The Cat and the Collar

[petemgurk]

Here's my Halloween Contest entry, please take a look, vote and comment in a public manner. Like it, love it, hate it, but rate it! Please, I mean, thank you.

Pete M'Gurk

 

[petemgurk]

sorry, what an idiot

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=333409

forgot to include the goddam link!

 

[christabelll]

I truly loved your story. It was well written, flowed well and drew me right in.

This speaks of an experienced writer. Huzaah! We need more of those....

Good Luck... I would love to read more of what you have!

 

[petemgurk]

I would love to show you, but

I truly loved your story. It was well written, flowed well and drew me right in.

This speaks of an experienced writer. Huzaah! We need more of those....

Good Luck... I would love to read more of what you have!

My remaining submissions seem to be stuck in some kind of limbo. Is it because there are six of them? They were rejected for formatting problems, but I corrected that something like 3 days ago, so...hell, I dunno.

But thanks, Christabelll, I'm glad you liked the story! I do have a 2nd one posted and the link is: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=332953

enjoy!
Pete

 

[christabelll]

If they werent part of the halloween contest then they are probably going to be in limbo a bit longer. When its crunch time it can take upwards of 14 days.... so relax breath easy and go write some more.

and you are welcome

 

[mjl2010]

Interesting story,

I read this one through and through thank you. Not bad at all.

You have an interesting way of doing dialog. No quotes and the tags are different. I found it readable. It didn't take a lot of effort to adjust. But out of curiosity, why do it that way and not the usual?

MJL

 

[GeorgiePorgie12]

Nice story. Different approach but well done.
Looking forward to reading more.

 

[petemgurk]

Interesting story,

I read this one through and through thank you. Not bad at all.

You have an interesting way of doing dialog. No quotes and the tags are different. I found it readable. It didn't take a lot of effort to adjust. But out of curiosity, why do it that way and not the usual?

MJL

Thanks, mjl! I did the dialogue this way as an experiment - the story was being told out loud, and in my mind the quotation marks seemed like an interruption. I asked myself, when you tell a story out loud, do you visualize quotation marks? And the answer came back, no.

It certainly hasn't worked for everybody, but thanks a bunch for reading it, and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

PM'G

 

[petemgurk]

Nice story. Different approach but well done.
Looking forward to reading more.

Thanks, Georgie, click on my name at the top of this post and you'll be able to click on other stories I've posted so far. Thanks a bunch for reading it and I'm glad you liked it.

PM'G