The Cursed Bed

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I thought up this story a few months ago but I just can't figure out how to write it. Part of my problem is the Historical part of it. I write for fun, I don't want to have to go do research and all that to write a story.

The idea is not the story of ONE person. It's the story of a bed. Probably made in New England. It would have to be a big, beautiful four post bed. The story goes that the bed, ended up in the possession of a Witch in Salem, Mass. during the Witch hunts there. This witch, unlike most, was not taken out and burned at the stake, a group of townsfolk broke into her house, raped her and murdered her on that bed.

As she was dying, she put a curse on the bed that she had loved so much so that any woman who slept in it would meet a horrible fate such as being raped and/or murdered. It could be written as a stand alone story or as an ongoing story. Each chapter telling the tale of a new owner.

If anyone is interested, I think it would be interesting if one person wrote the witch story and then passed the story on and let a NEW author write the next chapter and so forth and so on. Each chapter, each woman would be in the hands of a different author. If someone can arrange this, I would most interested in seeing how it comes about and maybe even writing a chapter of my own. :) Suggestion?
 
The research would be minimal in a piece such as this. The bed is the crutch, not the world of the sexual participants. You'd just have to get enough small detail to set a period in which the action is taking place.

More important is story focus. What is the point? Is it the nonconsent/violence angle you wish to play up? The mysticism angle of the witch's curse? Furniture fetish? The point of the story must be defined so that at its end, there is a sense of closure.

Cool idea, and very workable. I'd be interested in hearing more about this one.

-T

Doffy said:
I thought up this story a few months ago but I just can't figure out how to write it. Part of my problem is the Historical part of it. I write for fun, I don't want to have to go do research and all that to write a story.

The idea is not the story of ONE person. It's the story of a bed. Probably made in New England. It would have to be a big, beautiful four post bed. The story goes that the bed, ended up in the possession of a Witch in Salem, Mass. during the Witch hunts there. This witch, unlike most, was not taken out and burned at the stake, a group of townsfolk broke into her house, raped her and murdered her on that bed.

As she was dying, she put a curse on the bed that she had loved so much so that any woman who slept in it would meet a horrible fate such as being raped and/or murdered. It could be written as a stand alone story or as an ongoing story. Each chapter telling the tale of a new owner.

If anyone is interested, I think it would be interesting if one person wrote the witch story and then passed the story on and let a NEW author write the next chapter and so forth and so on. Each chapter, each woman would be in the hands of a different author. If someone can arrange this, I would most interested in seeing how it comes about and maybe even writing a chapter of my own. :) Suggestion?
 
I'm confused. If the witch loved her bed so much, then why would she curse it and wish an equally horrible destiny to other owners of it, as to herself?

If she had hexed it so that people sleeping in it would get incredibly horny, I'd understand. And perhaps that every woman who had sex in the bed would feel the urge to kill her partner afterwards, so that she wouldn't suffer the same fate as the witch..?
 
I think I actually once saw a porn about a magical bed. Everyone who slept in it became horny and I think the bed itself kinda had a life of its own (can't remember really). I remember another (or the same?? movie) showing flasbacks of what had gone on in the bed over the years. The bed looking back at the good times it had before it was burned for firewood.

Ok, that all came out strange, but I think you get my drift.:eek:
 
I love the idea, but maybe it would be better as a one-time, stand-alone story than a series. The bed being cursed is good, but maybe seduction should be the goal instead of a rape scene.

How about the bed being in an abandoned house that a lost couple just happens to stumble upon?
 
Doffy said:
As she was dying, she put a curse on the bed that she had loved so much so that any woman who slept in it would meet a horrible fate such as being raped and/or murdered. It could be written as a stand alone story or as an ongoing story. Each chapter telling the tale of a new owner.

suggestions:
1. not 'sleeps', has sex. that way you can build it up with dreams/etc for the female character.

2. first victim - witch's daughter. :)

3. family buys it for their daughter, who sleeps in it growing up. she brings her boyfriend home one night... oops. :devil:

I too think this is a workable story, albeit with some tweaks.
 
Lovepotion69 said:

I think I actually once saw a porn about a magical bed. Everyone who slept in it became horny and I think the bed itself kinda had a life of its own (can't remember really). I remember another (or the same?? movie) showing flasbacks of what had gone on in the bed over the years. The bed looking back at the good times it had before it was burned for firewood.

I swear I've seen something just like this, too! :eek:



(Too much bad 70s and 80s porn for me! :eek: )
 
I truly love this idea and think it could be a great Chain story!! But, like others, I feel some new ideas should be added.

First of all, why a Salem Witch theme? Wasn't it "proven" that none of the men and women of 1692 accused were witches? They didn't practice witchcraft in any form... They were God fearing Christians... Etc?

Also, I like the idea of the bed having a spell over it, but not a curse. Why not have a happy story? One that is too dark will most likely end up in Extreme. Which isn't a bad thing, per se, but...well...ya know.

So, the bed has a spell on it...as others have said...that turns people very horny. ;) Perhaps the spell is that if a virgin was to lay upon it she would turn into such a randy bitch! ;) (Which, if this is set in older times a virgin would be more common and a "slut" would be a scandal!)

The only problem is... Without a "witch's curse", etc., why would this spell be on the bed? Etc.

Again, I love this basic idea and think it could make an awesome chain series, but as is there are still plot questions that need answers!
 
BlessedBe said:
I truly love this idea and think it could be a great Chain story!!!

I have to second that.

This is an EXCELLENT idea - maybe not 100% original in the concept of a cursed object being passed down but it's still super-terrific and would make a very, very good chain story. sounds like what you want for it is a chain story, too.

If you want to start it as a chain story, I suggest you go read the steps to starting one in the FAQ's on the front page. If you need help, PM me, I'm willing to lend a hand = )

Chicklet
 
guess what ..... Like some others, I also remember a movie like that, that dealt with the erotic tales of a bad (but in my case, it wasn't a hardcore porn movie, it was a softcore erotic movie) .....

Anyway: The witch spell is interesting, but what about this: (I hope this doesn't get too far off the original posting)

She ain't a witch. She could be a whore, the bed is her workplace. The other woman of the town have to work hard on the field.
But not the whore. The men from the town pay her with food and money.
Well, back in that puritanical time, sex was only for breeding, so the other woman of the town only had sex with their husbands if they wanted a baby ....

Well, the whore was either infertile, or maybe she knew an early version of a contraceptive. Anyway: All the guys in town (young and old) visit (and of course fuck) her.

So, the women of the town become angry. They work hard on the field to harvest the food and get some money, while their husbands give it all to this whore ..... especially, since it's all about something dirty like sex ......

After some time, the guys in town become more and more open. They talk very open about the whore .... how great she performs oral, anal and vaginal sex .... and they also talk about her beautiful bed.

Or even better: There is this carpenter. His wife always asks him about new furniture (especially a new bed) but he has neither the time, nor the needed wood ....
Some time later, he visits the whore. But he hasn't the money to pay her, so he makes her an offer: He will build her a new, beautiful bed, carved out of the best wood ....
She accepts ..... and finally, she gets a beautiful bed. All the other guys tell the carpenter what a wonderful work he did on that "whore bed" .... and so, they visit her more and more .....

The women get really mad and they decide that the whore has to leave the town .... either dead or alive.

One day, when the husbands are away, they invade the house of the whore. She is at home - so she is captured and tied down on the bed.
They torture her (BDSM). One woman suggests to put the bed on fire and burn her alive "like a witch", but one of the other woman (the mayors wife) says: "no, don't damage the bed. It's so beautiful - my daughter has to sleep in a broken old bed, she would love this bed".
When the whore hears that, she cries stuff like "I curse you. Whomever will sleep in my bed, will receive horrible torture ......"
The whore herself doesn't believe in this curse, she just tries to save her life by scaring the women - but it's too late. She doesn't survive the torture ....
The women tell her husbands that some stranger came to town and attacked the whore .... her last wish was that the daughter of the mayor would get the bed ....

So they take the bed and put it into the room of the mayors daughter ..... (or the other way around - the daughter moves over into the empy house of the whore)
But it doesn't take long, before something bad happens. My suggestion would be: Both, the mayor and his son loved to fuck the whore in her bed. The whore is gone, but the bed is still here, so they want to have sex ..... so both, the father and son commit incest rape on their daughter/sister (of course they do it together). Or maybe it's even a gang rape (including incest)
The girl gets pregnant and gives birth to a girl (Cathy).

18 years later. Cathy is an adult woman. She marries a young guy. Of course, they are both virgin, until their honeymoon. The night after the wedding, they want to have sex in the whore bed. But right at the beginning (or at the end) the husband of Cathy receives a heart attack and dies (even though he is just 18 or 19 - he had a damaged heart and the sex was just too much for him).
So right after the wedding, Cathy already became a widow.
This is too much for her - either she dies because of a broken heart, or she commits suicide. Or maybe: to survive, she has to work as a whore, even though, she doesn't want ....

This could go one for centuries, until ..... the bed is in a big house, that for some reasons starts to burn .... so, together with the house, the bed burns down, and so together with the bed, the curse is engulfed by flames .....
 
I still think this is a great idea for a chain story!! :D If only we could come up with something "happier" than a curse and a reason the bed is the way that it is!!

Also, what time periods should be tackled? Years spaced far apart or years set close together?
 
BlessedBe said:
I still think this is a great idea for a chain story!! :D If only we could come up with something "happier" than a curse and a reason the bed is the way that it is!!

Also, what time periods should be tackled? Years spaced far apart or years set close together?

Are you are thinking along the lines of a curse like the red shoes if you remember that story sounds good

Grace
 
BlessedBe said:
I still think this is a great idea for a chain story!! :D If only we could come up with something "happier" than a curse and a reason the bed is the way that it is!!

Also, what time periods should be tackled? Years spaced far apart or years set close together?

In an earlier post I (and some other members) mentioned a porn movie. I can't exactly remember about details from the porn movie that I saw, but I think, it was from the POV of the bed .....

There was this big old bed, just standing there. And it was remembering how many people had sex .....


And when it comes to the curse: What about this: Everyone who is in this bed becomes really horny .... it's a big bed in a hotel. There is this elderly couple. They had no sex during the last few years (maybe they just don't want it anymore - or maybe the husband is impotent). But when they are in this bed, they become horny, and the man get's a hard one (at a time, when no one knew anything about Viagra).

Another part of the chain story could be: A young couple: They want to have a baby, so they have sex since quiet some time, without using contraceptives - but still, the woman doesn't become pregnant. They try it every night, but it doesn't work, and finally, after several monthgs, they give up all the hope on having a baby.
Since they had so much sex during the last few months, neither the guy nor the woman becomes horny anymore .... for them, sex became a "mechanical act"
To relax a little bit, they book a holiday trip to this hotel. They spent the night in the bed - and they become horny, like never before. So they have sex in "the bed". The next morning, the woman notices that something has changed. She makes one of this pregnancy tests and ...... hurrah, we are having a baby .....
 
Screaming Grace said:

Are you are thinking along the lines of a curse like the red shoes if you remember that story sounds good

Grace

I don't remember it. :( How'd it go?
 
BlessedBe said:
I don't remember it. :( How'd it go?

I also don't remember much about this red shoe stuff, but I think it was like: "everyone who put on the red shoes couldn't stop dancing" .....
 
NASCARaddicted said:
I also don't remember much about this red shoe stuff, but I think it was like: "everyone who put on the red shoes couldn't stop dancing" .....

That’s the one but in the idea of the story the bed is cursed lets say that the curse is similar, but instead of dancing once a virgin makes love on the bed she is unable to stop and needs sex almost non stop
Grace
 
BlessedBe said:
I don't remember it. :( How'd it go?

Something along these lines, I think...

A woman is in love with this man and finally gets to go on a date with him. He wants to go dancing and she doesn't know how, but is too ashamed to say so. So, she goes to a gypsy or some other such person and asks for advice. The gypsy offers her a pair of red shoes with the warning that they are cursed. The woman is excited and puts them on and prances off to the dance. When the music starts playing, her feet take over control, and she begins dancing. She dances and is having so much fun, but soon she is tired. The shoes, however, won't let her stop. They keep going and going until her feet begin to bleed, and then keep going and going. Finally, the woman dies of exaustion.

Another version I've heard included a man with a guitar or fiddle or something who can't stop playing, his fingers bleed, and the two of them (fiddler and dancer) both die together.

Chicklet
 
It seems that story line has been passed down and altered a lot...just like any other story out there really.

I remember reading a story (don't think it was at Lit, but I'm not sure) where a man sends a magical dildo to his wife since he was always gone. (He was something like a traveling salesman or in the military or whatever. Point is, he was gone a lot and felt bad for it.)

The dildo could fuck you with its own power once it was turned on. (Think of the "fucking machines" without the long pole and gears, etc.) The only problem was, it wouldn't stop. Eventually the dildo fucked the woman do death. :eek:
 
BlessedBe said:
It seems that story line has been passed down and altered a lot...just like any other story out there really.

I remember reading a story (don't think it was at Lit, but I'm not sure) where a man sends a magical dildo to his wife since he was always gone. (He was something like a traveling salesman or in the military or whatever. Point is, he was gone a lot and felt bad for it.)

The dildo could fuck you with its own power once it was turned on. (Think of the "fucking machines" without the long pole and gears, etc.) The only problem was, it wouldn't stop. Eventually the dildo fucked the woman do death. :eek:

I love the dildo idea you wanna fool around

Grace...
 
Screaming Grace said:
I love the dildo idea you wanna fool around

Grace...
There is a song I vaguely remember from my youth about a machine;

Round and round went the great big wheel,
In and out went the prick of steel.

.....

Something there was no way of stopping it.

It is all mixed up in my head with Miss Buss and Miss Beal and a very upper crust girls' school.

Perhaps one of the younger Brits has a memory which still works properly? Pops maybe?
 
Un-registered said:
There is a song I vaguely remember from my youth about a machine;

Round and round went the great big wheel,
In and out went the prick of steel.

.....

Something there was no way of stopping it.

It is all mixed up in my head with Miss Buss and Miss Beal and a very upper crust girls' school.

Perhaps one of the younger Brits has a memory which still works properly? Pops maybe?

I dont know that song

sorry

Grace...
 
BlessedBe said:
It seems that story line has been passed down and altered a lot...just like any other story out there really.

I remember a movie from the Netherlands about a dress. I can't remember everything, but the basic idea was: There was this dress (actually it started with a piece of cloth). A woman wore it and had sex with it. For some reasons (can't remember) she threw the dress away. A young woman found it. She changed it a little bit - like for example, she made it shorter - she looked very erotic in this short dress.
The young woman became the victim of a rapist.
Later, she threw the dress away .....

There were like 4 or 5 different small, "erotic" storys, that dealt about the dress. Each time, the dress got smaller (for example: near the end of the movie, a beggar used a part of it as a handkerchief .... then he threw it away in a park. It was run over by a lawnmower and shredded to pieces .... that was the end of the movie.

The problem (for me) was: This movie was on tv about 2 years ago. Yesterday, they wanted to rerun it, but due to the start of the war, the whole tv schedule changed ....
 
Hello all,

Thanks for all the ideas. Lots and lots of good ideas. With the war starting and all I didn't get back to check to see if anyone had replied. Foolish me.

As I read the replies I came to agree with some of the posters who said it should be a bit more happy and instead of a curse, make it a spell that makes everyone, or at least EVERY WOMAN, who gets in the bed sexually charged.

This in and of itself could lead to tragedy. Old couple gets in and the old woman screws her husband to death. Someone suggested something of this sort.

If you went with the curse idea, NascarAddicted's idea of a whore instead of a witch works much better. SOmeone was right in pointing out my flawed logic of the witch cursing her beloved bed unless she was specifically killed FOR the bed. Which is an idea too.

I am presently in the middle of writing TWO stories for "Another" site. If someone wants to take a shot at writing this story, in some form or another, for themselves, GO FOR IT! I put it up here because it the type of story I write. It's just an idea I had. If someone does it as a chain story... I might write a chapter. :) THanks everyone for the responses.

-Doffy
 
Correction

this is NOT the type of story I would write. Sorry. Fingers moved faster than my brain.
 
Sometimes "the type of story you wouldn't normally write" can be the most fun! ;)

Anyway, I do have an interest in this idea. And, though I cannot speak for her I have a strong feeling from this thread, that Chicklet is interested. :)

I've been working out details for this story while I'm not actually working on my current one. :eek:
 
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