Belegon
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Fox News said:OSLO -- Despite less than one year in office and leading two wars, President Obama snatched the 2009 Nobel Peace Prize on Friday, stunning the world one week after failing to win an Olympic bid for his adopted hometown.
Shall we count the negative connotations in this lead? As someone with at least a rudimentary journalistic education, I find this to be fucking disgusting. This isn't a news lead, it's a fucking op ed piece.
WHO, WHAT, WHERE, WHY. That's what should be in a lead. Sometimes HOW is appropriate. Not always.
Beginning with an implied negative, then using a verb (snatched) that a) implies action on the part of a passive participant and b) carries an unavoidable negative overtone, THEN referencing a completely separate and unrelated piece of old news while AGAIN assigning an inappropriate amount of causation...
I wish they at least had the honesty to call it a column instead of a news item, but they don't.
For balance:
MSNBC said:OSLO, Norway - President Barack Obama won the 2009 Nobel Peace Prize on Friday in a stunning decision designed to encourage his initiatives to reduce nuclear arms, ease tensions with the Muslim world and stress diplomacy and cooperation rather than unilateralism.
Much better. The language which gives the appearance of favortism is at least from the appropriate sources,as these are indeed the reasons cited by the Nobel Committee.
However, either NBC needs to be slapped on the wrist or the AP is using the NBC writer as a primary source, as this is the exact lead available on the Associated Press feed.
Can we please quit fucking pretending that Faux News is "fair and balanced" when this passes for journalistic integrity there?