The CHYOO Review

[Torg]

Prisoner on Tau-Ceti Two
by Fencer

This fairly new story came out of nowhere this spring and became the fastest growing story of the year. In a two short months, it grew to 123 threads. Besides being well-written, it has the added bonus of 3-D rendered Poser images from selected scenes, accessible on raunchyminds.com. What a treat!

The story starts fairly simply in a prison on a distant planet. The main character, Calvo, is a male prisoner with an all-female crew of guards that wear skin-tight body suits as their uniforms. The background is that the guards are from a female-dominated society, and mostly lesbian, at least in upbringing. While in the prison yard, an aerial attack on the compound causes enough confusion for Calvo to escape.

From this modest start, the story branches into a number of enticing storylines, including wilderness survival, captured guards, sneaking aboard a pirate ship, a rough frontier town, and more. The various plots are exciting and more than just a brief nod to get the characters to have sex.

A great aspect of the story is the Sci-Fi details: primitive natives that aren't quite human, weird indigenous plants, high-tech body modifications, and harsh space societies.

I think the broad appeal and excellent writing of this story are the reasons it is has grown so fast. I can only wish for such a successful story of my own.

Rating:

Edit: added banana rating

 

[niceguy2002tim]

Good review, it sounds like this story gets two dicks all the way up! LoL. I might check it out. Thanks for the heads up. The story beginning reminds me of Deus Ex: Invisible War (in some aspects, including the body mods).

-Tim

 

[Bastian]

The reason this story has progressed as far as it has is because Fencer spent so much time cultivating diverse and interesting threads. Honestly, Its a nice change from the constant flow of single thread stories that never seem to go anywhere. The story is what actually prompted me to start writing on CHYOO again.

 

[Torg]

Review: The Choices We Make

The Choices We Make
by daciasdesire

This was the first story I ever wrote threads for, so it holds a special place in my heart, ... well ... lower, really. I've written more threads for it (35) than any other story, with the exception of The Super, which ties at 35 and I edit.

On the surface, it's a pretty simple high school teenaged fantasy, but the wide variety of directions it goes, and the characters and plots all combine for a very satisfying story. Enough plot to make it interesting, and enough sex to keep it exciting. It also has some of the best written threads around. With 274 threads, it's one of the longer stories. I can only find two that are longer: 'Aaralon's Discovery' and 'Weekend in an All-Girls Dorm'.

The story starts with the main character finding a ticket to the Korn concert that night. He has to decide whether to go to the concert or to the school dance. From these simple beginnings, the story branches into taking your sister's best friend to the concert, hooking up at the concert, naughtiness at a pre-dance party, downtown to a strip club, a blues club, sex in a barn, a jock party with strippers, the dance and what happens outside, a surprise visit from Sarah Banks, and more. Many surprises. Some familiar cliches that are nonetheless well-written. Some really great sex scenes.

My favorite characters are Rebecca the next-door neighbor, Katherine from accounting class, Mary the goth chick, Kelli the best friend's cousin, Fiona the sexy woman at the concert, and Trish the sister's best friend.

So, sit down and read it for a half hour. I think you'll like it. You'll probably read it for another two hours.

Rating:

 

[niceguy2002tim]

I couldn't agree more. I believe this is the first story I ever wrote for too. Dacia goes way back with Chyoo. It's too bad she's not around more now days, but we still have her creations. The story is worth a read.

-Tim (niceguy2002tim)

 

[lilguy]

some of the best charcter in that story
more down to earth them most stories but still sexy

 

[Ooohkitty]

for me it was one of the most fun stories to write for
i mean besides my mall story i think i wrote more threads for this one
i loved it and think of coming back to my story chain all the time
we shall see

luv
christy

p.s. thanks for tall the new threads guys

 

[Torg]

i loved it and think of coming back to my story chain all the time

If anything can get you back, let us know. More threads in your stories? Promises of undying lust? First born kitten?

 

[gizmoo69]

If anything can get you back, let us know. More threads in your stories? Promises of undying lust? First born kitten?

Get back, I saw her first!

 

[lilguy]

my little reviews

The Day at Stonewood Mall

http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.cover/907


Pretty good Story. Lot of diffenr option

It manage to be both fun, really sexy, but has a fun and innocence

Lets face it the main charcters does stuff that would get you arrested. But it never comes of really bad. Still like the wicked girl, sense most writer basicly add humor to it

Also in the famle pespective, which is interesting. Female second person perspective at that

As the story went on it appear to be the

HUGESTS MALL EVER!!!!

but it still fun. No real complain

maybe more cum drenching Sex...Sense I am classy like that