds. There was no way I could be this dude. He and his girl passed a joint back and forth and he gave me a beer while was fucking her. I even remmed her ass. I was at there crib everyday after that. Dude's gig didn't play enough, so I loaned him and his girl money constantly. I knew they couldn't pay me back, and each time one of them brought it up. I told them to catch me next time. My dad told me when I was a boy never to loan money that you couldn't give away. Besides, his girl was giving it up to me constantly and he was allowing it. He let me treat her like she was my girl and she acted the part. Even when we went shopping together, he and I picked out things for her. It was kick ass for about six months and they moved. I still miss those two. Never got a dime back of any of the money I loan them but girl was worth it and more. Lucky SOB.

I'm going to submit this as a story.

 

[Chicklet]

Black Snake,

No offense, but you really need to work on that story. Want some help? I'm willing to lend a hand.

Chicklet

 

[penguindance]

 

[Chicklet]

how would we reveal that she's a raging slut?

 

[penguindance]

 

[PainSlt]

how would we reveal that she's a raging slut?

Maybe it could be from her pov. Kisses her husband good bye in the morning and starts in on the days "work..."

I like this idea. Perhaps she is making a confession (be it to a shrink, a priest, or a close friend) and retelling the day's, week's, etc.'s, tales?

 

[penguindance]

 

[PainSlt]

That could work, too. Maybe, instead of a "typical" diary/journal it could be a "brag book" of sorts where she can keep a private memory of her activities.

 

[penguindance]

 

[StevenWill]

I like the diary

I like the diary idea, her words would be exciting to read. How about a shy newlywed catholic virgin discovers some porn movies in the boxes her new husband stored in the garage. She is awakened by them and begins to masturbate to them daily, discovering her sexual potentials. She writes about them in the diary. Maybe one night she has a little to much to drink with her husband at dinner and lets go in bed, to his shock and amazement.

It could go several ways. She grows more and more daring in bed with him or takes others along the way--paper boy, neighbor's wife, etc. I like keeping it between husband and wife I guess because I am too damn much of a romantic, but don't hold me to that.

It's hard to write diary material for someone who is just awakening as opposed to a raging slut. She would be more timid at first, then progress instead of just jumping in and writing about cocks and pussies and fucking and sucking.

Just musing here. Ignore as you like.

Steve

 

[Chicklet]

Ah yes...an album of her conquests.

she could take poloroid pics of each man she wants/does fuck

 

[MsLinnet]

Girl Next Door

I like the girl next door situation. As I look out my window look who has just moved in its Brad Pit and Jennifer Aniston. I just noticed who is staying with them, is that Julia Roberts? oh how lucky I am.

lust is a good thing.
Love Lin

 

[sirhugs]

I voted " none of the above", even though I love them all, because i like others better. First, to me " girl" excludes wives. Then "next door" suggests not just back from school, or kicked out.

some faves, in no order:

has admired young neighbour for years, sees her sunbathing, gets off, she seems him...

girl next door, just 18, comes over to borrow a cup of sugar, finds him hhard, reading Lit....

wife asks gnd to help while wife is away. either seduction in kitchen, or shower, or bedroom ( " wife told me you need this")

gn comes to babysit. wife passes out, she stays, sex in familyroom

voyeur story: watching gnd with bf through the window