sr71plt
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It is a gerund clause (or phrase) but why quibble over vocabulary, especially when we can find so many other things to quibble about?
Didn't JBJ give us the non-rule that you put commas where there should be a pause in speech? Personally I protest having a writer tell my where I should have a pause in my speech. Pauses are a unique character of a speaker's presentation.
There are reasons why I don't like leading a sentence with a gerund phrase. At least part of it is that I read my stories aloud to myself and those phrases seem very awkward.
First I wasn't quibbling. I was just saying that's what I know that type of phrase is. Others who have never heard the other term may know it that way also.
Second, is it my guess you don't want to quibble over vocabulary but you do want to quibble over where to put the phrase in the sentence--right after you said one writer shouldn't tell another writer where they should choose to put such things?

I'll stick with my original response to that--it's author choice where it sounds best put. The editor's job is to make sure it's punctuated so that the reader understands the writer's choices.