The Crow:redemption

[sex-maniac69]

This is an idea i had that i hope goes along on this board.


Davis Reed (AKA The Crow)
23
shoulder length blak hair
gray blue eyes


Murdered on his my to his honeymoon with his new wife.he comes back a month later to seek revenge on the 6 gang members who did it.All sorts of parts open....

 

[papillon24]

sara

OOC: this is the adult verion of sara fron the fist crow. 5'7 18yrs ole , long brown har and blue eyes.I hope this works for you

IC: It had been a month since I lost my friends now as I wandered down the dark streets where the lived. Their building was now condemed but this never kept me out of it. Nothing had changed for the time of the murder. I climbed the steps to the apartement where they lived only to find it chillingly empty. It was almost like they were still here and living, but I knew better.

A breeze rushed past from the broken window blowing my black dress around my ankles.

I layed down in thier bed and drifted off to sleep.
I dreamed of them and how they were my family. no on had ever been there for me to call mom or dad. it was Dravis and his fiance who always were there no matter what. but now the nightmare came. My only family was gone. Murdered by the fith of the streets for reasons I don't understand.

 

[sex-maniac69]

Dravis:

OOC: thats great.



I woke screaming.Where was i? it looked like a coffin from the inside.I wasnt dead,was i?I slammed my fists hard against the top.It cracked.I hit it again and it broke.Dirt flowing in on top of me.I started to dig my way to the top.Soon i was free.Screaming to get air in my lungs.My first steps were weak like i was trying to learn to walk all over again.I screamed again."whats wrong with me?" i mumured to myself.


I headed back to my apartment when the memories flooded back.The murder.My sweet amanda.Dead.Me.Dead.I found our building closed off.I went up the fire escape to my shattered window.I fell at cut myself.The wound healed simultaniously.Then there was the crow on my counter,watching me.just then i heard a rustling in my bedroom."Whos there," i said in almost a whisper.I walk to the door and saw sara,my sweet sara asleep on my bed.I watched her till she woke with a gasp....

 

[Inkubus]

If you will allow?

OOC*** the last time we worked together we suffered from low turnout and I think I took the story in a direction you hadnt intended...anyway I owe you one so if you want I can either be the main Villain you bring to justice or just one of the 6 two bit hoods Is that allright?.****

IC (Idea for Main Villain)

Veril Looked out at the blue prints of the new proposed city 'renovation' it took all the low income housing and made it so only the richest could aford to live in the better parts of town it got rid of mom and pop stores and made way for metroplexes and dance clubs...and then...then came the vice....he was VERY proud of himself...all the squatters in low town had been "dealt" with...sure some things got out of hand but these things had to be done in the name of "progress". Veril had learned how to dress nice walk into board meetings and explain how his 'unorthodox' tactics could save the big companies billions and in turn make him millions. soon he would start seeing REAL money he just had to keep paying his boys and making sure they hit the 'right' houses and that they made sure the familys knew that they signed over there property or 'accidents' would happen... like what happend to that lovely newlywed couple... after them the rest strated falling in line like ducks in a row...Veril took a swallow of his brandy and drew his ivory handled dessert eagle..he aimed around the empty dinning room and fired at a bust in the center ..as it exploded he Laughed..."now its time to tell my boys that duck season is officially open to any ducks dumb enough to stay in town.."

 

[papillon24]

Sara

I awoke suddenly with a shiver to find a man hovering over me. Who could this have been. no one had entered in here since the horrible murder, or so I had thought.

I couldn't belive my eyes,was this who I thought it was. "I must still be dreaming" wispering my thoughts out loud. The man who I had awoken to was was Dravis. It couldn't be him, for he had died. I know becuse I was there at his burial.

I sat up suddenly to realize I hadn't been dreaming. No emotion could be contained within me. A peice of my family was back form the cold earth in which he had been laid. I wrapped my arms around his neck as the warm tears flowed down my cheeks.

"It is so good to have you back Dravis, I thought you were gone forever"

 

[sex-maniac69]

Dravis:

Alll i Could say when she wrapped er arms around me was"im happy to see you too,but could you kindly explain to me what happened to me,".i wiped the tears from her eyes.When it touched her i saw these images in my head.everything she saw that night.I looked again at the crow and at sara,"why have i come back?" i screamed into the air.Then i sat and wept....

 

[papillon24]

Sara

"Dravis, you died a month ago, both of you were murdered. And it hasn't been the same without you." He looked as handsome as ever in the low light of the apartment. I looked into his eyes realizing they glowed with the same light they always did.

I stood up from the bed and walked over to the dressor to light some candles that were there. then went over to the CD player and put on some music.

"Better, don't you think?" sitting back down on the bed leaning my head on his shoulder.

The thoughts of the murder soon flooded my head again and tears fell from my eyes. I again felt the lonliness of the last month on the street flow through my entire body. I did what I had to to get by. I had no other place to go but this place. When they died I had no place to go.

"Dravis, never leave me alone again. It hurt too much the first time and I couldn't bear another one."

 

[sex-maniac69]

dravis:

I looked in the mirror.Then at sara "I dont think i can stay im just back to do something," i said.This got me thinking of a story id heard.I pulled the shirt id been wearing of and went to my closet,Ah it was still there.My black tight shirt and trench.

"Im gonna find them and make them pay," i told her.I pointwd towards the closet."In a box in the bottom is some holloween paint bring it to me sara,"i said...

 

[papillon24]

Sara

Paint? Why would he want paint? I didn't question him and went to get what he asked. I peeked back at what he was doing. He dressed in his black jacket. I was a bit awestruck by the way he looked.

"Dravis? What are you going to do?" bringing the paints over to him. putting my hand to his shoulder

 

[sex-maniac69]

dravis:

I turned the radio up.my favorite song.Creeds What if. I took the make up from her.I dug through my drawer till i found an old mask of the sad face(Like in the first crow)And started to paint my face to look like it.Soon i was finished.


I turned to sara and smiled."Im going to find them and make them pay," i stuck out my arm and the crow landed on it.I walked to the window.I blew her a kiss and jumped out....

 

[sex-maniac69]

ummmm......

OOC:did this thread die or what????

 

[papillon24]

I didn't see anthing to write after you lest SM

 

[sex-maniac69]

dravis:

OOC:sorry ill change it.

IC:i landed in a fire escape.Then i realized i couldnt leave without spending some time with sara.I went back up and sat n the window sill."hi again," i said startling her....